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Magnus Webb undergoes a tragedy right as he enters the wizarding world. In his quest for revenge he becomes involved in a conspiracy that’s centuries in the making. As if all of this isn’t confusing enough, why is this Dark Lord guy always interfering with his plans?
The story has a slow start and will pick up as it goes on. The 'system' elements aren't heavy here. The content will get mature as the story progresses.
PS: I don't possess the rights to Harry Potter and English isn't my native language.
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The best Harry Potter fanfic. Especially the system is well thought out and is perfect for the world like Harry Potter. And it neither make the characters too Op nor nerfed them..
Pls don't drop this novel, one of the best Harry Potter fan fictions I read in this app. I truly hope that u continue this work. Regarding the novel, it has a good mixture of game elements in it without being overly 'important', and those elements come from his own gift in Divination, the author made a 5 star job in that. The only critic I can make is regarding is thoughts in creating an 'army' /group etc, I don't mind if it is like 10 people or so max, but more than that and I'm gonna start getting annoyed by it, because to me personal strength and growth are the most important thing, but that's just my opinion and I won't stop reading this novel even if the author decides to create an 'army' for our MC
Melhor fanfic de HP que eu li na minha vida, não pare de escrever!! Você tem grande talentos e com certeza continuará surpreendendo aos leitores.
A very well written novel that takes under explored parts of the Harry Potter Universe to tell an engaging story. There are few mistakes and most parts are well explained and keep you reading for more. There is actually a system and game like elements, but fear not, they are not over powering like you see in some other novels (There is a good balance and I think it fits well). I would definitely recommend you give it a try.
This story is well thought out and written. The main character is an original character but not a self insert. The author takes the time to build his world carefully and that is certainly appreciated. The most interesting part of the story is the divination talent of the main character and the introduction of a soft-system. The system offers an advantage to the main character but certainly does not make him overpowered. Overall, I am very satisfied with this Harry Potter fanfic and will continue to read it.
Excellent! thanks for writing this piece of art. ...............................................................................................................................................
Good start , i like the idea, am looking to next chapters and good luck :) ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆
the system is perfect for the Harry Potter world. it's one of the best fanfiction that I have read. I like how the mc is more geared toward a supporting role instead of going down the typical overpowered attack route.
Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there. Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there. Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there. Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there.
Very good novel, i recommend it to anyone whos fan of HP world u will love it. Everythings great but i hope author will not add GODS i would RUIN EVERYTHING TO ME So lets pray![img=recommend]
The best hp Fanfic I have read till now... No op system or Mc.. Well thought character development and world background.... Hope u don't abandon this story...like others
This story in my own opinion is fairly well written, has an enjoyable pace, and is detailed enough to understand background information. Magnus character and personality is refreshing and branches off from the main story, without being too obnoxious. Overall, I cannot wait for the Author to publish the next chapter in this amazing story.
Do not take this review seriously you can even delete it after you're done reading it author( and replying) but I want to ask who's the love interest or if there is going to be a love interest Will it be Harem or no harem(I don't really care either way just want to know)
I hope the author returns to continue this novel, it’s one of the best fan fictions on this site and a brilliant standalone book in its own right. Wonderful characters, great development, huge potential for seeing more of the wizard if world and we’re now getting into the seriously interesting parts of the mc’s development. Please continue the story, author
This is a great novel, even with minimal knowledge of the potter-verse it’s still an outstanding experience ce to read it. I thoroughly enjoyed the development of the mc, in particular the early chapters where he is introduced and his situation begins to play out. I initially thought the system, when it was introduced, would take away from the novel however it proved to be a very,ow level of impact to how the story progresses and the mc isn’t given a cheat through a system like a lot of other novels which keeps this story engaging and fun. Really hope the author continues to write this story as we’re into the early stages of the philosophers sfo e and I really want to see how the story progresses
This story has captivated from the start. The pace is awesome, there's no character bashing (luckily, as bashing characters isn't something that is easy to do) - overall, the fic is great! I'm quite eager to see how things will end up. Such a pity the author hasn't updated any chapter in month 😔
One of the best Harry Potter Stories. I hope the Author returns because his work is very good. i had a lot of fun reading it. His own Unique story fits into Canon.
I'm still in chapter 10 but this story is one of the best in Harry Potter. The MC is smart but I want to know Who is the love interest in this story? ----------------
At chapter 21. This novel is toooooo slow pace for me - even if there were mentioning of the start being slow pace. There is nothing that’s really captivating, wowing or comical to keep the readers attention of wanting more. It’s really vanilla.
A really good story so far a couple of chapters out so far for a good binge read. The system is thankfully not abuse and overbearing with stats that require their own story page like so many other stories that us the system. Flaws so far is the lack of never ending chapters. :D