Ruzzzy

I like this concept, BUT.. Here is for the 45 chapters we have a 0 plot; 0 world building; 0 romance (what about harem...).. MC just visits dungeons throughout the entire plot and.. that is all. Like this novel is Dungeon master: Awakening

The story is interesting and I like it. The title of the story is perfect, Adaptation, it is not only about the hero's abilities, but also his personality. The hero develops as the story progresses and becomes more humane, although at first he is like a robot who calculating everything and plans without feelings. His past is also gradually revealed, which explains his character. Although at first I was tired of his manipulating character, as the story progressed, I realized that the hero was also adapting to his new life. The only thing is, I hope his development as a person will not be too drawn out, judging by the current pace of the story it will end somewhere in 300 chapters, and it would be too harsh if his moment of catharsis comes only at the end

1. Penelope's character. In one chapter she is mentioned as the cold caretaker of the orphanage, whom he brainwashed into thinking he was new, after a couple of chapters she is a supporter of the main character who brings him food to his underground hideout and gives him advice, and after another chapter she is fanatically devoted to him. I don't fcking understand why 2. Underground shelter. Fuck will understand how he built it in a couple of days 3. How did he suddenly grow up in Chapter 14? The novel also does not describe any of the character's appearance or their age, nothing at all. Something just happens without logic

Until chapter 10 it was normal, although I didn’t understand what Homelander had to do with it at all, given his abilities it’s as if the author is trying to attract attention with this name, and then sends readers to hell, but from chapter 10 outright nonsense begins and it became completely unclear what was happening and the story began to turn into a bunch of weird things

Personally, I don’t like it.. Starting from the first chapter, the feeling of cringe does not leave you when reading, you continue in the hope of improvement, and you catch even more cringe..

A good story with great potential and the hero's abilities are not hackneyed. In general, unfortunately, for some reason, almost no one writes fan fiction about green lanterns, although the potential is huge.. For this, special respect to the author, and I hope that he doesn’t stop writing, I saw this fanfic only because of the last chapter, which was a few months later :)

The story becomes something with a shit smel as soon as the world of Naruto opens.. For the first 2-3 chapters, the main character trains with weapons with the calculation: “I live in a dangerous world, money doesn’t make sense here, when someone can kill you in a bunker, so you have to try to become stronger in another world", but then, in another world, it turns into a merchant simulator, where he receives nothing, once again NOTHING, except making a money profit, while trading in the fucking world of ninjas during a fucking war, in a world where he can still be killed simpler, and without power he plans to build factories there and take over the economy... fuck off logic