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Amazing fanfic! Good storytelling and has good potential 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
This is not another translation of the Chinese brother, and that’s already good :) The story is interesting, develops smoothly, the arc with slavery is perhaps a little drawn out and repetition of the same information is often used, but this is not critical. The work is worthy and has potential, so 5 stars in total:)
overall it's good.. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story itself is great. It’s development and the MC’s character are progressing well. It feel unique and, overall, it’s an entertaining read. My only ick (not a major one and very personal one) is the overly descriptive writing style. I’m not sure if it’s due to potentially using GPT to assist in writing (or translating) the chapters or maybe that’s just how the author writes his thing. It results in moments where the author repeats himself when describing the MC’s thought-process or feelings and the cause of them at that moments in time in some of the earlier chapters. Not often though, but they are present. Again, it’s not a big deal and totally my opinion, but just sayin’. In conclusion, a good read.
awsemoe to the atmost rate i like the story progress till now ,,every chapter excits me more and more
you should make the changes(when mc is a slave) arc longer it fells rushed
if your looking for a fic with an epic tale being told then this is the one for you, it takes you on a journey with the protagonist, though pain and suffering, but aslo strangh, vengeance, and an unwavering will, you will be glued to it until you have to wait for more chapters
Mcs fruit needs to be more explained it can’t just be a “dragon” fruit. And the pocket dimension ability just doesn’t fit with a zoan fruit
Primero para esta aventura. Depósito la fe con un granito de arena (y para motivarte a que sigas esta magnifica obra muy poco vista en estas páginas) muy buen comienzo, espero verla terminada. No te desmotives en el tema de personas porque vendrán a su debido tiempo. Nada más que decir nos vemos y ojala la obra llegue lejos. Ánimos
Author here with the usual shameless 5 stars. I'm a new author who loves reading and writing stories, please let me know if you have any suggestions, advice or questions.
im not really into harem stories, and it applies here too, but the revenge throughout the story was funny, fun to read. it basically is a revenge story, for those wondering.
Amazing fanfic! Good storytelling and has good potential 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
This is not another translation of the Chinese brother, and that’s already good :) The story is interesting, develops smoothly, the arc with slavery is perhaps a little drawn out and repetition of the same information is often used, but this is not critical. The work is worthy and has potential, so 5 stars in total:)
overall it's good.. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story itself is great. It’s development and the MC’s character are progressing well. It feel unique and, overall, it’s an entertaining read. My only ick (not a major one and very personal one) is the overly descriptive writing style. I’m not sure if it’s due to potentially using GPT to assist in writing (or translating) the chapters or maybe that’s just how the author writes his thing. It results in moments where the author repeats himself when describing the MC’s thought-process or feelings and the cause of them at that moments in time in some of the earlier chapters. Not often though, but they are present. Again, it’s not a big deal and totally my opinion, but just sayin’. In conclusion, a good read.
awsemoe to the atmost rate i like the story progress till now ,,every chapter excits me more and more
you should make the changes(when mc is a slave) arc longer it fells rushed
if your looking for a fic with an epic tale being told then this is the one for you, it takes you on a journey with the protagonist, though pain and suffering, but aslo strangh, vengeance, and an unwavering will, you will be glued to it until you have to wait for more chapters
Mcs fruit needs to be more explained it can’t just be a “dragon” fruit. And the pocket dimension ability just doesn’t fit with a zoan fruit
Primero para esta aventura. Depósito la fe con un granito de arena (y para motivarte a que sigas esta magnifica obra muy poco vista en estas páginas) muy buen comienzo, espero verla terminada. No te desmotives en el tema de personas porque vendrán a su debido tiempo. Nada más que decir nos vemos y ojala la obra llegue lejos. Ánimos
Author here with the usual shameless 5 stars. I'm a new author who loves reading and writing stories, please let me know if you have any suggestions, advice or questions.
im not really into harem stories, and it applies here too, but the revenge throughout the story was funny, fun to read. it basically is a revenge story, for those wondering.