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Reborn in Dragon Ball as Son Goten: Start Bonus Ultra Instinct-Sign
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概要
Disclaimer?:
The purpose of author in this AU was to make it similar to Future Trunks timeline, where in this timeline only Goten was a survivor and the world was without hope.
Since it's Goten's story, it starts with few years after Cell saga. If it was Trunks story, it would start with few years after Android saga.
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Synopsis:
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It has been three years since Jiang Hui transmigrated to the world of Dragon Ball. His soul merged and took over the body of a four year old Goten .
After transmigrating, he realized that the timeline he was in was f*cked up. All the Z-fighters died at the hands of Cell in the Cell Games and now were refusing to be resurrected for some reason.
He was the only warrior left to protect the earth if one ignored the dead beat old man Roshi and little bald head Krillin.
In desperation, not wanting to die, he trained desperately for three years and mastered the full power of Super Saiyan transformation, but still struggled to break through to Super Saiyan II.
Just when Goten feels extremely frustrated about not being able to break through to Super Saiyan II, and is ready to accept his grim fate, a system notification rings in his mind. His golden finger, a god-level attribute picking system, finally appeared after three years of transmigration. The system activates and issues a novice gift package Ultra Instinct - Sign.
This newfound power might be the key to defeating Cell and protecting the Earth.
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Hi Guys, I have been working on this fanfic for a while and finally decided to share it with you guys. This is a translated work, but I have made sure to filter out all the kinks and unpleasant name mistakes and other errors from it. But since it's my first translation work, it might be a bit lacking. I will be uploading the whole work, at the moment of upload, I have around 50 chapters left which I need to work on, and then re-refine the previously done chapters before uploading. Basically I have to re-read 3 times before uploading to make sure there aren't some discrepancies.
For the curious fellas out there wondering what's the chinese raws:
Name: 我！孙悟天，开局奖励自在极意功
English translation would be: I! Son Goten, Starting With The Secret of the Self-centered Sign
By author: 赛亚龙珠
English translation would be: Saiyan in Dragon Ball
You don't have to worry about me dropping mid way. And once the final touches are done, I might speed up the upload rate to finish the work here. I am a student, so sometimes, my real life work might interfere with my upload rate. But dontchu worry :D I got you guys.
Doing this work, I learned that translation was hard work. Took over an hour and half to refine a single chapter, that too when i was just refining the stuff, before uploading have to re-read it twice to make sure everything is in order... 0_0 Kudos to those kind strangers for giving us those gems.
(GPT doesn't count, it fuc*s up the feel of the chapter that one would get by working on it himself.)
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If you plan on negatively reviewing this book, please do so after reading till 50 or 60 chapters (You can skim read it). Because I know that some readers might have nothing but negative reviews due to early plot development lol. Those unpleasant developments get a closure around chapter 63 or 68 (I think).
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I can easily say this is by far my favorite dragon ball story the character feels real and are fleshed out oh and I'm also enjoying the interaction between krillin and gotten more and more cause it shows the growth of both sides and the decision that krillin made makes it more important so he can keep up with the flow of dbz and dbs all in all a very good story i could say more but it will spoil alot so I will refrain from it though keep uobthe good work mate Ps: I kinda wabt to see goten go to other world's outside of db universe he does have the ability aftwr fighting janenmba i think it would give the story more longevity and soace for you to crate some interesting filler arc
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Translator here, giving this book a 5 star review. Because why not? I worked hard for this shid! The story start is a bit shaky and full of plot holes. Basically the author wanted to have Goten as a protagonist, but wanted his situation to be similar to Future Trunks, where Trunks timeline had Androids killing off everyone. In this fanfic AU timeline, Goten is the only warrior left on Earth after Cell kills everybody in Cell games. Author didn't want to give up on dragon balls, so he kept dende alive. But also doesn't want to revive the Z warriors who died, so he gave a flimsy reason that they don't want to revive saying that deceased should not interfere in the matters of the living. Although the real reason is given way later around after 57+ chapters. Canon is not strictly followed. Fanon is used a lot in this, so don't expect there to be canon stuff, somethings won't even make sense in canonical terms. Overall, it was a nice read. Give it a try. Don't question weird stuff, sometimes the stuff and reasoning of Chinese authors does not make sense. We don't question two things! One is the exaggerated numbers in the CNs, and other is the cast social norms/behavior.
Was wondering why this felt like something that I've already read. Then I realized another author by The name of Rex_Zatch translated this exact CN as well. Though, his work was one-to-one copy whereas you have put in a lot of effort to make this story very readable. Thanks for your hard work!
I have read a similar translated work before, it's just that this one is of higher quality. Good work.
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This fanfic Is really good in my opinion. The characters are great. The mc is op and I’m a sucker for op mc’s. But either way I recommend this book to all of you.
Usually Dragon Ball ffs also have the disease of 100s of ch per fight scene, but this ff is quite good for a Dragon Ball ff without the said disease also the translation quality, progress speed and update speed are quite good so great job Translator and Author
overall it is good. i am giving it a 5 star because i like it. lets see how it goes.
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I am impressed with the quality of the translation. Definitely perfect for people craving some DB.
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Very good translation you can tell the amount of effort was put in and the author genuinely cares about the quality.
Remarcable traduccion work, This is the first MTL fanfic that I actually im ejoying. The ship of goten x videl is funny and i like it. Keep the good work and hope for more chapters. Totally recommended
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Dragon Ball does go well with Chinese set of mind somehow 😂 The story is complete AU, forget about canon and just enjoy a new set timeline altogether. A MC that is completely evolving on each fight, and fight like a Saiyan enjoying and getting benefits of their Zenkai boost while he is at it. Hell even Broly is the DBZ movie one with the potential of the DBS one, an absolute evil savage. PD: Get this fair warning there is baching of the main cast on this one and yet conserve the essence of their personalities.