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The Old Baseball Player System

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作者: HcS10

4.25 (12 レビュー結果)

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An old baseball player gets another chance to live the sport he loves, but this time as a system! The son of one of Japan's greatest pitchers has a dream to follow in his father's footsteps and become a great professional, but he has a major problem, lack of talent.

Follow the journey of Shun Takahashi, a young baseball player without talent who receives the old baseball player system. Hellish training, legendary skills, impossible missions, good friends, talented rivals, and maybe luck in love. Shun and the system have a complicated relationship, but they both share the same goal, to be the greatest of all time!

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    HcS10
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    Author here. Well, we've reached 50 chapters in the story, so I thought it would be a good time to do a review. This is the first book I'm writing, so I'm always open to suggestions and critiques. Feel free to ask any questions here. Some important points: - The MC is only 14 years old, so it's normal for him to go through phases where he's arrogant, rebellious, in love... He will mature a lot throughout the story. - This isn't a story where the MC quickly becomes invincible and OP, you can expect a lot of training and truly challenging opponents. - There is romance, but don't expect anything too soon since the MC is only 14 years old. - I intend to develop various different characters, and most of them will have their own journey, so don't worry if you like a specific character and are afraid they'll be forgotten. - The story is a mix of comedy, romance, and slice-of-life, but the main focus is baseball. You can also expect a bit of drama.

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    Mister_Robot

    A very interesting sports novel. Good use of a baseball system and pacing is commendable as well. My only complaint is with the MC. I find his character very annoying. He feels more like an annoying side character. His friends Kenta or Ren would make a better MC, but that's just my opinion. I hope there's character development.

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    TeneT
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    Very good novel dont drop author. Big potential [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    Hezii_2G

    So far I’m through 96 chapters and I must say it’s really good for the authors first light novel. Minor inconsistencies here and there, but overall a very solid story. The overall quality is even better than some veteran LN authors. Main thing is I haven’t gotten the brain rot from overwhelming plot armor or blockheadead things and poor grammar. Would def recommend to any sports LN enthusiasts.

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    DarkDrake

    never been into sports, but the system based story got me interested.

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    AKG_1436

    good work man keeping going. it pleasure to read this novel

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    holmes_morales

    Amazing story with a gradual progress that isn’t too fast paced but also isn’t slow with a working protagonist who is not just muscle but has a good baseball iq, only downside might be the inconsistent chapter updates

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    _anurag012

    it's good. It's just that i don't have money. so i can only say keep it up. and msg me if this has limited free thing.

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    Lucius_Frey

    Decent story but the the main character has all the worst qualities making it hard to read( He’s dumb, untalented, emotional, nosy, etc…)

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    Estreiger

    Todo iba bien hasta el capitulo 49, "justo antes de poner todos los capitulos de pago" se volvio loco y mejoro el talento aleatoriamente de muchisimas personas para que el mc ya no destaque tanto y parezca otro del monton y como si no fuera suficiente, le regala un systema de beisbol al rival "que obviamente es el as de su antiguo equipo" no pierdan el tiempo

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    NashP7
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    So far so good! I’m really enjoying reading this, following Shuns journey is really fun. He trains very hard & has a real passion for baseball. He’s very young so he’s quite immature and makes mistakes but that’s okay. If anything it’s better that he’s far from perfect as he’s developing as a player and a person all at the same time. I’m interested to see where the story progresses from here on out!

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    Rolandico

    The amount of chapters u use on 1 singel game is way to much. It makes the pace way to slow and makes wanting to read the next chapter a drag.

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    卷 1

    1. 1
      Another Chance 4 months ago
    2. 2
      The System is Ready 4 months ago
    3. 3
      User Evaluation 4 months ago
    4. 4
      Legendary Skill 4 months ago
    5. 5
      Dirty and Smelly Brother 4 months ago
    6. 6
      Dinner 4 months ago
    7. 7
      Good System 4 months ago
    8. 8
      System, you son of a b***h! 4 months ago
    9. 9
      Sleeping Like a Princess 4 months ago
    10. 10
      First Kiss 4 months ago
    11. 11
      Promise 4 months ago
    12. 12
      I'M BACK!! 4 months ago
    13. 13
      Lucky Bastard 4 months ago
    14. 14
      Levels 4 months ago
    15. 15
      WOOSH 4 months ago
    16. 16
      Superstar 4 months ago
    17. 17
      Dive 4 months ago
    18. 18
      Special Prize 4 months ago
    19. 19
      Old Man 4 months ago
    20. 20
      Old Man's Test 4 months ago
    21. 21
      Good People and Bad People 4 months ago
    22. 22
      Lying Bastard 4 months ago
    23. 23
      The Best Reward 4 months ago
    24. 24
      Monster 4 months ago
    25. 25
      Close to Finishing 4 months ago
    26. 26
      Mission Complete 4 months ago
    27. 27
      Master Thief 4 months ago
    28. 28
      Hana Hoshino 4 months ago
    29. 29
      The Future Japanese Ace 4 months ago
    30. 30
      I’m a genius! 4 months ago
    31. 31
      First Game 4 months ago
    32. 32
      Shoto VS Hoshizora (1) 4 months ago
    33. 33
      Shoto VS Hoshizora (2) 4 months ago
    34. 34
      Shoto VS Hoshizora (3) 4 months ago
    35. 35
      Shoto VS Hoshizora (4) 4 months ago
    36. 36
      Shoto VS Hoshizora (5) 4 months ago
    37. 37
      Fight 4 months ago
    38. 38
      Update 4 months ago
    39. 39
      Star Store 4 months ago
    40. 40
      Arrogance 4 months ago
    41. 41
      First Round(1) 4 months ago
    42. 42
      First Round(2) 4 months ago
    43. 43
      First Round(3) 3 months ago
    44. 44
      Arena 3 months ago
    45. 45
      Bronze Tournament 3 months ago
    46. 46
      Unknown 3 months ago
    47. 47
      Maniac 3 months ago
    48. 48
      Antagonist 3 months ago
    49. 49
      Legendary Rewards Farm 3 months ago
    50. 50
      New Mission 3 months ago
    51. 51
      Training 3 months ago
    52. 52
      Old Friend 3 months ago
    53. 53
      Nobody 3 months ago
    54. 54
      Arrival 3 months ago
    55. 55
      Shoto VS Hokuto (1) 3 months ago
    56. 56
      Shoto VS Hokuto (2) 3 months ago
    57. 57
      Shoto VS Hokuto (3) 3 months ago
    58. 58
      Shoto VS Hokuto (4) 3 months ago
    59. 59
      Shoto VS Hokuto (5) 3 months ago
    60. 60
      Shoto VS Hokuto (6) 3 months ago
    61. 61
      Shoto VS Hokuto (7) 3 months ago
    62. 62
      Shoto VS Hokuto (8) 3 months ago
    63. 63
      Shoto VS Hokuto (9) 3 months ago
    64. 64
      Thank you 3 months ago
    65. 65
      Show me 3 months ago
    66. 66
      Help 3 months ago
    67. 67
      Father and Son (1) 3 months ago
    68. 68
      Father and Son (2) 3 months ago
    69. 69
      Ghost 3 months ago
    70. 70
      One Million 3 months ago
    71. 71
      Lucky to have me 3 months ago
    72. 72
      New Challenges 3 months ago
    73. 73
      Tokyo Dome 3 months ago
    74. 74
      Risk 3 months ago
    75. 75
      Home Run Derby (1) 3 months ago
    76. 76
      Home Run Derby (2) 3 months ago
    77. 77
      Home Run Derby (3) 3 months ago
    78. 78
      Home Run Derby (4) 3 months ago
    79. 79
      Giving Up 3 months ago
    80. 80
      All-Star Game (1) 2 months ago
    81. 81
      All-Star Game (2) 2 months ago
    82. 82
      Venezuela 2 months ago
    83. 83
      Spring 2 months ago
    84. 84
      Ticking Bomb 2 months ago
    85. 85
      Bullpen 2 months ago
    86. 86
      First Pitch 2 months ago
    87. 87
      Line Drive 2 months ago
    88. 88
      Progress 2 months ago
    89. 89
      News 2 months ago
    90. 90
      Who? 2 months ago
    91. 91
      Shoto VS Hokuto 2 (1) 2 months ago
    92. 92
      Shoto VS Hokuto 2 (2) 2 months ago
    93. 93
      Shoto VS Hokuto 2 (3) 2 months ago
    94. 94
      Shoto VS Hokuto 2 (4) 2 months ago
    95. 95
      Golden Opportunity 2 months ago
    96. 96
      Learning Master 2 months ago
    97. 97
      Silver Tournament 2 months ago
    98. 98
      Girlfriend 2 months ago
    99. 99
      Party 2 months ago
    100. 100
      This Game Called Baseball 2 months ago
    101. 101
      Pitches and Balls 2 months ago
    102. 102
      Traitor 2 months ago
    103. 103
      Promise 2 months ago
    104. 104
      Finally 2 months ago
    105. 105
      Rewards 2 months ago
    106. 106
      Tokyo Tournament, here we go again! 2 months ago
    107. 107
      First Round (1) 2 months ago
    108. 108
      First Round (2) 2 months ago
    109. 109
      First Round (3) 2 months ago
    110. 110
      First Round (4) 2 months ago
    111. 111
      New Seishin 2 months ago
    112. 112
      Training Partner 2 months ago
    113. 113
      Preparations 2 months ago
    114. 114
      Second Round (1) 2 months ago
    115. 115
      Second Round (2) 2 months ago
    116. 116
      The Plan 2 months ago
    117. 117
      Rejection 2 months ago
    118. 118
      Grandpa 2 months ago
    119. 119
      Only Weapon 2 months ago
    120. 120
      Third Round (1) 2 months ago
    121. 121
      Third Round (2) 2 months ago
    122. 122
      Third Round (3) 2 months ago
    123. 123
      Third Round (4) 2 months ago
    124. 124
      Third Round (5) 2 months ago
    125. 125
      Third Round (6) 2 months ago
    126. 126
      Third Round (7) 2 months ago
    127. 127
      Third Round (8) 2 months ago
    128. 128
      Third Round (9) 2 months ago
    129. 129
      Third Round (10) 2 months ago
    130. 130
      Third Round (11) 2 months ago
    131. 131
      Third Round (12) 2 months ago
    132. 132
      Talent 1 months ago
    133. 133
      Fourth Round (1) 1 months ago
    134. 134
      Fourth Round (2) 1 months ago
    135. 135
      Fourth Round (3) 1 months ago
    136. 136
      Fourth Round (4) 1 months ago
    137. 137
      Fifth Round (1) 1 months ago
    138. 138
      Fifth Round (2) 1 months ago
    139. 139
      Fifth Round (3) 1 months ago
    140. 140
      Fifth Round (4) 1 months ago
    141. 141
      Fifth Round (5) 1 months ago
    142. 142
      Fifth Round (6) 1 months ago
    143. 143
      Kasuga Junior High School 1 months ago
    144. 144
      Family 1 months ago
    145. 145
      I don’t care! 1 months ago
    146. 146
      Champions 1 months ago
    147. 147
      Phone Calls 1 months ago
    148. 148
      Dream 1 months ago
    149. 149
      Threat 1 months ago
    150. 150
      Pitcher’s Duel 1 months ago
    151. 151
      Noise 1 months ago
    152. 152
      Sixth Round (1) 1 months ago
    153. 153
      Sixth Round (2) 1 months ago
    154. 154
      Sixth Round (3) 1 months ago
    155. 155
      Sixth Round (4) 1 months ago
    156. 156
      Sixth Round (5) 1 months ago
    157. 157
      Sixth Round (6) 1 months ago
    158. 158
      Sixth Round (7) 1 months ago
    159. 159
      Sixth Round (8) 1 months ago
    160. 160
      Sixth Round (9) 1 months ago
    161. 161
      Sixth Round (10) 1 months ago
    162. 162
      Sixth Round (11) 1 months ago
    163. 163
      Sixth Round (12) 1 months ago
    164. 164
      Sixth Round (13) 1 months ago
    165. 165
      Sixth Round (14) 1 months ago
    166. 166
      Sixth Round (15) 1 months ago
    167. 167
      Sixth Round (16) 1 months ago
    168. 168
      Sixth Round (17) 1 months ago
    169. 169
      Sixth Round (18) 1 months ago
    170. 170
      Sixth Round (19) 1 months ago
    171. 171
      Sixth Round (20) 1 months ago
    172. 172
      Sixth Round (21) 1 months ago
    173. 173
      Sixth Round (22) 1 months ago
    174. 174
      Sixth Round (23) 1 months ago
    175. 175
      Sixth Round (24) 1 months ago
    176. 176
      Sixth Round (25) 1 months ago
    177. 177
      Sixth Round (26) 1 months ago
    178. 178
      Sixth Round (27) 1 months ago
    179. 179
      Pride 1 months ago
    180. 180
      Awards Ceremony 1 months ago
    181. 181
      MVP 1 months ago
    182. 182
      Protection 1 months ago
    183. 183
      Dedication 1 months ago
    184. 184
      Conversation 1 months ago
    185. 185
      New Mission 1 months ago
    186. 186
      Famous 1 months ago
    187. 187
      Tension 1 months ago
    188. 188
      Responsibilities 1 months ago
    189. 189
      Extra Training 1 months ago
    190. 190
      No Luck 1 months ago
    191. 191
      Confidence 1 months ago
    192. 192
      Last Practice 1 months ago
    193. 193
      Morning 1 months ago
    194. 194
      Nervous 1 months ago
    195. 195
      Arrival 1 months ago
    196. 196
      Start! 1 months ago
    197. 197
      Statement 1 months ago
    198. 198
      Another Monster 1 months ago
    199. 199
      Sleeping 1 months ago
    200. 200
      Tell 1 months ago
    201. 201
      Lunch 29 days ago
    202. 202
      Shoto VS Seiryu (1) 29 days ago
    203. 203
      Shoto VS Seiryu (2) 28 days ago
    204. 204
      Shoto VS Seiryu (3) 28 days ago

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