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I have read till chapter 33 before I dropped it. It wasn't bad but simply not all that good. The grammar didn't have any mistakes so it was easy to read, but the plot itself was very boring. There was hardly any interactions between characters and most of every chapter was about the Red Alert system. Frankly it felt like just another zombie apocalypse and I almost forgot this is supposed to be in the High School of the Dead world... There was almost no feeling of anticipation to read about the MC conquest and how he finds new survivors to enlarge his survival base. To sum it all up I can say this fanfic didn't give me the feeling of immersion in a zombie apocalypse and it failed to hook me in. A nice story with a good concept but unfortunately it failed to deliver.
edit the story to remove all the nationalism, so that you won't see anything like: 'Certain country' No.1 or 'Certain country' is inferior. is 5 star for Me thank
Una obra de arte, sinceramente una obra maestra, aunque lamentablemente no está en español. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Espacios en blanco porque ya dije lo que tenía que decir
Don't know much about the MC and throughout the novel he seems more like a robot with no real purpose. He doesn't really build any relations with anyone and has almost no emotions. The first world HOTD is spent on talking about the Red Alert 2 system rather than exploring/enjoying a brand new world. The Red Alert 2 system is interesting and the backdrop of anime multiverse exploration was intriguing but the overall story is boring.
Great I 💕 ke. so interesting so wish all book. We're similar to this one it good enough. book ,..........................................
╱╱┏╮╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱ ╱╱┃┃╱╱┳╱┓┳╭┛┳┓ ▉━╯┗━╮┃╱┃┣┻╮┣╱ ▉┈┈┈┈┃┻┛┛┻╱┗┗┛ ▉╮┈┈┈┃▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ ╱╰━━━╯ 𝙔𝘼𝙔!ーーーーー ☆ * . ☆ . ∧＿∧ ∩ * ☆ * ☆ ( ・∀・)/ . . ⊂ ノ* ☆ ☆ * (つ ノ .☆ (ノ
one of the best red alert fanfiction out here in webnovel. the MC character is well like as a tough no nonsense. but the update is kinda slow so looking forward to chapters daily. 😁😁
$0viet anthem plays this is not *my* favourite novel it is OUR favourite novel so join comrade-in-arms as we convert this world into the socialist workers paradise *soviet March plays as outro*
I tried to give this another shot but it gets worse in my eyes. the MC has zero personality. there is zero character growth. he doesn't have hobbies. he doesn't have likes. all he wants is to be the the ruler but that also gives him zero joy. he's never expeesses any amount of emotion, I believe he's just a powerful robot. has he laughed? what entertains him? or is just getting stronger supposed to be it? lol thats the whole this story? stronger and stronger, conquer but never actually live. you're missing every detail to make him relatable. Im pretty sure the author was bullied so this is how his mc turned out. some bum who can't have friends and has to force them to like him, subserviently. lol I get it, but it gets better buddy. start with writing an actually human instead of this dumb*ss robot you call an MC. like every other character is just forgotten. there's no substance. I like red alert too but thats about the only thing you did right in this story.
just 7 more power stone just a little more I will try my best to give u power stone every day without forgot 😂😂😂 I really like red alert maybe you can add rising sun I want to see shogun gundam in action 🤩🤩
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The story was so-so, honestly, I expected more. It’s supposed to be the world of HOTD, but its characters are simply forgotten or NPCs without much dialogue or personality. Some aren’t even mentioned, they're just referred to as "Takagi and the others," or they're not mentioned at all. This story works more as a simple survival story in an apocalypse, and that's it. Remove the HOTD factor and it would be the same: a cold and ruthless MC who becomes the strongest very early in the story, and the rest is just about how he unlocks things from his system and collects resources. There's not even something fun like a harem or comedy, so that's my honest critique.
ネタバレを明かす too slow but I like this story translator doing good edit those dirty chinese racist china nambawannn .
The choice of Red alert units make it a very interesting addition to the story and I am anticipating the way it goes, the only thing that I don't see the reason for is why start in HOTD if you aren't going to use any of the characters there, the execution is not bad is just there's a lot of lost potential here, as it stands it could be any other zombie story and it wouldn't make it any different.
Like it, its quite different from usual fanfics like a breath of fresh air, yk what I mean….
Por el momento es una historia interesante. Aunque siento que el autor está desperdiciando completamente el mundo y los personajes de HOTD ya que apenas se hace mención a ellos y no hay nada lascivo en la historia. Creo firmemente que un fanfiction de HOTD sin harem y R18 es como una historia de dragón ball z sin los Saiyajin.
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The story and the idea is good. My only complaint would be the sometimes wonky grammar.
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I have read till chapter 33 before I dropped it. It wasn't bad but simply not all that good. The grammar didn't have any mistakes so it was easy to read, but the plot itself was very boring. There was hardly any interactions between characters and most of every chapter was about the Red Alert system. Frankly it felt like just another zombie apocalypse and I almost forgot this is supposed to be in the High School of the Dead world... There was almost no feeling of anticipation to read about the MC conquest and how he finds new survivors to enlarge his survival base. To sum it all up I can say this fanfic didn't give me the feeling of immersion in a zombie apocalypse and it failed to hook me in. A nice story with a good concept but unfortunately it failed to deliver.
edit the story to remove all the nationalism, so that you won't see anything like: 'Certain country' No.1 or 'Certain country' is inferior. is 5 star for Me thank
Una obra de arte, sinceramente una obra maestra, aunque lamentablemente no está en español. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Espacios en blanco porque ya dije lo que tenía que decir
Don't know much about the MC and throughout the novel he seems more like a robot with no real purpose. He doesn't really build any relations with anyone and has almost no emotions. The first world HOTD is spent on talking about the Red Alert 2 system rather than exploring/enjoying a brand new world. The Red Alert 2 system is interesting and the backdrop of anime multiverse exploration was intriguing but the overall story is boring.
Great I 💕 ke. so interesting so wish all book. We're similar to this one it good enough. book ,..........................................
╱╱┏╮╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱ ╱╱┃┃╱╱┳╱┓┳╭┛┳┓ ▉━╯┗━╮┃╱┃┣┻╮┣╱ ▉┈┈┈┈┃┻┛┛┻╱┗┗┛ ▉╮┈┈┈┃▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ ╱╰━━━╯ 𝙔𝘼𝙔!ーーーーー ☆ * . ☆ . ∧＿∧ ∩ * ☆ * ☆ ( ・∀・)/ . . ⊂ ノ* ☆ ☆ * (つ ノ .☆ (ノ
one of the best red alert fanfiction out here in webnovel. the MC character is well like as a tough no nonsense. but the update is kinda slow so looking forward to chapters daily. 😁😁
$0viet anthem plays this is not *my* favourite novel it is OUR favourite novel so join comrade-in-arms as we convert this world into the socialist workers paradise *soviet March plays as outro*
I tried to give this another shot but it gets worse in my eyes. the MC has zero personality. there is zero character growth. he doesn't have hobbies. he doesn't have likes. all he wants is to be the the ruler but that also gives him zero joy. he's never expeesses any amount of emotion, I believe he's just a powerful robot. has he laughed? what entertains him? or is just getting stronger supposed to be it? lol thats the whole this story? stronger and stronger, conquer but never actually live. you're missing every detail to make him relatable. Im pretty sure the author was bullied so this is how his mc turned out. some bum who can't have friends and has to force them to like him, subserviently. lol I get it, but it gets better buddy. start with writing an actually human instead of this dumb*ss robot you call an MC. like every other character is just forgotten. there's no substance. I like red alert too but thats about the only thing you did right in this story.
just 7 more power stone just a little more I will try my best to give u power stone every day without forgot 😂😂😂 I really like red alert maybe you can add rising sun I want to see shogun gundam in action 🤩🤩
Keep it up man, i like it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story was so-so, honestly, I expected more. It’s supposed to be the world of HOTD, but its characters are simply forgotten or NPCs without much dialogue or personality. Some aren’t even mentioned, they're just referred to as "Takagi and the others," or they're not mentioned at all. This story works more as a simple survival story in an apocalypse, and that's it. Remove the HOTD factor and it would be the same: a cold and ruthless MC who becomes the strongest very early in the story, and the rest is just about how he unlocks things from his system and collects resources. There's not even something fun like a harem or comedy, so that's my honest critique.
ネタバレを明かす too slow but I like this story translator doing good edit those dirty chinese racist china nambawannn .
The choice of Red alert units make it a very interesting addition to the story and I am anticipating the way it goes, the only thing that I don't see the reason for is why start in HOTD if you aren't going to use any of the characters there, the execution is not bad is just there's a lot of lost potential here, as it stands it could be any other zombie story and it wouldn't make it any different.
Like it, its quite different from usual fanfics like a breath of fresh air, yk what I mean….
Por el momento es una historia interesante. Aunque siento que el autor está desperdiciando completamente el mundo y los personajes de HOTD ya que apenas se hace mención a ellos y no hay nada lascivo en la historia. Creo firmemente que un fanfiction de HOTD sin harem y R18 es como una historia de dragón ball z sin los Saiyajin.
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The story and the idea is good. My only complaint would be the sometimes wonky grammar.
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