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Well, *sigh* I came here because of the romance tag, please remove it. MC basically forced himself on every woman and he's trying to dominate them fully, there's no romance in this novel the tags are lying. I peeked at future chapters and I see that he even uses drugs, aphrodisiac, to force Robin... Remove the romance tag.
realmente es un cumplimiento de deseos muy bueno y entretenido pero actualiza muy poco me quedo con ganas de continuar la historia. pido más actualización 🙂
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I love MC I love the development of his character from weak to world dominating. The system was great and the other worlds were good Also the female characters were mostly good.
I've read every chapter and all I can say is that this fic went to shit real fast, the MCs power is really cool and has a lot of applications, at first he focused on it's development but as the story went on the story devolved into nothing but r18 chapters, the author can't bear the thought to stop thinking with his dick for a while to actually write a normal chapter, this story isn't going anywhere and you should lower your expectations of it drastically or you will be disappointed. In summary, it's terrible, don't even read it.
okayish writing quality. premise of the story and system are pretty interesting and op. but it mainly consists of rather bad smut. mc of rather questionable intelligence in a lot of cases... some moves are ok but they are rare... the romance tag is honestly a big lie since there is no real romance. mc here is more like a slave collector rather *shrug*
Good Fanfiction One Piece. This is the first time i read a fanfic with a MC Celestial Dragon and for the moment, it's awesome.
The Mc is just plain unlikable, and the constant gay undertones when he's binding men is annoying and honestly not funny, especially when it's constantly repeated. Also, I don't know why there's a romance tag considering that, so far, none of the girls he's with love him, Hancock has given up and basically accepted her fate but she seems not to enjoy his advances and was relieved when he ignored her. And the other is an undercover agent no need to explain.
The idea is good and the system is good, but you would have made it a beauty system because the Hancock sisters are also talented, and also the three sisters are under 15 years old, and this is the world of One Piece. There is no internet for this. Children do not know these things, and the servants. You need to know that they are slaves who were taken by force, or from childhood. All that is required of them is to carry out orders and not even ask if they come to a good dragon. You need to know that the CP monitors the dragons. 24/7If a servant discusses with his master, they will kill him without asking. As for Hancock, she is a child. Her mind is not deep. She was suddenly kidnapped and saw the blackness of the world. All she needs to do is tie her to the system and let her train. Let her see how other dragons treat their slaves, and every once in a while, summon her and comfort her with gentle words and foreplay. It will be imprinted on her mind, and when Tiger comes, let her run away, after all, Hancock. She wouldn't be Hancock if she didn't become... Empress Try again bro you have talent. correct!! Man do you use the system in men???
Mantap... cerita yang sangat bagus ,, tolong yang hot sama ibu mertua nya , haha Yah kalo bisa atur cerita ibu dan anak nya sekalian . . . . . . .
i like mc development how his "cheat" work is not something new but enough for entertainment hope his girl also get development and a moment to shine in later stage
Me gusta el avance se tu protagonista y como es tu estilo de escritura sigue así que vas por muy buen camino espero más historias de ti que vayan mejorando
The translation is very good 10/10, the raw story is average, but enjoyable 7/10,,........................................................................
Author can I .e shameless and as you to post atleast 2 chapters a day ..
I'm surprised at the amount of good reviews this novel has. the level of degeneracy in this novel is kinda sickening. pedo vibes are strong even from the first opening chapters.
😊😚😄😅😆😊😅☺️😉🫠🫠😃🙃😘😗😊😇😇😚😚😊☺️😚😙🥰🥰🤣😙😇😊☺️😉🫠😊😇[img=Cries][img=Envy][img=Feeling it][img=Good night][img=In a daze][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Shocked][img=Out of it]
good fanfic..... do not drop it. MC is ruthless and cunning and uses his advantages cleverly. he is not like other grass eating MC's .
It's been a long time since I found such a good fanfic! The translation is done excellently and the translator also filtered most of the Chinese nonsense. It is just a shame that the original author seemed to have stopped publishing 4 months ago. I don't know if there will be new releases after the 75 chapter.
I love it, The only negative which is absolutely killing the Novel is there are not enough chapters.
Completely pathetic and disappointing, the author/translator has to put the tag Yuri, for people who hate Yuri like me, don't waste your time, Yuri is NTR.
Nope caca 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
I'mma be honest, The author is Pedophile, so are the reader of his in patreon. This FF contain alot of pornography involving a children. Please report this shit.
It’s a good idea but it definitely isn’t the best translation I’ve seen and the execution of the idea isn’t very good. It is very hard to get through a lot of the chapters.
I like the main character is clan Sky Dragon in one piece. I like the main character is clan Sky Dragon in one piece. I like the main character is clan Sky Dragon in one piece. I like the main character is clan Sky Dragon in one piece.
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Well, *sigh* I came here because of the romance tag, please remove it. MC basically forced himself on every woman and he's trying to dominate them fully, there's no romance in this novel the tags are lying. I peeked at future chapters and I see that he even uses drugs, aphrodisiac, to force Robin... Remove the romance tag.
realmente es un cumplimiento de deseos muy bueno y entretenido pero actualiza muy poco me quedo con ganas de continuar la historia. pido más actualización 🙂
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I love MC I love the development of his character from weak to world dominating. The system was great and the other worlds were good Also the female characters were mostly good.
I've read every chapter and all I can say is that this fic went to shit real fast, the MCs power is really cool and has a lot of applications, at first he focused on it's development but as the story went on the story devolved into nothing but r18 chapters, the author can't bear the thought to stop thinking with his dick for a while to actually write a normal chapter, this story isn't going anywhere and you should lower your expectations of it drastically or you will be disappointed. In summary, it's terrible, don't even read it.
okayish writing quality. premise of the story and system are pretty interesting and op. but it mainly consists of rather bad smut. mc of rather questionable intelligence in a lot of cases... some moves are ok but they are rare... the romance tag is honestly a big lie since there is no real romance. mc here is more like a slave collector rather *shrug*
Good Fanfiction One Piece. This is the first time i read a fanfic with a MC Celestial Dragon and for the moment, it's awesome.
The Mc is just plain unlikable, and the constant gay undertones when he's binding men is annoying and honestly not funny, especially when it's constantly repeated. Also, I don't know why there's a romance tag considering that, so far, none of the girls he's with love him, Hancock has given up and basically accepted her fate but she seems not to enjoy his advances and was relieved when he ignored her. And the other is an undercover agent no need to explain.
The idea is good and the system is good, but you would have made it a beauty system because the Hancock sisters are also talented, and also the three sisters are under 15 years old, and this is the world of One Piece. There is no internet for this. Children do not know these things, and the servants. You need to know that they are slaves who were taken by force, or from childhood. All that is required of them is to carry out orders and not even ask if they come to a good dragon. You need to know that the CP monitors the dragons. 24/7If a servant discusses with his master, they will kill him without asking. As for Hancock, she is a child. Her mind is not deep. She was suddenly kidnapped and saw the blackness of the world. All she needs to do is tie her to the system and let her train. Let her see how other dragons treat their slaves, and every once in a while, summon her and comfort her with gentle words and foreplay. It will be imprinted on her mind, and when Tiger comes, let her run away, after all, Hancock. She wouldn't be Hancock if she didn't become... Empress Try again bro you have talent. correct!! Man do you use the system in men???
Mantap... cerita yang sangat bagus ,, tolong yang hot sama ibu mertua nya , haha Yah kalo bisa atur cerita ibu dan anak nya sekalian . . . . . . .
i like mc development how his "cheat" work is not something new but enough for entertainment hope his girl also get development and a moment to shine in later stage
Me gusta el avance se tu protagonista y como es tu estilo de escritura sigue así que vas por muy buen camino espero más historias de ti que vayan mejorando
The translation is very good 10/10, the raw story is average, but enjoyable 7/10,,........................................................................
Author can I .e shameless and as you to post atleast 2 chapters a day ..
I'm surprised at the amount of good reviews this novel has. the level of degeneracy in this novel is kinda sickening. pedo vibes are strong even from the first opening chapters.
😊😚😄😅😆😊😅☺️😉🫠🫠😃🙃😘😗😊😇😇😚😚😊☺️😚😙🥰🥰🤣😙😇😊☺️😉🫠😊😇[img=Cries][img=Envy][img=Feeling it][img=Good night][img=In a daze][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Shocked][img=Out of it]
good fanfic..... do not drop it. MC is ruthless and cunning and uses his advantages cleverly. he is not like other grass eating MC's .
It's been a long time since I found such a good fanfic! The translation is done excellently and the translator also filtered most of the Chinese nonsense. It is just a shame that the original author seemed to have stopped publishing 4 months ago. I don't know if there will be new releases after the 75 chapter.
I love it, The only negative which is absolutely killing the Novel is there are not enough chapters.
Completely pathetic and disappointing, the author/translator has to put the tag Yuri, for people who hate Yuri like me, don't waste your time, Yuri is NTR.
Nope caca 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
I'mma be honest, The author is Pedophile, so are the reader of his in patreon. This FF contain alot of pornography involving a children. Please report this shit.
It’s a good idea but it definitely isn’t the best translation I’ve seen and the execution of the idea isn’t very good. It is very hard to get through a lot of the chapters.
I like the main character is clan Sky Dragon in one piece. I like the main character is clan Sky Dragon in one piece. I like the main character is clan Sky Dragon in one piece. I like the main character is clan Sky Dragon in one piece.