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I am a player in the world of jujutsu Kaisen watch my journey to the top of the world and put my name into the heavens.
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I tried...I really tried but this book just drives me crazy...and the Beginning was horrible...Better luck next time i guess...
the story is good but nothing mind blowing. There are 3 main problems keeping it from perfection 1) the status is absolute mess, like sometimes its lower or higher than before 2) author doesnt go back to fix mistakes even when somebody point them out 3) MC makes illogical decisions which author states are for future plot
trash absolutely trash, the gramma the stupidity the dumb excuses... just terrible, trash novel. But i recommend it to low IQ readers. (I hope you don't delete reviews)
The MC is a moron, simple as that. Author tries to make the MC seem more human by making him do stupid decisions and seem afraid but all that amounts to is making the MC look like an absolute moron. He doesn’t fully utilize all the benefits from the system and is slow to pick up on things. An example of this would be that MC completely ignored the daily quest during the first day and faced the penalty, after which instead of studying how the system truly worked, he just spammed status recovery as a reward just in case he would face the penalty again. Which he of course didn’t since he completed the daily quests.
The story all together isn't that great but it definitely good for time pass and in last chapter's i see author making progression in writing's so keep it up
Telling everyone about your secret that bad but player system allowed Gojo a non player to enter a dungeon of player that is one of the biggest system hole I've ever seen. This system has zero security. I won't be surprised if it get stolen. MC is an idiot. Novel is not good. Infact with telling his every secrets novel did manage to subvert expectation (O' how I loathe this term) in negative way. Usual thing happens when writer use it. By spelling his guts only it only mages to make reader break immersion. Writers a piece of advice when MC have secret something otherworldly relative to the verse, that secret is bond between reader and MC, it's like monogamous relationship so other then MC and reader no one is welcomed. Another thing, what is with your system's gold number is it missing a zero at the end or just didn't bother.
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The mc is an idiot it is so bad that i had to rage quit reading it. He has no common sense like who chooses status recovery instead of stat points
Lê até o capítulo 6 não gostei muito, não tem nada de interessante ou que te faça ter vontade de continuar a história, parece até fic chinesa
summary ; Take the solo leveling main character, put him in the jjk universe. Some of the conversations are very simple and make you leave the novel like me, around the 30th chapter.
The story idea and the grammar were excellent and I couldn't find any mistakes in that. The problem with this fanfic is the fact the author simply posts chapters without checking them first, many times there are discrepancies in the chapters. Sometimes his agility is 24 but in the next chapter it only drops to 20. The previous chapter the MC says he's going to go right and then suddenly the next chapter he goes left, without any explanation... This is way too disrespectful on the author part!
I really tried but this story is driving me crazy, the beginning sucks, the author wanted to be inspired by solo leveling but screwed up , JJK's power system is perfect and adding another only ruins it, in short good idea bad layout
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it's an amazing story.... I hope you can continue doing the good work, have my power stones..................................................................
it’s a good concept but come on man, why you gotta have the MC use Mana in JJK world? why do you think people love jjk? the power system is good!! and you just introduced something different on an already established power system. heck, even Naruto fanfics that has system or the mc is a gamer will have the mc use chakra!