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From what I understand, Cell Max will have an ability similar to that of Super Android 17 from Dragon Ball GT, which is to absorb any energy, but I have a few more questions, for example, how will it absorb beings? cell was able to do this through the tip of his tail which was a needle but cell max's tail is a mass, in addition cell max is apparently a 100% robotic creation not a bio-android like the original cell so he doesn't have some abilities biological aspects of the cell such as regeneration, so I suggest that in addition to training to master his power he also goes after mechanical equipment to improve himself, for example since you are making this fanfiction a kind of AU, so you could add elements of things like GT, heroes and movies, in the movie about the return of the cooler there was a chip that gave an incredible increase in power to the cooler and other abilities such as energy absorption and self-repair, I know that the energy absorption was said to be cell max has it but in the film it was shown that one of its weaknesses is the lack of regeneration in addition to the weak point in the head, I hope cell max solves these problems
haven't read this please post your own review of your work so that we can comment below there if we have questions without messing up your score/rating and then I guess delete this.......... pairing/romance?
You can use this to ask questions as a reader requested 😁. I remind everyone that the story will have different povs. Like Dragon Ball Kakumei.
I won't give spoilers, the number of stars speaks for itself. ................... ........................ ............. .................................. ................... .......... ..................... ................
Muy buena historia, da algo de pena verlos caer a manos de cell max pero es una historia muy buena . aaaaaaaaaaaa a a a a a a a. A a a a a a. A a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a. A a a a a. A a a a a a. A a a a. A a a. A a a a
ネタバレを明かす From what I understand, Cell Max will have an ability similar to that of Super Android 17 from Dragon Ball GT, which is to absorb any energy, but I have a few more questions, for example, how will it absorb beings? cell was able to do this through the tip of his tail which was a needle but cell max's tail is a mass, in addition cell max is apparently a 100% robotic creation not a bio-android like the original cell so he doesn't have some abilities biological aspects of the cell such as regeneration, so I suggest that in addition to training to master his power he also goes after mechanical equipment to improve himself, for example since you are making this fanfiction a kind of AU, so you could add elements of things like GT, heroes and movies, in the movie about the return of the cooler there was a chip that gave an incredible increase in power to the cooler and other abilities such as energy absorption and self-repair, I know that the energy absorption was said to be cell max has it but in the film it was shown that one of its weaknesses is the lack of regeneration in addition to the weak point in the head, I hope cell max solves these problems
haven't read this please post your own review of your work so that we can comment below there if we have questions without messing up your score/rating and then I guess delete this.......... pairing/romance?
You can use this to ask questions as a reader requested 😁. I remind everyone that the story will have different povs. Like Dragon Ball Kakumei.