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作者: TheTactical

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a story about a boy and a girl named avon and sara they lived peacefully in a peaceful village one day out of nowhere a massive attack against the village by the nonhumans or what they call them creatures avon and sara survived after witnessing a massacre against his family and people now its his time to take revenge in the name of humanity and to make it clear to all the nonhumans that the humans are the dominant one

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my 2nd best story i have , i actually wanted to continue the warden one but i kinda messed up a bit so i will start over again sometime in future right now i want to focus on this one because its one of my favorite one so enjoy and yeah i will update chapter 2 and 3 later i changed chapter 1 a bit because the story made no sense so yeah anyway enjoy <3 i would love to hear your review

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this chapter has a few grammar mistake i will correct them later because i am working in the new chapter and it will take 2 days as usual so stay tuned and thanks for readying and for the support [img=golden ticket]

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