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A cursed young man is thrusted into the Naruto world a few years before the 3rd Shinobi world war. Armed with nothing but the clothes on his back, intelligence, and superhuman instincts, he'll have to give it his all just to survive.
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[I read till chapter 12] Now, MC is cursed as author said in the synopsis, by bad luck. but main thing, if he was so bad luck, he would have died infant. now, he got transmigrated to naruto world, and doesn't have any knowledge of the world, well good for him as he was mind read by a yamanaka, his every memory was exposed and read like an open book. next, it isn't specified anywhere that MC can use chakra, well IF he is cursed by bad luck, he shouldn't have it, or have it like how Lee had, talentless. Next, the story development hasn't taken place anywhere, just random stuff like talking with kushina and minato, or him talking to the nine tails. His only power seems to be his instincts. 12 chaps and he still doesn't uses chakra. he has bad luck and a will to survive, and somehow, third hokage can feel that, like wtf bro. Now, MC has a dark past because of his curse of bad luck like he was captured for human trafficking and was about to be sold. But that doesn't affects the story one damn bit. I commend the character of the MC, but it's highly unsuitable for this kind of story. there has been little to none world background explanation. There is little development space for the story as considering IF he keeps his bad luck, he won't be able to become powerful at all, and he is already past the basic training age, if by some heavenly stroke of luck(which he shouldn't have) gains some strength, it won't be enough to put a good enough fight. If author continues, there is bound to be contradiction somewhere. And the story seems bland, like there is no excitement to read the next chapter. all in all, a very average story. read if you want, don't if you don't want to.