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novel is basically good but.....in later chapters there are missing content and repetitive chapters again and again.....is author really not in the mood to correct this or just dozing off somewhere in his own fantasy.....and fucking up the minds of us readers
Good story building, great character development, fun to read. BUT, I'm not sure when it really started but like about ch.720 I started to see some "notes" (by the author, editor or translator), that "missing content was going to be updated soon". Well it's been months now and it is still missing and it's started to hinder the story going forward. Stopped reading at ch.740 until the missing content gets resolved.
hahaha the translation sucks the story was good but , damn , W translation it's crazy'
It's a great story, problem lies in the last few chapters, there is missing content or repeated content. Hope it gets fixed.
Read this if you okay with - MC that relies too much on the system - Hypocite MC - Missing words and paragraphs in many chapters
More the 100 chapters are missing and many repeated chapters and its not being corrected, added or fixed.
story was so good, but lately, u have been royally fkn up. im paying for repeat chapters and missing content. wtf really come on, don't u even care anymore? u used to at least respond to some readers, but now I feel u are ignoring us and don't care that we are paying for this crap and maybe u even doing it on purpose to get us to pay more I'm srry I was a really big fan to this novel but it's going to shit now srry if I sound like an as. s but whatever
can you fix your book bro All of the chapters are you been updated for the past 2 weeks all messed up you need to fix it
After a few women in the beginning , entire plot and story about other women is repetitive . I left after about reading 380 raw chapters. Everything became same repetition of same plot . This is a good translation but it's plot lacks substance. I don't how author will continue this. He is now giving a mysterious background to MC then what will happen after this? ??
I like this kind of story I thought it was going to be all smut? but no it's pretty good make you think Mom you better not be trying to pick up any guys at my school !
Despite the ML being a hypocritical, manipulative, lying, cheater; the story is entertaining in the beginning. But the redundancy of him seducing countless older woman gets boring. Also, this is a harem story; yet, the spice level is low.
ai just got to chapter 30 and this book is really good so far but honestly there is no friends that would give money like that.... and the MCs friend did this for him in his past life not this one and hes asking his friend to go after revenge for himself more then the MC and Y the hell is the MC even trying to seriously go out with these older women when he wants to go back/be with the girl from college that he found loved him and stayed by him!! Honestly what the MC is doing right now is fine because hes only really going after 1 but if he goes after more then 1 then its messed up and then if he still goes after any of them when college starts and tries to go out with her while going after all of these other women then its not fair to the girl. from the past and even the one in college and even to the other women... honestly it is messed up as of now anyways because he is still in love or wants to be with the girl from college but hasnt meet her yet in this life and I can understand wanting to be with someone to avoid thinking about her and all that till the time comes but its still messed up to love someone and still go be with someone else!!!!!
there are translation mistakes and the characters are a bit 2d but nonetheless makes for an entertaining read, I just wish there would be a beta reader or checker for these. loving how the system give the mc reasons too gain the money and not just send to his bank out of nowhere, this way even if the system is gone one day, his connections will still be real
The book overall is really good. I like how the MC interacts with the aunties, not too raunchy butnot too innocent either. I do want to know, however, if this story is leaning towards the harem side or monogamy.
Hello, is this going to be a r18 harem or a mesh of flirting the entire novel?
Interesting premise and a promising start to the story. Mc is interesting and I see some potential for his character evolution. Translation quality leaves room for improvement and certain expressions or phrases should be explained if mentioned repeatedly.
All around the story’s entertaining. until like chapter 700 then it just turns to a sh*t show. Constantly missing context with a message saying it will be fixed, currently it’s been a month since the chapter was updated and still no fixes. There is repeated chapters or long sections on paragraph from that have been used to take up word count. Character descriptions just basically say whether the person is pretty, handsome, beautiful or ugly, not really many descriptive traits and features of the characters, not sure if it’s originally like that and it’s just the translation or not. Hasn’t really fleshed out the details about the geography of the world this story’s in. In the beginning he didn’t want his mom to work at magic city so i figured it’s a urban fantasy then later in the story starts talking about America so idek at this point. So over all story’s good in the beginning but then quickly turns to sh*t, hope this gets fixed because i feel like it would have more potential. There’s more than what i’ve talked about but this is it more my review.
novel is basically good but.....in later chapters there are missing content and repetitive chapters again and again.....is author really not in the mood to correct this or just dozing off somewhere in his own fantasy.....and fucking up the minds of us readers
Good story building, great character development, fun to read. BUT, I'm not sure when it really started but like about ch.720 I started to see some "notes" (by the author, editor or translator), that "missing content was going to be updated soon". Well it's been months now and it is still missing and it's started to hinder the story going forward. Stopped reading at ch.740 until the missing content gets resolved.
hahaha the translation sucks the story was good but , damn , W translation it's crazy'
It's a great story, problem lies in the last few chapters, there is missing content or repeated content. Hope it gets fixed.
Read this if you okay with - MC that relies too much on the system - Hypocite MC - Missing words and paragraphs in many chapters
More the 100 chapters are missing and many repeated chapters and its not being corrected, added or fixed.
story was so good, but lately, u have been royally fkn up. im paying for repeat chapters and missing content. wtf really come on, don't u even care anymore? u used to at least respond to some readers, but now I feel u are ignoring us and don't care that we are paying for this crap and maybe u even doing it on purpose to get us to pay more I'm srry I was a really big fan to this novel but it's going to shit now srry if I sound like an as. s but whatever
can you fix your book bro All of the chapters are you been updated for the past 2 weeks all messed up you need to fix it
After a few women in the beginning , entire plot and story about other women is repetitive . I left after about reading 380 raw chapters. Everything became same repetition of same plot . This is a good translation but it's plot lacks substance. I don't how author will continue this. He is now giving a mysterious background to MC then what will happen after this? ??
I like this kind of story I thought it was going to be all smut? but no it's pretty good make you think Mom you better not be trying to pick up any guys at my school !
Despite the ML being a hypocritical, manipulative, lying, cheater; the story is entertaining in the beginning. But the redundancy of him seducing countless older woman gets boring. Also, this is a harem story; yet, the spice level is low.
ai just got to chapter 30 and this book is really good so far but honestly there is no friends that would give money like that.... and the MCs friend did this for him in his past life not this one and hes asking his friend to go after revenge for himself more then the MC and Y the hell is the MC even trying to seriously go out with these older women when he wants to go back/be with the girl from college that he found loved him and stayed by him!! Honestly what the MC is doing right now is fine because hes only really going after 1 but if he goes after more then 1 then its messed up and then if he still goes after any of them when college starts and tries to go out with her while going after all of these other women then its not fair to the girl. from the past and even the one in college and even to the other women... honestly it is messed up as of now anyways because he is still in love or wants to be with the girl from college but hasnt meet her yet in this life and I can understand wanting to be with someone to avoid thinking about her and all that till the time comes but its still messed up to love someone and still go be with someone else!!!!!
there are translation mistakes and the characters are a bit 2d but nonetheless makes for an entertaining read, I just wish there would be a beta reader or checker for these. loving how the system give the mc reasons too gain the money and not just send to his bank out of nowhere, this way even if the system is gone one day, his connections will still be real
The book overall is really good. I like how the MC interacts with the aunties, not too raunchy butnot too innocent either. I do want to know, however, if this story is leaning towards the harem side or monogamy.
Hello, is this going to be a r18 harem or a mesh of flirting the entire novel?
Interesting premise and a promising start to the story. Mc is interesting and I see some potential for his character evolution. Translation quality leaves room for improvement and certain expressions or phrases should be explained if mentioned repeatedly.
All around the story’s entertaining. until like chapter 700 then it just turns to a sh*t show. Constantly missing context with a message saying it will be fixed, currently it’s been a month since the chapter was updated and still no fixes. There is repeated chapters or long sections on paragraph from that have been used to take up word count. Character descriptions just basically say whether the person is pretty, handsome, beautiful or ugly, not really many descriptive traits and features of the characters, not sure if it’s originally like that and it’s just the translation or not. Hasn’t really fleshed out the details about the geography of the world this story’s in. In the beginning he didn’t want his mom to work at magic city so i figured it’s a urban fantasy then later in the story starts talking about America so idek at this point. So over all story’s good in the beginning but then quickly turns to sh*t, hope this gets fixed because i feel like it would have more potential. There’s more than what i’ve talked about but this is it more my review.