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My Elf System

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作者: PhoenixAsh

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Orion was on his way back home from work.

He was hurrying back home to take a nap while planning how he would spend his weekend as well, but while he was lost in thought, a truck suddenly appeared out of nowhere and the last thing he remembered was the truck barreling towards him before everything around him turned dark.

However to his surprise, he didn’t feel any pain after having the accident. In fact, he couldn’t see anything.

Everything around him seemed dark but when he opened his mouth to speak, he heard the gurgling sounds of a baby.

Noticing that the one sounding like a baby was him, Orion tried to open his eyes to know exactly where he was, but when he did, the first thing his eyes fell upon was a stunning beautiful elf, holding him with the most tenderest of care.

Not only was she his mother, she was also a queen as well and she had a beautiful sister who adored him just as much as his mother.

Aside from this, Orion also noticed he had received a system which allowed him to grow and evolve faster than a normal High Elf but after finding out the huge role his mother played in eradicating the war between all races, Orion vowed to live a happy and fulfilling life with his mother, aunt and a few others he cared a lot about.

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    Lucky0_0

    ntr? yuri? I hope not. . .. ... ... .

    5mth
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    Wrathdg

    I know There will be a harem But i want an idea of how big it is also please don't include the mom and aunt

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    Valyrxa
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    Its really great, I would advice everyone to give this novel a try! @Author: If you drop this… Im gonna cry 🥲

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    SWORDGOD_ETERNITY

    oh finally an elf Mc with harem amazing 👏💙🙌😍

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    Aayann_
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    Till now it is pretty good novel to read for me , the background and characters are also good, i really recommend this novel to people.

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    ULTIMATE_BEING

    author what happened why are you not updating any ch for last 4 days

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    Noguenko

    Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.

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    Jordzfml_7

    great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it 👍

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    Haruto17

    can give a link to discord server

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    Yueliang_Haizi

    This book is written amazingly well and I love the way the author wrote it. Your world building, plot and story are truly wonderful. Hopefully you also add more pictures of the characters later but for this book is better than a 10/10 in my opinion.

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    PizzaDeliveryGuy

    I really hope you don't drop this novel, just started reading this and it's amazing so far, I'll be sad if it gets dropped

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    Yassine_0928

    i lost braincells reading this garbage ,

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    Rishav_Yadav_8247

    please mia mother is in harem I want author preeeetyy please 🙏 😢 😭 😫 😔

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    Sathish_Annarapu

    It's the besttttt the story is good thanks for the author xD

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    Angelic_Throne80

    Loving the all round story please keep up the awesome story.

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    Santy_Melay

    The novel disgusts me, the reason is, I hate seeing a protagonist behave like a child when mentally he is not one, and the fact that he has accepted his family just like that is super illogical and nonsensical.

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    SneedandFeed

    Came for the world building stayed for the elf mommies.

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    CodeNCreative

    i accidentally bought the most premium tier and paid for all the chapters. i’m mad asf. i’m bout to dispute tf outta this charge. i’ve never even heard of this novel before idek how i got here

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    Layla_Barlavento

    Às vezes a história se perde no caminho.

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    SHADOW_IS_LIFE

    Hello, brother can you review my new book "Innkeeper Of Dead Gate" ...........................................................................................HELLO

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    Chapter 222: 222. Practicing 2. 6 days ago

    卷 2 : Vol 2:- Noble Elf Tournament Arc

    1. 32
      32. New Skills. 5 months ago
    2. 33
      33. Aunt Elena Is Also Strong. 5 months ago
    3. 34
      34. Grimoire. 5 months ago
    4. 35
      35. Grimoire [2]. 5 months ago
    5. 36
      36. New Missions. 4 months ago
    6. 37
      37. Training:- Mage And Knight Ranking. 4 months ago
    7. 38
      38. Ten Years. 4 months ago
    8. 39
      39. Orion Makes A Promise With Mama. 4 months ago
    9. 40
      40. Mermaid Queen. 4 months ago
    10. 41
      41. System Third Stage. 4 months ago
    11. 42
      42. Noble Elf Tournament {NET}. 4 months ago
    12. 43
      43. NET {2}:- Mia Loves Master Too. 4 months ago
    13. 44
      44. NET {3}:- Day One. 4 months ago
    14. 45
      45. NET {4}:- Blaze Rats. 4 months ago
    15. 46
      46. NET {5}:- Mama Believes In Her Baby. 4 months ago
    16. 47
      47.NET {6}:- Finding The Prince. 4 months ago
    17. 48
      48. NET {7}:- I Love The Prince Too. 4 months ago
    18. 49
      49. NET {8}:- Second Phase Of The Tournament. 4 months ago
    19. 50
      50. NET {9}:-Mama Misses Her Baby So Much. 4 months ago
    20. 51
      51.NET {10}:- Archery. 4 months ago
    21. 52
      52. NET {11}:- Archery 2. 4 months ago
    22. 53
      53. NET {12}:- Coliseum. 4 months ago
    23. 54
      54. NET {13}:- Coliseum 2. 4 months ago
    24. 55
      55. NET {14}:- Battle. 4 months ago
    25. 56
      56. NET {15}:- Battle 2. 4 months ago
    26. 57
      57. NET {16}:- Moon Elf. 4 months ago
    27. 58
      58. NET {17}:- Day Three. 4 months ago
    28. 59
      59. NET {18}:- Mermaid Queen Arrives At The Elf Kingdom. 4 months ago
    29. 60
      60. NET {19}:- Mermaid Queen Arrives At The Elf Kingdom 2. 4 months ago
    30. 61
      61. NET {20}:- Mermaid Queen Arrives At The Elf Kingdom 3. 4 months ago
    31. 62
      62. NET {21}: Day Four. 4 months ago
    32. 63
      63. NET {22}. Junior Noble Elf Tournament Final. 4 months ago
    33. 64
      64. NET{23}. Junior Noble Elf Tournament Final 2. 4 months ago
    34. 65
      65. NET {24}. Rune Monarch. 4 months ago
    35. 66
      66. NET {25}:- Rune Monarch 2. 4 months ago
    36. 67
      67. NET {26}:- Rune Monarch 3. 4 months ago
    37. 68
      68. NET {27}:- Kami-No-Kai. 4 months ago
    38. 69
      69. NET {28]:- Day Five. 4 months ago
    39. 70
      70. NET {29}:- The Last Fight Of The Tournament. 4 months ago
    40. 71
      71. NET {30}:- Happy Reunion. 4 months ago

    卷 4 : Fallen Angels Kingdom Arc

    1. 98
      98. Off To The Fallen Angels Kingdom. 3 months ago
    2. 99
      99. Entrance Ceremony. 3 months ago
    3. 100
      100. Lion Prince And Succubus Princess. 3 months ago
    4. 101
      101. Number One Enemy Of Men. 3 months ago
    5. 102
      102. Current Goals. 3 months ago
    6. 103
      103. Fallen Angels Past. 3 months ago
    7. 104
      104. Smart Bracelets. 3 months ago
    8. 105
      105. The Quadrants. 3 months ago
    9. 106
      106.Neil Hartman. 3 months ago
    10. 107
      107. Neil Hartman 2. 3 months ago
    11. 108
      108. First Night In The Academy. 3 months ago
    12. 109
      109. First Night In The Academy 2. 3 months ago
    13. 110
      110. What Time Is It? 3 months ago
    14. 111
      111. Biggest Pervert. 3 months ago
    15. 112
      112. Cardinal Aspects. 3 months ago
    16. 113
      113. Current Status. 3 months ago
    17. 114
      114. Child Of Mana. 3 months ago
    18. 115
      115. Bathing With Mia. 3 months ago
    19. 116
      116. Personal Maid. 3 months ago
    20. 117
      117. Grimclaw And The Goblin King’s Horn. 3 months ago
    21. 118
      118. Stealing The Headmistress. 3 months ago
    22. 119
      119. Stealing The Headmistress 2. 3 months ago
    23. 120
      120. Naughty Elf Priestess. 3 months ago
    24. 121
      121. Council Of Men Club. 3 months ago
    25. 122
      122. The Succubus Princess FC. 3 months ago
    26. 123
      123. Massage. 3 months ago
    27. 124
      124. Together With Aunt Elena. 3 months ago
    28. 125
      125. Together With Aunt Elena 2. 3 months ago
    29. 126
      126. Together With Aunt Elena 3. 3 months ago
    30. 127
      127. Class Registration. 3 months ago
    31. 128
      128. Professor Draco. 3 months ago
    32. 129
      129. Arthur And Aslan. 2 months ago
    33. 130
      130. Dahlia. 2 months ago
    34. 131
      131. Vanishing Runes. 2 months ago
    35. 132
      132. Dahlia Makes Friends. 2 months ago
    36. 133
      133. Phil Hartman’s Plan. 2 months ago
    37. 134
      134. The Horseman. 2 months ago
    38. 135
      135. Dinner With Mom, Aunt And Lucille. 2 months ago
    39. 136
      136. The Journal. 2 months ago
    40. 137
      137. Hell lions Attack. 2 months ago
    41. 138
      138. Discovering The Truth. 2 months ago
    42. 139
      139. Evelyn Chats With The Other Apex Mages. 2 months ago
    43. 140
      140. World Tree. 2 months ago
    44. 141
      141. Third Night. 2 months ago
    45. 142
      142. Third Night 2. 2 months ago
    46. 143
      143. A Great Morning. 2 months ago
    47. 144
      144. Watching A Movie With Mom And Aunt. 2 months ago
    48. 145
      145. Starving Women. 2 months ago
    49. 146
      146. Last Night Together In The Academy.. 2 months ago
    50. 147
      147. Last Night Together At The Academy 2. 2 months ago
    51. 148
      148. New Mission. 2 months ago
    52. 149
      149. Ways Of Ranking Up. 2 months ago
    53. 150
      150. Getting Ready For Class . 2 months ago
    54. 151
      151. Teasing My Cute Maid. 2 months ago
    55. 152
      152. Bonding With The Maid. 2 months ago
    56. 153
      153. Daisy Arrives In Class Late. 2 months ago
    57. 154
      154. Training. 2 months ago
    58. 155
      155. Training 2. 2 months ago
    59. 156
      156. One Against Three. 2 months ago
    60. 157
      157. Adrian Is A Coward. 2 months ago
    61. 158
      158. Sparring With Dahlia. 2 months ago
    62. 159
      159. Sparring With Dahlia 2. 2 months ago
    63. 160
      160. Dahlia’s Reward. 2 months ago
    64. 161
      161. Mia Isn’t Happy. 2 months ago
    65. 162
      162. Mia Notices Something Weird About Dahlia. 2 months ago
    66. 163
      163. Four Activity Clubs. 2 months ago
    67. 164
      164. Beast Taming Class. 2 months ago
    68. 165
      165. C-Rank Dungeon. 2 months ago
    69. 166
      166. Blind Swamp Monster. 2 months ago
    70. 167
      167. Swamp Wraith. 2 months ago
    71. 168
      168. Together With Professor Daisy. 2 months ago
    72. 169
      169. Skilled Artisan. 2 months ago
    73. 170
      170. A Weird Cow Girl. 2 months ago
    74. 171
      171. Ascension. 2 months ago

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