To me this novel/author tries to hard to be "deep" like the writing style, this is supposed to be serious novel but when I'm reading it it comes of as comical. Atleast as far as I've r I've read, that all am gonna say as I did not get far in reading it.
Man, what's with this suddenly and unnatural character change from Sarah? In just 8 chapters we see her go from seeing a dude for the first time, ( don't know if they interacted time.)to having s*x dreams of the guy, to some form of "freedom". And I get that am only on chapter 8 and maybe most of the is this is already explained but to me the novel tries to hard.
Why is this moving so unnaturally fast? Where's the build up like this Sarah character is telling her sister to not be so easily entranced by Victor but in the next chapter she be having s*x dream of him? I know that there's a "self insert" tag, but you could at least make it believable.
These characters all feels needlessly profound, especially this Jonathan character. I know that it's like he's instinct or whatever that he cultivated all through his life, but it's just to specific for his opinion if someone he met for the first time. Is there superpowers in the novel?
Then why the "villain" tag?
Hope to be seeing more of this
of course we're still here, just hoping for more chapters. 😁😁😁😁😁😁
I hope to see more of this.😊😊😊
Man, this chapter definitively felt like a Chinese novel. Those quotes and the MC's thinking is that of a Chinese mc.
How is he the only one?
Breaking Dao
Fantasy · Romeru