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I've read till 74 chapters , right about now. Sadly, this story in terms of writing hasn't changed a lot. I had a lot of high expectations. But the story is written in terms of "cause and effect." The mc is basically doing this and this and as such, this is happening . It's just basically narration at this point . This isn't just written well
Well all I've read so far is pretty good but the one thing killing it for me is that it's written in present tense. I have no idea why but to me it just doesn't feel right. Well yeah that's only a personal preference
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AFTER READING THIS NOVEL I LOVE IT . THIS NOVEL IS GOLD. THIS COULD BECOME A MULTIVERSE STORY IF ZORRO ROMANCES KAGUYA THE RABBIT GODDESS..ZORRO WILL NEED HER POWER TO CROSSOVER TO OTHER ANIME WORLD AND GAME WORLDS. CMON WAS KAGUYA EVIL OR SHE IS THANOS'S MAD TITAN CLONE TRYING TO STOP GREAT EVIL AND THE AVENGERS WRONG..ZORRO NEEDS TO HELP KAGUYA AND TRAVEL TOGETHER IN THE MULTIVERSE.
Honestly , it's a good story. From the premise to the current plot development ,it's been an enjoyable experience. Though I really don't like the ridiculousness of the three sword style or him getting dumber , but beyond that, it's a finely crafted story. Keep it up ,author
Pretty good story. The MC is strong but isn't absolutely bulldozing his way through everything with no challenge. The strength progression feels naturally smooth. Grammar is a bit wonky sometimes but it's not too much of an issue.
Will there be romance? ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
it is awesome, and it's one of the best Zoro fic's I have read, can't wait for more updates
what's the pairing? I know Zoro doesn't have a pairing in one piece, but this is Naruto. the Naruto world has many potential women who could tame the beast that is Zoro. anko for example, or samui, yugito. the list goes on
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En general la historia es bastante interesante, incluso en su comiendo algo lento, pero es lo que realmente me gustó por qué no me gustan las historias que son demasiado rápidas que hagan al MC estúpidamente fuerte sin un proceso de mejora, ni demasiado lentas que hagan al MC un inútil en situaciones, creo que ya es un comienzo muy bueno considerando que es una historia que no se centra en el núcleo de la historia de Naruto que es en Konoha, tuviste una buena idea para el comiendo y a mi parecer emotiva, sigue así por qué realmente me gustó tu creatividad♥️♥️💯
When I first read this it was but slow but as it progress it become a lot more interesting I highly recommend it and hope thier would be more updates in the near future
Highly recommanded. So far, It's one of the best crossover fics that I ever seen. The main character is likeable. The pacing is alright and doesn't dwell too much on useless things
Wrong Tag. Please change the tag. The overpowered tag is unnecessary and weak to strong tag is missing.
Well what can I say ? The story is good overall we get an interesting development of the land of iron which is pretty rare and refreshing among the Naruto’s fanfic. If you want something deviating from cannon and a with a great overview of the ninja world then this story will be an interesting read. 👍 Thanks for the story author! Awaiting more chapters ❤️
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this is a great read, zoro's template is very compatible in naruto verse being a swordman and no devil fruit. sadly pakura x mc is not a thing.
I've read till 74 chapters , right about now. Sadly, this story in terms of writing hasn't changed a lot. I had a lot of high expectations. But the story is written in terms of "cause and effect." The mc is basically doing this and this and as such, this is happening . It's just basically narration at this point . This isn't just written well
Well all I've read so far is pretty good but the one thing killing it for me is that it's written in present tense. I have no idea why but to me it just doesn't feel right. Well yeah that's only a personal preference
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
AFTER READING THIS NOVEL I LOVE IT . THIS NOVEL IS GOLD. THIS COULD BECOME A MULTIVERSE STORY IF ZORRO ROMANCES KAGUYA THE RABBIT GODDESS..ZORRO WILL NEED HER POWER TO CROSSOVER TO OTHER ANIME WORLD AND GAME WORLDS. CMON WAS KAGUYA EVIL OR SHE IS THANOS'S MAD TITAN CLONE TRYING TO STOP GREAT EVIL AND THE AVENGERS WRONG..ZORRO NEEDS TO HELP KAGUYA AND TRAVEL TOGETHER IN THE MULTIVERSE.
Honestly , it's a good story. From the premise to the current plot development ,it's been an enjoyable experience. Though I really don't like the ridiculousness of the three sword style or him getting dumber , but beyond that, it's a finely crafted story. Keep it up ,author
Pretty good story. The MC is strong but isn't absolutely bulldozing his way through everything with no challenge. The strength progression feels naturally smooth. Grammar is a bit wonky sometimes but it's not too much of an issue.
Will there be romance? ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
it is awesome, and it's one of the best Zoro fic's I have read, can't wait for more updates
what's the pairing? I know Zoro doesn't have a pairing in one piece, but this is Naruto. the Naruto world has many potential women who could tame the beast that is Zoro. anko for example, or samui, yugito. the list goes on
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌🔥👌🔥👌🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
En general la historia es bastante interesante, incluso en su comiendo algo lento, pero es lo que realmente me gustó por qué no me gustan las historias que son demasiado rápidas que hagan al MC estúpidamente fuerte sin un proceso de mejora, ni demasiado lentas que hagan al MC un inútil en situaciones, creo que ya es un comienzo muy bueno considerando que es una historia que no se centra en el núcleo de la historia de Naruto que es en Konoha, tuviste una buena idea para el comiendo y a mi parecer emotiva, sigue así por qué realmente me gustó tu creatividad♥️♥️💯
When I first read this it was but slow but as it progress it become a lot more interesting I highly recommend it and hope thier would be more updates in the near future
Highly recommanded. So far, It's one of the best crossover fics that I ever seen. The main character is likeable. The pacing is alright and doesn't dwell too much on useless things
Wrong Tag. Please change the tag. The overpowered tag is unnecessary and weak to strong tag is missing.
Well what can I say ? The story is good overall we get an interesting development of the land of iron which is pretty rare and refreshing among the Naruto’s fanfic. If you want something deviating from cannon and a with a great overview of the ninja world then this story will be an interesting read. 👍 Thanks for the story author! Awaiting more chapters ❤️
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this is a great read, zoro's template is very compatible in naruto verse being a swordman and no devil fruit. sadly pakura x mc is not a thing.