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Douluo Dalu: The Abandoned Child

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作者: Zentruz

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A soul from our world reincarnates in the Douluo Continent. However, he soon learns what it feels like to be abandoned and left to die by those who gave birth to him. From that moment on, he vows to get revenge on his parents.

Excerpt of the book:

Uncle Xin clapped me on the shoulder, his grin wide and genuine. “A 6-year-old Spirit King. You’re a monster, Bei.”

Grandpa’s expression softened, a rare moment of sentimentality crossing his face. “Our family’s rise begins with you,” he said.


English is not my first language, and this is my first Fanfic, so please be patient. Any recommendations are welcome.

I don't own Douluo Dalu (Soul Land).

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Ansh_Sahni

I like it so far even if it is machine genrated language it has all the things i like fast growing mc and op from the start and an evil mc who does not even think for a second before killing. And the best part is that he does not even hide his strength in front of others

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Rak
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bro became level 54 before age 7 .within a year of awakening . i can't anymore

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IbzTank

can't wait to see his revenge and the impact he has on the main story line 👀

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MercenaryRollen

more please 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Sultan_Iskakov

Интересно история но очень быстрое повышение силы расстраивает А так хорошо и интересно ¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Для лёгкого чтения подойдёт

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Yuhanathan

Magnificent. This word sums up everything, context, development, writing, characters and especially a badass protagonist, all of which together with the Doulou world, made one of the best Doulou stories of Webnovel (in my opinion). Author, please continue with the story, I sincerely ask. Thank you for your hard work, author.

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Idlawyl
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Mid at best. Writing is fine but plot development is forced, things happen for seemingly no reason, like a group of peak soul king bandits attacking a little kid just to introduce Liu erlong. No one questions this kid despite having all the reason too. The interactions between the Mc and side characters is super cringe. Can’t say I’m a big fan but I’m sure it’s just right for some people.q

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Daoist011970

Awesome read, fast flowing story but not to fast with op mc who doesn’t follow tang san and has a goal other than simply becoming a god or making a harem, this is very refreshing. There is also, as of yet, no force romance just because author liked one of the oc so that is a big + for me. I recommend, it’s a good read 👍

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Dennis_Tanton

Can’t wait for your main character to meet his father and mother and how they will interact

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Joao_Pedro_5293

Muito bom!!!! Continua assim, definitivamente um dos melhores livros que já li, adorei espero que o MC só tenha um interesse amoroso (não gosto de harém) nada pessoal, obg por nós trazer esta história autor

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I_Null_I

a question do i need to know the original story to read it? ( the . last time I read the manhua was like 3.5 years ago and I hardly remember the plot )

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Vicky_Yun

author Is this your own fanfriction, if not row name

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Unhonored

A good fanfic, I normally like fast paced fanfic's but for my taste it is too fast. I wont read it anymore after 30th something chapter but if you like fast paced, OP mc almost from the start here is your place

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Shellfish_1024

Great read! Some elements that I avoid like an edgy mc but in this story I gave it a chance and it turned out good.

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Aarav_Gaur

Very good story line, and the language is also perfectly fine even after using AI. I really hope that you continue this book. Looking forward for next chapters

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Wxcellent story, highly recommend it. MI

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Kilaske

Other than the ridiculous speed of cultivating this fanfic is actually great. The least this could have is 3-4, but definitely not 2 and below. Can't wait for MC to get revenge on his biological parents.

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卷 1

  1. 1
    Chapter 1: Birth and Abandonment 2 months ago
  2. 2
    Chapter 2: The Forest and Dangers 2 months ago
  3. 3
    Chapter 3: Dugu Bo's Decision 2 months ago
  4. 4
    Chapter 4: A New Home 2 months ago
  5. 5
    Chapter 5: A Child’s Resolve 2 months ago
  6. 6
    Chapter 6: Preparing for the Martial Soul Awakening 2 months ago
  7. 7
    Chapter 7: Awakening: Twin Martial Souls 2 months ago
  8. 8
    Chapter 8: Soul Power 2 months ago
  9. 9
    Chapter 9: Whale Rubber 2 months ago
  10. 10
    Chapter 10: Ice and Fire Yin Yang Well 2 months ago
  11. 11
    Chapter 11: Consuming the Whale Rubber 2 months ago
  12. 12
    Chapter 12: 2,000-Year-Old Man Faced Demon Spider 2 months ago
  13. 13
    Chapter 13: First Fight 2 months ago
  14. 14
    Chapter 14: First Soul Ring 2 months ago
  15. 15
    Chapter 15: External Spirit Bone 2 months ago
  16. 16
    Chapter 16: Second Soul Ring 2 months ago
  17. 17
    Chapter 17: Third Soul Ring 2 months ago
  18. 18
    Chapter 18: Many Surprises 2 months ago
  19. 19
    Chapter 19: Fourth Soul Ring 2 months ago
  20. 20
    Chapter 20: Consuming Immortal Herbs 2 months ago
  21. 21
    Chapter 21: Dugu Xin's POV 2 months ago
  22. 22
    Chapter 22: Dragon Slaying Saber 2 months ago
  23. 23
    Chapter 23: Healing Father and Son 2 months ago
  24. 24
    Chapter 24: Soul Core 2 months ago
  25. 25
    Chapter 25: Dragon Spirit Grass 2 months ago
  26. 26
    Chapter 26: Titled Douluo 2 months ago
  27. 27
    Chapter 27: Looking for Soul Beasts 2 months ago
  28. 28
    Chapter 28: 50,000-Year-Old Pit Demon Spider Emperor 2 months ago
  29. 29
    Chapter 29: Evolutions 2 months ago
  30. 30
    Chapter 30: Back Home 2 months ago
  31. 31
    Chapter 31: Future Plans 2 months ago
  32. 32
    Chapter 32: Life at Home 2 months ago
  33. 33
    Chapter 33: Suotuo City 2 months ago
  34. 34
    Chapter 34: Killing Spiders 2 months ago
  35. 35
    Chapter 35: Robbers 2 months ago
  36. 36
    Chapter 36: Liu Erlong 2 months ago
  37. 37
    Chapter 37: Crazy Lady and Crazy Kid 2 months ago
  38. 38
    Chapter 38: Future Academy 2 months ago
  39. 39
    Chapter 39: Catching Up After 2 Years 2 months ago
  40. 40
    Chapter 40: Battle Preparations 2 months ago
  41. 41
    Chapter 41: 80,000-Year-Old Mutated Spider Emperor 2 months ago
  42. 42
    Chapter 42: Life or Death Situation 2 months ago
  43. 43
    Chapter 43: Spirit Emperor 2 months ago
  44. 44
    Chapter 44: 80,000-Year Skull Bone 2 months ago
  45. 45
    Chapter 45: 1 Year Later 1 months ago
  46. 46
    Chapter 46: Dugu Yan 1 months ago
  47. 47
    Chapter 47: Moving Plans 1 months ago
  48. 48
    Chapter 48: Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Clan 1 months ago
  49. 49
    Chapter 49: Fighting Liu Erlong 1 months ago
  50. 50
    Chapter 50: Dugu Bo vs Yu Yuanzhen 1 months ago
  51. 51
    Chapter 51: Yu Luomian 1 months ago
  52. 52
    Chapter 52: Arriving at The Academy 1 months ago
  53. 53
    Chapter 53: More Training 1 months ago
  54. 54
    Chapter 54: Devouring Domain 1 months ago
  55. 55
    Chapter 55: Day Off (Part 1) 1 months ago
  56. 56
    Chapter 56: Day Off (Part 2) 1 months ago
  57. 57
    Chapter 57: Leaving Again 1 months ago
  58. 58
    Chapter 58: Slaughter City 1 months ago
  59. 59
    Chapter 59: Dread Knight 1 months ago
  60. 60
    Chapter 60: Hell Slaughter Arena 1 months ago
  61. 61
    Chapter 61: First Battle in the Arena 1 months ago
  62. 62
    Chapter 62: Match after Match (Part 1) 1 months ago
  63. 63
    Chapter 63: Match after Match (Part 2) 1 months ago
  64. 64
    Chapter 64: Slaughter King 1 months ago
  65. 65
    Chapter 65: Hell Road (Part 1) 1 months ago
  66. 66
    Chapter 66: Hell Road (Part 2) 1 months ago
  67. 67
    Chapter 67: Pain 1 months ago
  68. 68
    Chapter 68: New Domain 1 months ago
  69. 69
    Chapter 69: Who Died? 1 months ago
  70. 70
    Chapter 70: Catching Up 1 months ago
  71. 71
    Chapter 71: Fighting Liu Erlong and Dugu Xin 1 months ago
  72. 72
    Chapter 72: Looking for a Blacksmith 1 months ago
  73. 73
    Chapter 73: Tang Hao 1 months ago
  74. 74
    Chapter 74: Negotiations (Part 1) 1 months ago
  75. 75
    Chapter 75: Negotiations (Part 2) 1 months ago
  76. 76
    Chapter 76: The Answer 1 months ago
  77. 77
    Chapter 77: Asura Academy 1 months ago
  78. 78
    Chapter 78: Secret Technique 1 months ago
  79. 79
    Chapter 79: Yearning Heartbroken Red 1 months ago
  80. 80
    Chapter 80: New Teacher 1 months ago
  81. 81
    Chapter 81: Leaving to Vast Sea City 1 months ago
  82. 82
    Chapter 82: Looking for the Crew 1 months ago
  83. 83
    Chapter 83: The Madam 1 months ago
  84. 84
    Chapter 84: The Black Queen 1 months ago
  85. 85
    Chapter 85: Proper Introductions 1 months ago
  86. 86
    Chapter 86: Life at the Sea 1 months ago
  87. 87
    Chapter 87: Confessions 1 months ago
  88. 88
    Chapter 88: The Battle to Come 28 days ago
  89. 89
    Chapter 89: Killing Orcas 13 days ago
  90. 90
    Chapter 90: Spirit Fusion 13 days ago
  91. 91
    Chapter 91: Asura Hell 13 days ago
  92. 92
    Chapter 92: 100,000-year Eight Spider Lances 13 days ago
  93. 93
    Chapter 93: Soul Shock 11 days ago
  94. 94
    Chapter 94: Spirit Saint 10 days ago
  95. 95
    Chapter 95: Unanswered Questions 10 days ago
  96. 96
    Chapter 96: A Toast to the Fallen 9 days ago
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