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When I first started to read this I thought it would be just another fun story I could turn my brain off to. I have never been so glad that I’ve been so wrong. Love the character development most of all.
I didn't like MC personality at the start, but he got some character development in the latest chapters. TBH one if not the best fanfic I read I hope author will finish it
The development of the story, the sequence, the plot is a little complicated to read, that doesn't mean it's bad. To be more specific, it is the plot detours, which are like those in a mystery and detective book, that force my brain to work harder and therefore tire it more. MMMMM... In the last chapters, characters from the Marvel Universe begin to appear, which causes me concern because everything that involves the Marvel and DC universes is terribly confusing.
Really well written. I was gonna skip from the title, but when I saw the reviews , I gave it a go and it didn't disappoint. The story has a funny, chaotic tone with some deep stuff. Not to mention the namesake adding extra spice. Author really cooked well with this one. Really loved a different concept of mc compared to the regular tropes.
Story was good in the start but even the author didn't know how to continue it and just goes with the flow. The only thing related to marvel is that the mc and his some friends are the mutant and everybody hate mutants and currently the story is going into other direction, it's definitely not marvel cinematic and comics universe, author is just changing the world background as he like so i am dropping.
overall great story, my only problem is the main character who always frustrates me, cause he was made super idiot, stupid, and dumb yet super lucky, more so when i can barely see any growth to his intelligence.
Good stuff. The patience was worth it reading through all that while almost wanting to punch the damn MC but boy was I wrong Character Development going good Adding unnecessary stuff cause of the damn restriction of 40 words and again Good Stuff 🤌 P.S. Writing this for the second time cause spelling mistakes (autocorrect ain't doing it's job for some reason)
Definetly not just another smut fic. Marvel is just the cherry on top. Although MC is very scummy, author is clearly cooking My only concern is how the system is pushing him to stay scum
I really liked this fanfic, although I thought it would have more names that I know It's understandable since it takes place in 1920 or around that time and the only known one was Captain America or Wolverine when the war happened. The story is very good and the progression too. In the female characters the only one I know is Raven Darkholme, but there are images at hand to imagine them well. The MC is evil and lustful, I love that, although the evil thing is that he is too impulsive and childish. But I like how he matures with the passage of time, especially after the death of... In short, if you like the tags and the description along with the image on the cover, don't hesitate and read some chapters, I think you won't regret it
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One of best fanfic I have ever read , Mc was a pretty vile bastard in his last life due to "reasons" and he is changing slowly and becoming more likeable as the story goes one . Very well written , though till now ....there are close to zero stuff from marvel and first volume is based on a crime mafia family instead but still very enjoyable. Side characters are pretty interesting as well , only gripe of mine is that he doesn't use his powers much till now. Hopefully we will see him fighting with his powers and op weapons soon...
first of all, woah seeing the titlen I first though it would be another stupid harem fanfic without any plot but damn the author is a monster. Slick, our mc is a piece of trash with a truckload of trauma we see change throughout the chapters and masterfully done, particularly here in the black knight arc. The story takes its time to set itself without drowning us with marvel characters left and right which i appreciate. One of the best fanfic i've read. chef's kiss to the author
at first I really thought it would be just another smut novel on webnovel .... that why I stopped reading when there's only smut and no development.... but now you prove me wrong author-min there's finally some character development and the background story is progressing... keep up the good work author ;)
i will be honest this book is amazing the character while horrible is slowly growing and as he loses everything he is realizing his mistakes and learning from them he is slowly growing and becoming a better person. Another point is that the character is realistic he is gradually growing. the story is entertaining and fun. the world building is really really good overall an amazing book the author is amazing he is really talented. thank you for the book author
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I'll be honest This is my favourite novel right now you get what was shown in the beginning and in the synopsis an actual degenerate who's best ability is to run from responsibility but now put into a whole new world with power humans were never meant for. But we also see the slow character building, from a man who only wanted pleasure to someone actually trying to build something while still seeking pleasure. We have just met the Biggest yet Wall that Ricky will have to face and honestly i can't wait to see what LaughingFiend will build out of his character.
I don’t usually write revews, in fact, this is my first one. And when i tell you this shit is good ! I MEAN it ! Don’t base your opinion on the title and just go with the flow. This is a must read !
I think this might be my first review ever, but this book deserves it. Short Version: Don't let the title mislead you like me, this book's amazing in all aspects concerning a literary work, you can even skip the smut like me if you want and still lose nothing. Long Version: The Writing Quality is great, it's not overly complicated but not completely simplistic and blockish either. It reads incredibly smooth apart from certain hiccups now and then but that's normal, it happens to everyone not using ChatGPT like the current trend seems to be even though it makes everything go trash. You can understand everything. The updates are relatively regular, and it's insane for the length of the chapters and the quality of the story itself. The story development is crazy good, it shows the MC actually grow with every obstacle he faces, and even regular things he notices. He impacts the world around him properly and the way the characters react to him is great, the main character isn't the make all break all in this story unlike most and the overall plot is actually intriguing and makes you wonder about it. The best part is that when the mc acts dumb, he moves to fix it once he realises the problem. Him going from the useless deadbeat to what he is now has been nothing short of amazing. The involvment of the Vatican is just muah. My views on the character design should be apparent from the above segment, it's great. The OCs are great, they're smooth and thoughtful, not just stepping stones, info dumps, or background noise to incessant mc glazing. The World Background is just literal peak. I don't even read the smut in this story, that's how good the plot and the world it's in. Ending remarks, don't let the title throw you off. It's an awesome book and you'll greatly regret ignoring it.
Cada maldito capítulo mejora y nisiquiera estamos en el cañón es una historia independiente y es gloriosa jdr , nada es estupido ni aburrido y todo encaja y es malditamente adictiva , ya espero la parte de los viajes del tiempo y cuando este en el cañón que seguramente faltaran años
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this is written too dang well for what I originally started to read for and i LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well written marvel fics are tuff to find and rarer are well written harem fanfics yet it works. MOOOOOOORRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love the story takes a different route than most people updates are decent but would love for them to be more frequent mc's personality is kinda iffy since one second he acts like and adult and the next he becomes a kid again he's very similar to frank from shameless, hope mc grows as a character
Damn i didn't expect this at all a diamond in the rough it's really good keep it up author u have my support
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great story don't mind it not being marvel that much and also love the world building and the characters
Really thank You Parents that you were born coarse that shit Destroyed every scale that had.Really 1 of the best things that I had read
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MC is trashy but it's written very well, and he does develop a few redeeming qualities. If you're able to get over the protagonist's character then it's a very entertaining read.
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When I first started to read this I thought it would be just another fun story I could turn my brain off to. I have never been so glad that I’ve been so wrong. Love the character development most of all.
I didn't like MC personality at the start, but he got some character development in the latest chapters. TBH one if not the best fanfic I read I hope author will finish it
The development of the story, the sequence, the plot is a little complicated to read, that doesn't mean it's bad. To be more specific, it is the plot detours, which are like those in a mystery and detective book, that force my brain to work harder and therefore tire it more. MMMMM... In the last chapters, characters from the Marvel Universe begin to appear, which causes me concern because everything that involves the Marvel and DC universes is terribly confusing.
Really well written. I was gonna skip from the title, but when I saw the reviews , I gave it a go and it didn't disappoint. The story has a funny, chaotic tone with some deep stuff. Not to mention the namesake adding extra spice. Author really cooked well with this one. Really loved a different concept of mc compared to the regular tropes.
Story was good in the start but even the author didn't know how to continue it and just goes with the flow. The only thing related to marvel is that the mc and his some friends are the mutant and everybody hate mutants and currently the story is going into other direction, it's definitely not marvel cinematic and comics universe, author is just changing the world background as he like so i am dropping.
overall great story, my only problem is the main character who always frustrates me, cause he was made super idiot, stupid, and dumb yet super lucky, more so when i can barely see any growth to his intelligence.
Good stuff. The patience was worth it reading through all that while almost wanting to punch the damn MC but boy was I wrong Character Development going good Adding unnecessary stuff cause of the damn restriction of 40 words and again Good Stuff 🤌 P.S. Writing this for the second time cause spelling mistakes (autocorrect ain't doing it's job for some reason)
Definetly not just another smut fic. Marvel is just the cherry on top. Although MC is very scummy, author is clearly cooking My only concern is how the system is pushing him to stay scum
I really liked this fanfic, although I thought it would have more names that I know It's understandable since it takes place in 1920 or around that time and the only known one was Captain America or Wolverine when the war happened. The story is very good and the progression too. In the female characters the only one I know is Raven Darkholme, but there are images at hand to imagine them well. The MC is evil and lustful, I love that, although the evil thing is that he is too impulsive and childish. But I like how he matures with the passage of time, especially after the death of... In short, if you like the tags and the description along with the image on the cover, don't hesitate and read some chapters, I think you won't regret it
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One of best fanfic I have ever read , Mc was a pretty vile bastard in his last life due to "reasons" and he is changing slowly and becoming more likeable as the story goes one . Very well written , though till now ....there are close to zero stuff from marvel and first volume is based on a crime mafia family instead but still very enjoyable. Side characters are pretty interesting as well , only gripe of mine is that he doesn't use his powers much till now. Hopefully we will see him fighting with his powers and op weapons soon...
first of all, woah seeing the titlen I first though it would be another stupid harem fanfic without any plot but damn the author is a monster. Slick, our mc is a piece of trash with a truckload of trauma we see change throughout the chapters and masterfully done, particularly here in the black knight arc. The story takes its time to set itself without drowning us with marvel characters left and right which i appreciate. One of the best fanfic i've read. chef's kiss to the author
at first I really thought it would be just another smut novel on webnovel .... that why I stopped reading when there's only smut and no development.... but now you prove me wrong author-min there's finally some character development and the background story is progressing... keep up the good work author ;)
i will be honest this book is amazing the character while horrible is slowly growing and as he loses everything he is realizing his mistakes and learning from them he is slowly growing and becoming a better person. Another point is that the character is realistic he is gradually growing. the story is entertaining and fun. the world building is really really good overall an amazing book the author is amazing he is really talented. thank you for the book author
ネタバレを明かす I'll be honest This is my favourite novel right now you get what was shown in the beginning and in the synopsis an actual degenerate who's best ability is to run from responsibility but now put into a whole new world with power humans were never meant for. But we also see the slow character building, from a man who only wanted pleasure to someone actually trying to build something while still seeking pleasure. We have just met the Biggest yet Wall that Ricky will have to face and honestly i can't wait to see what LaughingFiend will build out of his character.
I don’t usually write revews, in fact, this is my first one. And when i tell you this shit is good ! I MEAN it ! Don’t base your opinion on the title and just go with the flow. This is a must read !
I think this might be my first review ever, but this book deserves it. Short Version: Don't let the title mislead you like me, this book's amazing in all aspects concerning a literary work, you can even skip the smut like me if you want and still lose nothing. Long Version: The Writing Quality is great, it's not overly complicated but not completely simplistic and blockish either. It reads incredibly smooth apart from certain hiccups now and then but that's normal, it happens to everyone not using ChatGPT like the current trend seems to be even though it makes everything go trash. You can understand everything. The updates are relatively regular, and it's insane for the length of the chapters and the quality of the story itself. The story development is crazy good, it shows the MC actually grow with every obstacle he faces, and even regular things he notices. He impacts the world around him properly and the way the characters react to him is great, the main character isn't the make all break all in this story unlike most and the overall plot is actually intriguing and makes you wonder about it. The best part is that when the mc acts dumb, he moves to fix it once he realises the problem. Him going from the useless deadbeat to what he is now has been nothing short of amazing. The involvment of the Vatican is just muah. My views on the character design should be apparent from the above segment, it's great. The OCs are great, they're smooth and thoughtful, not just stepping stones, info dumps, or background noise to incessant mc glazing. The World Background is just literal peak. I don't even read the smut in this story, that's how good the plot and the world it's in. Ending remarks, don't let the title throw you off. It's an awesome book and you'll greatly regret ignoring it.
Cada maldito capítulo mejora y nisiquiera estamos en el cañón es una historia independiente y es gloriosa jdr , nada es estupido ni aburrido y todo encaja y es malditamente adictiva , ya espero la parte de los viajes del tiempo y cuando este en el cañón que seguramente faltaran años
ネタバレを明かす this is written too dang well for what I originally started to read for and i LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well written marvel fics are tuff to find and rarer are well written harem fanfics yet it works. MOOOOOOORRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love the story takes a different route than most people updates are decent but would love for them to be more frequent mc's personality is kinda iffy since one second he acts like and adult and the next he becomes a kid again he's very similar to frank from shameless, hope mc grows as a character
Damn i didn't expect this at all a diamond in the rough it's really good keep it up author u have my support
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great story don't mind it not being marvel that much and also love the world building and the characters
Really thank You Parents that you were born coarse that shit Destroyed every scale that had.Really 1 of the best things that I had read
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MC is trashy but it's written very well, and he does develop a few redeeming qualities. If you're able to get over the protagonist's character then it's a very entertaining read.
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