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one of the greatest marvel fic I've ever read try it first before saying anything
Honestly, sometimes I kinda feel down and fanfiction is my escapism, especially, harem ones. Even if it is my escapism, I kinda cringe most of the time when I read them. This one was a great story with a scum mc in the beginning but that scum slowly transformed into a better person. I kinda binge read it after chapter 80. I really want to see more of the father-child interactions of the mc and kinda hope the author won't just forget about his children
You know, i’ve seen you get the credit that you deserve, but i don’t think you’ve ever truly been recognized in how you truly made such an amazing piece of art with this story. like the amount of research you must have put in to not only the mafia of the 1900s but the world surrounding it and you’re interweaving this story so well with so many historical figures that it’s insane. it the craziest part is that it all seems natural. it doesn’t seem out of place at all in fact it only makes me more invested to see real people from our history interacting with one of my favorite fictional franchises. i seriously have to give you the credit cuz this might actually be the best smut fic on webnovel.
You know , after everything that was said and done , what really made me turn against the protagonist was this miserable bullying against this innocent child in chapter 112 ! Would he really have been violent if the boy didn't obey him ?
I was going to wait until I fully caught up to leave a review, but as of finishing chapter 71, I have to leave one. No fanfiction has any right to be this well written, and I will forever hate the author for making me enjoy a story called "impregnation system" as much as I do.
This will be a sincere review. To start, I think this author has so much potential. The writing and structure have been clean so far. It is above average for web novel terms. Most times, I expect errors and bad sentences, especially for a novel that is fanfiction. So just that in itself wows me. The system down to the way he gets rewards I like. The bad reviews for this novel I can understand. I just think they are exaggerated. Most of them call out the character. I admit, that the MC personality can be a bit too much and takes a long time to develop. It just doesn't warrant to give the novel a two or one star. If I personally didn't see it from another review. That the MC will change in chapter 70. I maybe would have dropped it. My problems with the novel: I personally don't like how long it took for his character development. I think after the first two times of his same drunk crash out. We could tell how he is. It got a bit too dragged out by doing it a lot of times over and over again. I just think that the true story starts around chapter 70. Since then I have loved this story. I hope author if you read this, that you can go far with it. Although I understand that the novel is intended to be practice for you. Conclusion: The story is great besides mc annoying personality that takes a bit too long to change.
Esta Historia es tan buena de leer que tengo miedo de que nunca se termine, no tienen idea de lo bien que se disfruta del personaje principal, su arco de desarrollo y historia en el mundo marvel que apenas con menos de 200 capítulos se ha tocado, un digno merecedor de ser el sucesor de las novelas de los 2 milenios! solo algunos tienen este derecho, esta historia tiene para mínimo 2000 capítulos con todo el jugo y esencia que se le puede sacar, no te puedes perder de leer esta historia de marvel fics muy diferente de las que normalmente hay a montones [img=boleto dorado]
I was skeptical at the start of the story, the mc’s personality in the begging is utter flaky garbage. Though as the story progresses the number of times you empathize with him increses and you start to understand why he is or was this way. He does grow as a person and becomes someone reliable eventually, though its a slow process with countless setbacks. imo this is exactly where this story shines. It shows how real people deal with bad habits and addiction. People don’t just cast them off suddenly, its very inhuman. In most cases bad habits will rear their ugly heads later on in life at most inopportune moments. There are many other good points in the story. The dialogue is smooth. The narrative is well connected, there may be some minor plot holes but they aren’t impactful and can be glossed over easily. The characters feel real and aren’t just yes men to the mc and the mc isn’t getting s*cked of at every given chance metaphorically, literally maybe~ Overall love the story. Keep it coming author and good luck. Goated story, goated author. [img=recommend]
I'm happy I held my patience for this story. At first I wasn't sure if it would be worth it reading because of the almost unlikable main character, but the character development I was promised came through. The execution took a long time but I think it was well executed. Please give this story a chance.
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddddddddd. Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiissssssssssssssttttttttttttttttooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaa
Why 140 word? OK. Like like like 👍 👌 like like. Nice, good, mmmmm, wow, заебался я уже писать, охуенное произведение, но эти 140 символов, что-то дохуя
Amazing character development. He relly learns a lot as he progresses through the story. Good worldbuilding as well. Other characters also matter and have a hug impact on the MC
All around amazing story that really makes you connect with the protagonist, the world building is just *chefs' kiss* the characters feel like real people with real issues and real desires.
The MCs character wasn’t to my liking and why would you start him off as a 9 year old tasking him to impregnate a nurse?
The first volume of theis story is good but can be rather frustrating... But the second volume is incredible!!! Stick with it and you won't regret it! seriously amazing writing!
MC просто повністю руйнує інакше ідеально міцну фантастику 4/5-4.5/5, його особистість просто сміття, щоб навіть вважати цю фантастику вартою уваги занадто дитячою та некомпетентною, це все одно, що читати старі фантастики Chuuni MC початку 2010-х, де кожен Натомість MC мав бути гострим, а сьогодні це безглузді наполовину написані MC, які думають лише низькою головою, і їм абсолютно й зовсім не вдається зацікавити чи привернути увагу. Цей фік у його поточному стані є повним сміттям, потребує переписування, а MC, який читачі могли б Насправді зацікавтеся не марнотратством, MC зараз пише добре, оновлення непогані, і це Marvel, тому про це гарний світ, щоб писати, але ні, я не бачу жодної форми чи форми, щоб я коли-небудь захотів підтримати цей фік не витрачайте час, є кращі фішки Smut із нейтральними чи злими MC, де MC насправді цікаві чи зрозумілі ніколи не розумів, чому автори хочуть псувати свої власні фішки, як це, це марна трата часу
Dear my fellow readers. This has gotta be the number 1 fanfic with an interesting concept I’ve read since spider man 0x but this time I need pictures of Ricky Luciano get me pictures of Ricky Luciano lol. But seriously my 1-10 ratings are this World building- 10 MC- 9.5 Smut scenes- 9 and only cause personally could include the balls more lol And Plot- 10 cause can’t put this fanfic down Characters interactions - 10
It starts off with the MC being a jerk, but after 4 years of reading fanfics I consider this one of the best character developments I've ever seen.
Don't see any marvel thing in 20 chapters or i just missed it cause it uas so little mentioned
The name doesn't do it justice. Yea there's plenty of great smut and the system rewards things based on that, but this novel is much more than that. The MC character is great. I don't mean that as in him being chivalrous, honorable, steadfast, etc. It's the opposite actually, and that is the reason for many bad reviews. He has a lot of flaws, but he is very fleshed out, and the way he acts and interacts with others is natural and chaotically entertaining even if I dislike how he acts sometimes. Most importantly we slowly learn why he acts in the way he does and the world doesn't just work in his favor regardless, so he gets smacked some hard lessons in the face that force him to grow. And it's very satisfying. The character interactions and dialogues are great. The struggles are well done. The supernatural elements of marvel slowly gets introduced and the fights are exciting. The chapters tend to be very long too.
Writing another review mostly just to boost this amazing story even more… But just wow. The latest chapter further reaffirming Slicks character growth just hit me. 130 Powerstones in and i feel like i have to do at least 100 more now.
Never in my life have I related more to a MC. This story is not what I thought it’d end of being? And it gets better. It’s written beautifully givin real Tarantino vibes. If you also have a weird itch in your brain urging you to run away from your problems give this bad boy a read
It's a great story. I recommend that you endure the first chapter and then the story really opens up. Many thanks to the author for his work!)
Damn, it's been a long time since a story made me cry like a little girl. This is the best thing I've read in a long time, 10/10 Damn, it's been a long time since a story made me cry like a little girl. This is the best thing I've read in a long time, 10/10
Finally after 70 chapters the MC has changed. Don't get me wrong he is so entertaining to watch but seeing the guy fall into the same pit falls every single time even when he's trying his best in recent chapters was hardening. But now, we finally had a flashback on why Ricky always runs away from his problems. And it's understandable, trauma is hard to deal with. If y'all can read a past chapter 70 it is worth seeing Ricky change for the better. The Author's best traits is his World building and how well he can flesh out characters. If first person, harem, complex World building and relatable characters is up your alley then yes, this is good for you.
Overall, it's a good story with good pacing, great character development, and a cohesive layout. The only issue is that the language used feels very robotic at times.
one of the greatest marvel fic I've ever read try it first before saying anything
Honestly, sometimes I kinda feel down and fanfiction is my escapism, especially, harem ones. Even if it is my escapism, I kinda cringe most of the time when I read them. This one was a great story with a scum mc in the beginning but that scum slowly transformed into a better person. I kinda binge read it after chapter 80. I really want to see more of the father-child interactions of the mc and kinda hope the author won't just forget about his children
You know, i’ve seen you get the credit that you deserve, but i don’t think you’ve ever truly been recognized in how you truly made such an amazing piece of art with this story. like the amount of research you must have put in to not only the mafia of the 1900s but the world surrounding it and you’re interweaving this story so well with so many historical figures that it’s insane. it the craziest part is that it all seems natural. it doesn’t seem out of place at all in fact it only makes me more invested to see real people from our history interacting with one of my favorite fictional franchises. i seriously have to give you the credit cuz this might actually be the best smut fic on webnovel.
You know , after everything that was said and done , what really made me turn against the protagonist was this miserable bullying against this innocent child in chapter 112 ! Would he really have been violent if the boy didn't obey him ?
I was going to wait until I fully caught up to leave a review, but as of finishing chapter 71, I have to leave one. No fanfiction has any right to be this well written, and I will forever hate the author for making me enjoy a story called "impregnation system" as much as I do.
This will be a sincere review. To start, I think this author has so much potential. The writing and structure have been clean so far. It is above average for web novel terms. Most times, I expect errors and bad sentences, especially for a novel that is fanfiction. So just that in itself wows me. The system down to the way he gets rewards I like. The bad reviews for this novel I can understand. I just think they are exaggerated. Most of them call out the character. I admit, that the MC personality can be a bit too much and takes a long time to develop. It just doesn't warrant to give the novel a two or one star. If I personally didn't see it from another review. That the MC will change in chapter 70. I maybe would have dropped it. My problems with the novel: I personally don't like how long it took for his character development. I think after the first two times of his same drunk crash out. We could tell how he is. It got a bit too dragged out by doing it a lot of times over and over again. I just think that the true story starts around chapter 70. Since then I have loved this story. I hope author if you read this, that you can go far with it. Although I understand that the novel is intended to be practice for you. Conclusion: The story is great besides mc annoying personality that takes a bit too long to change.
Esta Historia es tan buena de leer que tengo miedo de que nunca se termine, no tienen idea de lo bien que se disfruta del personaje principal, su arco de desarrollo y historia en el mundo marvel que apenas con menos de 200 capítulos se ha tocado, un digno merecedor de ser el sucesor de las novelas de los 2 milenios! solo algunos tienen este derecho, esta historia tiene para mínimo 2000 capítulos con todo el jugo y esencia que se le puede sacar, no te puedes perder de leer esta historia de marvel fics muy diferente de las que normalmente hay a montones [img=boleto dorado]
I was skeptical at the start of the story, the mc’s personality in the begging is utter flaky garbage. Though as the story progresses the number of times you empathize with him increses and you start to understand why he is or was this way. He does grow as a person and becomes someone reliable eventually, though its a slow process with countless setbacks. imo this is exactly where this story shines. It shows how real people deal with bad habits and addiction. People don’t just cast them off suddenly, its very inhuman. In most cases bad habits will rear their ugly heads later on in life at most inopportune moments. There are many other good points in the story. The dialogue is smooth. The narrative is well connected, there may be some minor plot holes but they aren’t impactful and can be glossed over easily. The characters feel real and aren’t just yes men to the mc and the mc isn’t getting s*cked of at every given chance metaphorically, literally maybe~ Overall love the story. Keep it coming author and good luck. Goated story, goated author. [img=recommend]
I'm happy I held my patience for this story. At first I wasn't sure if it would be worth it reading because of the almost unlikable main character, but the character development I was promised came through. The execution took a long time but I think it was well executed. Please give this story a chance.
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddddddddd. Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiissssssssssssssttttttttttttttttooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaa
Why 140 word? OK. Like like like 👍 👌 like like. Nice, good, mmmmm, wow, заебался я уже писать, охуенное произведение, но эти 140 символов, что-то дохуя
Amazing character development. He relly learns a lot as he progresses through the story. Good worldbuilding as well. Other characters also matter and have a hug impact on the MC
All around amazing story that really makes you connect with the protagonist, the world building is just *chefs' kiss* the characters feel like real people with real issues and real desires.
The MCs character wasn’t to my liking and why would you start him off as a 9 year old tasking him to impregnate a nurse?
The first volume of theis story is good but can be rather frustrating... But the second volume is incredible!!! Stick with it and you won't regret it! seriously amazing writing!
MC просто повністю руйнує інакше ідеально міцну фантастику 4/5-4.5/5, його особистість просто сміття, щоб навіть вважати цю фантастику вартою уваги занадто дитячою та некомпетентною, це все одно, що читати старі фантастики Chuuni MC початку 2010-х, де кожен Натомість MC мав бути гострим, а сьогодні це безглузді наполовину написані MC, які думають лише низькою головою, і їм абсолютно й зовсім не вдається зацікавити чи привернути увагу. Цей фік у його поточному стані є повним сміттям, потребує переписування, а MC, який читачі могли б Насправді зацікавтеся не марнотратством, MC зараз пише добре, оновлення непогані, і це Marvel, тому про це гарний світ, щоб писати, але ні, я не бачу жодної форми чи форми, щоб я коли-небудь захотів підтримати цей фік не витрачайте час, є кращі фішки Smut із нейтральними чи злими MC, де MC насправді цікаві чи зрозумілі ніколи не розумів, чому автори хочуть псувати свої власні фішки, як це, це марна трата часу
Dear my fellow readers. This has gotta be the number 1 fanfic with an interesting concept I’ve read since spider man 0x but this time I need pictures of Ricky Luciano get me pictures of Ricky Luciano lol. But seriously my 1-10 ratings are this World building- 10 MC- 9.5 Smut scenes- 9 and only cause personally could include the balls more lol And Plot- 10 cause can’t put this fanfic down Characters interactions - 10
It starts off with the MC being a jerk, but after 4 years of reading fanfics I consider this one of the best character developments I've ever seen.
Don't see any marvel thing in 20 chapters or i just missed it cause it uas so little mentioned
The name doesn't do it justice. Yea there's plenty of great smut and the system rewards things based on that, but this novel is much more than that. The MC character is great. I don't mean that as in him being chivalrous, honorable, steadfast, etc. It's the opposite actually, and that is the reason for many bad reviews. He has a lot of flaws, but he is very fleshed out, and the way he acts and interacts with others is natural and chaotically entertaining even if I dislike how he acts sometimes. Most importantly we slowly learn why he acts in the way he does and the world doesn't just work in his favor regardless, so he gets smacked some hard lessons in the face that force him to grow. And it's very satisfying. The character interactions and dialogues are great. The struggles are well done. The supernatural elements of marvel slowly gets introduced and the fights are exciting. The chapters tend to be very long too.
Writing another review mostly just to boost this amazing story even more… But just wow. The latest chapter further reaffirming Slicks character growth just hit me. 130 Powerstones in and i feel like i have to do at least 100 more now.
Never in my life have I related more to a MC. This story is not what I thought it’d end of being? And it gets better. It’s written beautifully givin real Tarantino vibes. If you also have a weird itch in your brain urging you to run away from your problems give this bad boy a read
It's a great story. I recommend that you endure the first chapter and then the story really opens up. Many thanks to the author for his work!)
Damn, it's been a long time since a story made me cry like a little girl. This is the best thing I've read in a long time, 10/10 Damn, it's been a long time since a story made me cry like a little girl. This is the best thing I've read in a long time, 10/10
Finally after 70 chapters the MC has changed. Don't get me wrong he is so entertaining to watch but seeing the guy fall into the same pit falls every single time even when he's trying his best in recent chapters was hardening. But now, we finally had a flashback on why Ricky always runs away from his problems. And it's understandable, trauma is hard to deal with. If y'all can read a past chapter 70 it is worth seeing Ricky change for the better. The Author's best traits is his World building and how well he can flesh out characters. If first person, harem, complex World building and relatable characters is up your alley then yes, this is good for you.
Overall, it's a good story with good pacing, great character development, and a cohesive layout. The only issue is that the language used feels very robotic at times.