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概要
In the glittering world of London's elite, the Whitmore family reigns supreme - until a mysterious stranger, Victor Mallory, arrives and upends everything.
The Whitmores become entangled in Victor's web of secrets and lies, With a gripping blend of high-stakes thrills, simmering romance, and suspenseful twists, Can the Whitmores survive Victor's machinations unscathed?
Victor’s Motto -
“The ends justify the means when it comes to fulfilling my goals.”
Warning:
1. There will be no set word limit, according to need some chapters can be large and some small.
2. Read at least 12 to 15 chapters before giving a review.
3. Some scenes can be detailed so be prepared.
4. Be attached to any characters at your own risk.
5. There will be many businesses, which means deals, and long negotiations, so be prepared.
Disclaimer -All characters and settings are fictional, any similarity with reality is purely coincidence.
PS: It's my first work, I'm hoping it turns out well. All reviews and constructive criticisms are welcome. Grammar and English should be fine, but I'm not sure how good the dialogues and scenarios will be. Hopefully, I'll improve as this novel progresses forward.
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Only giving full reviews so that some public can come and chat with me so that we can together criticize this as i alone cant do it as it will me lonely and i dont want feel lonely, Beleive it
Heys been reading for a while , and really not expected to like it much due to realism , as i generally prefer more fiction with magic reincarnation system , you know what I am talking about , but yeah it got me hooked
The circle has expanded from just Whitmore playing house to their impact to others , the fear in Alistair as mentioned Whitmore power is great , I surely want to see one scene where they will get the chance of displaying their power.
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I don't know whether you listen to my suggestion or if was already there , but i wanted focus on james , and he came into focus but with it cam focus on whole shaw family, i feel going forward focus will be on it .
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The way whitmore family status and power is being shown , I am guessing that they have significant say in government status if shown any in the future in novel . Business aspect is already shown , a political will make it more fire .
Hello big brothers here I am again to point out some things , some past has been shown of mc but nothing concrete or related to other main characters but It is surely shown that victor Mallory is a persona of mc Andrew Sherman ,it can be the only one or one of the many
ネタバレを明かす Here one more 5 starts review to promote it more some brothers have increased since the lonely me but we have more to go .as such give 5 star so it starts showing the rating
It is well written for a beginner,beginning is good pace is slow but every 2-3 chapter some thing happens which keeps us hooked , first victor checking the mansion ,then his anger ,then his coming for meeting at exact time , then his business proposal , and then the tremors ,it build tension slowly
Some scenes feel like exactly copied and some feel like changed and some scenes original but i want some more focus on james shaw the scion of one of the elite family
To me this novel/author tries to hard to be "deep" like the writing style, this is supposed to be serious novel but when I'm reading it it comes of as comical. Atleast as far as I've r I've read, that all am gonna say as I did not get far in reading it.
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- 1 Chapter 1 :The Race of Fate 5 months ago
- 2 Chapter 2 :Victor Mallory 5 months ago
- 3 Chapter 3:The Whitmore Legacy 5 months ago
- 4 Chapter 4 : Title at The End 5 months ago
- 5 Chapter 5: A Family Outing (Part-1) 5 months ago
- 6 Chapter 6: A Family Outing (Part-2) 5 months ago
- 7 Chapter 7: A Family Outing (Part-3) 5 months ago
- 8 Chapter 8: A Family Outing (Part-4) 5 months ago
- 9 Chapter 9: A Business Proposal(Part-1) 5 months ago
- 10 Chapter 10: A Business Proposal(Part-2) 5 months ago
- 11 Chapter 11:Behind The Meeting 5 months ago
- 12 Chapter 12: An Abrupt Exit 5 months ago
- 13 Chapter 13: The Condemned 5 months ago
- 14 Chapter 14: A Clash of Ambitions (Part-1) 5 months ago
- 15 Chapter 15 :Clash of Ambitions(Part-2) 5 months ago
- 16 Chapter 16: Shattered Ambitions(Part-1) 5 months ago
- 17 Chapter 17: Shattered Ambitions(Part-2) 5 months ago
- 18 Chapter 18: The Shaw’s Reckoning 5 months ago
- 19 Chapter 19: A Sacrifice for Legacy (Part-1)) 5 months ago
- 20 Chapter 20: A Sacrifice For Legacy(Part-2) 5 months ago
- 21 Chapter 21:Bacchus' Bane: The Night of Regret 5 months ago
- 22 Chapter 22:Sins of Father(Part-1) 5 months ago
- 23 Chapter 23: Sins of the father (Part-2 ) 5 months ago
- 24 Chapter 24: Nell 5 months ago
- 25 Chapter 25: Remorse 5 months ago
- 26 Chapter 26:The Brother's Burden to Bear (Part-1) 5 months ago
- 27 Chapter 27:The Brother's Burden to Bear {Part-2} 5 months ago
- 28 Chapter 28: Regnald Davis 5 months ago
- 29 Chapter 29: The Wolves at The Door 5 months ago
- 30 Chapter 30:Bargaining(Part-1) 5 months ago
- 31 Chapter 31: Baragaing(Part-2) 5 months ago
- 32 Chapter 32: An Unexpected Encounter 5 months ago
- 33 Chapter 33: Reporting(Part-1) 5 months ago
- 34 Chapter 34: Reporting(Part-2) 5 months ago
- 35 Chapter 35:The Evening Meeting(Part-1) 5 months ago
- 36 Chapter 36:The Evening Meeting(Part2) 5 months ago
- 37 Chapter 37: The Evening Meeting(Part-2) 4 months ago
- 38 Chapter 38: Pinochle (Part-1) 4 months ago
- 39 Chapter 39: Pinochle (Part-2) 4 months ago
- 40 Chapter 40: Pinochle(Part-3) 4 months ago
- 41 Chapter 41: Pinochle(End) 4 months ago
- 42 Chapter 42: Finer Celebration 4 months ago
- 43 Chapter 43: Denial 4 months ago
- 44 Chapter 44: Contrast 4 months ago
- 45 Chapter 45: A Haven Revisited 4 months ago
- 46 Chapter 46: Silent Gratitude 4 months ago
- 47 Chapter 47: A Delicate Balance 4 months ago
- 48 Chapter 48: Warning 4 months ago
- 49 Chapter 49: Whispers in the Night 4 months ago
- 50 Chapter 50: Echoes of The Past(Part-1) 4 months ago
- 51 Chapter 51: Echoes of The Past(Part-2) 4 months ago
- 52 Chapter 52: Echoes of The Past(Part-3) 4 months ago
- 53 Chapter 53: Echoes of The Past(Part-4) 4 months ago
- 54 A New Dawn 4 months ago
- 55 Penny 4 months ago
- 56 Marcus 4 months ago
- 57 Detour 4 months ago
- 58 Storm 4 months ago
- 59 A Day at the Races(Part-1) 4 months ago
- 60 A Day at The Races(Part-2) 4 months ago
- 61 Unsavoury Trade 4 months ago
- 62 The Crimson 4 months ago
- 63 Utterly Destroyed 4 months ago
- 64 A Small Vial 4 months ago
- 65 The Final Preparations 4 months ago
- 66 A Mother's Lament 3 months ago
- 67 A Mother's Plea 3 months ago
- 68 A Mother’s Mission 3 months ago
- 69 Redemption 3 months ago
- 70 Confrontation and Revelation 3 months ago
- 71 A Business Outing 3 months ago
- 72 An Unexpected Evening 3 months ago
- 73 A Night of Misunderstandings 3 months ago
- 74 Dreams of Love and Commitment(Part-1) 3 months ago
- 75 Dreams of Love and Commitment(Part-2) 3 months ago
- 76 Dreams of Love and Commitment(Part-3) 3 months ago
- 77 Dreams of Love and Commitment(Part-4) 3 months ago
- 78 Diverging paths 3 months ago
- 79 Another Outing 3 months ago
- 80 An Unexpected Detour 3 months ago
- 81 Perilous Waters 3 months ago
- 82 Terrified Victor 3 months ago
- 83 Safe Harbour 3 months ago
- 84 I can do it. 3 months ago
- 85 Sleeping Pair 3 months ago
- 86 Unveiling Hope(Part-1) 3 months ago
- 87 Unveiling Hope(Part-2) 3 months ago
- 88 Unveiling Hope(Part-3) 3 months ago
- 89 Unveiling Hope(Part-4) 3 months ago
- 90 Unveiling Hope(END) 3 months ago
- 91 A Night of Worry(Part-1) 3 months ago
- 92 A Night of Worry(Part-2) 2 months ago
It's my friend that is writing it ,he is in love with novel ,fiction and tries to live in them ,forgetting about real life and now he is trying to create his own world so others can live in it so support