After the Last Dawn - TWD

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Keiou_Owlo

Author here with the usual shameless 5 stars. I'm a new author who loves reading and writing stories, please let me know if you have any suggestions, advice or questions.

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TDWSF

There aren't a lot of good TWD fanfics and this is very good.Mc is not an idiot so far and he thinks and does logical things.Survival being his first priority is smart and as you know there aren't a lot of MC's that are smart.Plase keep up the good work.Thanks a lot man.

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Ostiel

Good start to the story, can't wait to read the rest

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SAURON_

Alright everyone this is just a review to inform everyone mc apparently has captain america super soldier from the movies which is honestly underwhelming if author wanted he should have gone with miraku or deathstroke's serum which starts off weak then over time gets stronger because of minor adaptation which would work well for a early nerf also captain america in movies was shown to warm up with 1.1 ton and easily rip off doors from cars or even pull a helicopter which is a maximum of 6 tons pulling away including taking a gunshot and 2 blast from red skulls men and at the end of the movie was fully healed also it was shown captain america could also run at a comfortable speed of 26 mph which is faster than a sprinting Usain bolt and captain americas top speed was roughly 60 mph while wearing weighted gear against thanos army.

продолжай в том же духе,очень круто!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Erick_Espinoza

MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Erick_Espinoza

GOTYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

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Whadyamean

Average TWD fic that dosen’t really have anything good going for it and whenever it tries to branch out it ends up being subpar.

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Cyclop_Tempest

please keep writing. This is great ☆☆☆☆☆!!!

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CrackerCharlotte

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Wizened

Great story so far I love the fact that I can actually understand the concept behind the character and the grammar is top notch I would love if the update stability/scheduhe was worked out but hey this is a lovely story already so I’m just excited to see where it goes…

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C_M_97

Realmente ótimo. As cenas são sempre bem detalhadas o que é ótimo para entender o que está acontecendo. Gosto do MC, e ele tem um bom plano até agora.

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Erick_Espinoza

GOTYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

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Mellenshot

Off to a good start try to stick with it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Daoistvezmlo

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Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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CrackerCharlotte

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Melshan

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TeddyReus

Really good start maybe more story and books you did say photographic memory so books or libary[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Rafael_Oliveira_6204

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