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I actually prefer one of the series' original characters, Rosalie, Leah or Alice.

In my mind, Luke is a guy who would burn the world down for the people he loves.

Great chapter! Just to let you know, you called Mikoto Mito twice. Just to let you know.

What if he has a third Aura? He inherited his parents', but he could have his own. Orange aura. Elemental manipulation. Just an idea.

Is it a good idea to bring Tony into this? If HYDRA finds out, they will hunt him down too.

I suggest Fleur Delacour. She is the Beauxbatons champion. Which suggests that she is the best witch in her school, the smartest and the strongest. Furthermore, she is a very strong and companionable woman. We see this when Bill's face is full of scars, and even with Ginny, Hermione and Mrs. Weasley talking bad about her, she never gives up and stays with the one she loves. Because of Veela's Charm, she didn't know who really liked her or not, in addition to the constant isolation she must suffer from other girls, as was portrayed with the aforementioned three. Many boys and men would only like to approach her out of physical interest. She could have become cold and arrogant, but she is kind. That's why she's strong. For me she is perfect. She was only wronged in the films and books, she should have had the best classification of the triwizard champions, in the first test and if one of the judges wasn't so robbed. And she is beautiful. So, these are some of my justifications. (Fleur Delacour: Lili Reinhart)

Great chapter! But, I have constructive criticism. It's not really a criticism, it's more of a tip. When you write with upper and lower case letters, it is impossible to translate. Many people who read may not know English. Use only bold letters. Great story.

Great chapter! Looking forward to more.

He could very well teach Chidori to Mikoto, since she has the Sharingan.

I don't really mind multiple characters getting powers, as long as Peter is still stronger than them. Like, it would be interesting to see a chapter in which Peter can fight in training against the new 3 heroes and still win. Oh! And the Sinister Six is ​​only cool when it's 6 vs 1. It shows that it takes 6 villains to take down Spider-Man. This is the premise of the group of villains.

I thought it was on purpose! Like, it matches the title of the story.

Bio electricity please.

Interesting theory or fact?

This guy is crazyy!

I think as the son of Hades, he can see very well in dark places.