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my 2nd best story i have , i actually wanted to continue the warden one but i kinda messed up a bit so i will start over again sometime in future right now i want to focus on this one because its one of my favorite one so enjoy and yeah i will update chapter 2 and 3 later i changed chapter 1 a bit because the story made no sense so yeah anyway enjoy <3 i would love to hear your review
this chapter has a few grammar mistake i will correct them later because i am working in the new chapter and it will take 2 days as usual so stay tuned and thanks for readying and for the support [img=golden ticket]
my 2nd best story i have , i actually wanted to continue the warden one but i kinda messed up a bit so i will start over again sometime in future right now i want to focus on this one because its one of my favorite one so enjoy and yeah i will update chapter 2 and 3 later i changed chapter 1 a bit because the story made no sense so yeah anyway enjoy <3 i would love to hear your review
this chapter has a few grammar mistake i will correct them later because i am working in the new chapter and it will take 2 days as usual so stay tuned and thanks for readying and for the support [img=golden ticket]