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Idle Money System

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作者: APHELIOUS

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概要

A young man named Alexander Ashbourne is looking for a job to support his studies. He applies to work as a waiter at a restaurant. The next day on his 18th birthday, a system appears that generates money simply by idling. This system also allows him to trade with beings from other worlds or even visit their realms. Watch as Alexander rises to fame across all the realms.

[DeathlessOne: I just spotted this mortal, 'AlexanderTheGrate,' trying to trade his drink called Mountain Dew. I'm thinking of offering my Flame Sword for it.]

[ShadowEternal: Wait, what’s a Mountain Dew?]

[TimelessWanderer: Are you seriously considering trading your Emperor-grade sword for a mere drink?]

[DeathlessOne: It’s not just any drink. The taste is out of this world, It's even better than the heavenly wine.]

[ShadowEternal: {...}]
[TimelessWanderer: {...}]
[Everyone in the chat: {...}]

[RichNigga: You know what, I’m in. I’ll trade my Gold Deluxe Armor just to see if this Mountain Dew is worth all the hype.]

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    APHELIOUS

    Author here Rating this book 5 stars cause its my books, If any question regarding this Novel. Just comment here.

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    Alanray64

    Disappointing overall. Reads like a quick wish fulfilment novel with not much thought added. To many grammar and mistakes noted and apparently even when pointed out they are not corrected. The early chapter lock appears to be a quick cash grab so that put me off almost immediately. Still I did try to give this a fair go but I couldn’t get into it, I felt it just seemed to fanciful to even resonate in some manner with me. Overall I can see this struggling to make any fanciful impacts.

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    TotallyAChild

    Would have been understandable if the main character was chinese for his behaviour but he's not, he's filipino. and the story literally just makes philippines be wallmart china which made this unbearable to read

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    Bmarsh8545

    The huge amount of mistakes since chapter one as if the author doesn’t know what the word proofread means, added to the amount of free chapters/price of chapters after is a slap in the face.

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    Casa_Nova_8235

    This is my first time rating a story on this app. I just want to say that I like this story. Aside from the very minor errors in typing/grammar, nothing to criticize, at least from my perspective. I don't like Harem though, and I'm not sure if this is a harem one, but I'm seeing some signs. I would still continue reading this for the plot huehue

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    BIGINZOXx9

    this novel is very good not every time you see a peaceful novel that goes smoothly I just hope the author does not drop it.

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    tiko_tiko

    Great Novel, As an Author my self who writes a novel where MC gets free money I can say the novel is very good.

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    UncontractedAuthor

    It’s a well written story with well crafted characters and a good plot. I love it. Keep it up

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    Mela7
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    Very good but I'm struggling with your tenses but over all it's good

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    LoliCosmos

    bro only 16 free chaps? why? .

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    Buvi_Sailor

    As much as I like the plot, there are some things to taken care of. Grammar, phrases and punctuations. Other than that pretty good plot and characters.

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    Nehemiah_Ampong

    Keep up the good work author. Your story is great and I believe it has much potential

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    卷 1

    1. 1
      Chapter 1 The Beginning [Re-edit] 4 months ago
    2. 2
      Chapter 2 I'm Rich [Re-edit] 4 months ago
    3. 3
      Chapter 3 [Re-edited] 4 months ago
    4. 4
      Chapter 4 A Happy Cooperation 4 months ago
    5. 5
      Chapter 5 Meeting A Friend [Re-Edited] 4 months ago
    6. 6
      Chapter 6 First Day at Work [Re-edited] 4 months ago
    7. 7
      Chapter 7 First Day at Work 2 4 months ago
    8. 8
      Chapter 8 First Day of Work 3 [Re-edit] 4 months ago
    9. 9
      Chapter 9 One Sided Fight 5 v 1 4 months ago
    10. 10
      Chapter 10 Invited To a Dinner 4 months ago
    11. 11
      Chapter 11 Buying a Technique 4 months ago
    12. 12
      Chapter 12 [No Title] 4 months ago
    13. 13
      Chapter 13 Getting Arrested 4 months ago
    14. 14
      Chapter 14 What's His Background? 4 months ago
    15. 15
      Chapter 15 What's his Background 2? 4 months ago
    16. 16
      Chapter 16 Unique Skill 4 months ago
    17. 17
      Chapter 17 Challenge 4 months ago
    18. 18
      Chapter 18 World of Magic and Swords 4 months ago
    19. 19
      Chapter 19 World of Magic and Swords 2 4 months ago
    20. 20
      Chapter 20 Completing the Mission 4 months ago
    21. 21
      Chapter 21 Completing the Mission 2 4 months ago
    22. 22
      Chapter 22 Mission Complete 4 months ago
    23. 23
      Chapter 23 A luxurious Villa? 4 months ago
    24. 24
      Chapter 24 Trouble is Cumming! 4 months ago
    25. 25
      Chapter 25 Meeting Another Beauty 3 months ago
    26. 26
      Chapter 26 A Grand Tour 3 months ago
    27. 27
      Chapter 27 Call to Play 3 months ago
    28. 28
      Chapter 28 You're Playing With Fire 3 months ago
    29. 29
      Chapter 29 Game on 3 months ago
    30. 30
      Chapter 30 Consider this a gift 3 months ago
    31. 31
      Chapter 31 Crush Since Elementary 3 months ago
    32. 32
      Chapter 32 Is he your boyfriend? 3 months ago
    33. 33
      Chapter 33 Being deaf can actually be a gift 3 months ago
    34. 34
      Chapter 34 Fate is really unpredictable? 3 months ago
    35. 35
      Chapter 35 It's time 3 months ago
    36. 36
      Chapter 36 Otherworld 3 months ago
    37. 37
      Chapter 37 Unlocking something new 3 months ago
    38. 38
      Chapter 38 The figth that lasted until tomorrow 3 months ago
    39. 39
      Chapter 39 Passive investment 3 months ago
    40. 40
      Chapter 40 Knowledge about the world. 3 months ago
    41. 41
      Chapter 41 In another world, from the otherworld 3 months ago
    42. 42
      Chapter 42 Where the heck am I 3 months ago
    43. 43
      Chapter 43 Crimson Overlord 3 months ago
    44. 44
      Chapter 44 You did not see that coming didn't you? 3 months ago
    45. 45
      Chapter 45 Infernal Fury 3 months ago
    46. 46
      This is supposed to be a draft, Dont pay this chapter 3 months ago
    47. 47
      Chapter 46 The Beast in the road 3 months ago
    48. 48
      Chapter 47 Bear vs Man 3 months ago
    49. 49
      Chapter 48 Werebear Vs Man Actually!! 3 months ago
    50. 50
      Chapter 49 Finally Arrived 3 months ago
    51. 51
      Chapter 50 Suspicious 3 months ago
    52. 52
      chapter 51 Anya's Dark Past 3 months ago
    53. 53
      Chaoter 52 Eating a good meal 3 months ago
    54. 54
      Chapter 53 The Real Danger 3 months ago
    55. 55
      Chapter 54 Beast Attacks 3 months ago
    56. 56
      Chapter 55 3 months ago
    57. 57
      Chapter 56 3 months ago
    58. 58
      Chapter 57 3 months ago
    59. 59
      Chapter 58 3 months ago
    60. 60
      Chapter 59 3 months ago
    61. 61
      Chapter 60 3 months ago
    62. 62
      Chapter 61 3 months ago
    63. 63
      Chapter 62 3 months ago
    64. 64
      Chapter 63 3 months ago
    65. 65
      Chapter 64 3 months ago
    66. 66
      Chapter 65 3 months ago
    67. 67
      Chapter 66 [Editing Done] 3 months ago
    68. 68
      Chapter 67 2 months ago
    69. 69
      Chapter 68 2 months ago
    70. 70
      Chapter 69 2 months ago
    71. 71
      Chapter 70 2 months ago
    72. 72
      Chapter 71 2 months ago
    73. 73
      Chapter 72 2 months ago
    74. 74
      Chapter 73 2 months ago
    75. 75
      Chapter 74 [Warning 18+] 2 months ago
    76. 76
      Chapter 75 Mission Complete 2 months ago
    77. 77
      Chapter 76 2 months ago
    78. 78
      Chapter 77 2 months ago
    79. 79
      Chapter 78 Karma is real 1 2 months ago
    80. 80
      Chapter 79 Karma is real 2 2 months ago
    81. 81
      Chapter 80 Harvest? 2 months ago
    82. 82
      Chapter 81 2 months ago
    83. 83
      Chapter 82 Going Back! 2 months ago
    84. 84
      Chapter 83 2 months ago
    85. 85
      Chapter 84 2 months ago
    86. 86
      Chapter 85 2 months ago
    87. 87
      Chapter 86 2 months ago
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      Chapter 87 2 months ago
    89. 89
      Chapter 88 2 months ago
    90. 90
      Chapter 89 2 months ago
    91. 91
      Chapter 90 Viper Ronin 2 months ago
    92. 92
      Chapter 91 Grandmaster [Edited] 2 months ago
    93. 93
      Chapter 92 Kidnapped [Edited] 2 months ago
    94. 94
      Chapter 93 [Edited] 2 months ago
    95. 95
      Chapter 94 [Edited] 2 months ago
    96. 96
      Chapter 95 2 months ago
    97. 97
      Chapter 96 [Edited] 2 months ago
    98. 98
      Chapter 97 The call 1 months ago
    99. 99
      Chapter 99 Levels for Cultivation 1 months ago
    100. 100
      Chapter 100 Power 1 months ago
    101. 101
      Chapter 101 1 months ago
    102. 102
      Chapter 102 1 months ago
    103. 103
      Chapter 103 1 months ago

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