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Hey, author, can you send this to me on Google Drive so that I can help with the grammar and vocabulary mistakes because I really want to read this.
A masterpiece. Please don't give up writing. I absolutely advise you to read this fanfic, I've been waiting for a supernatural fanfic for such a long time!
bueno realmente espero que sigas actualizando la novela aunque sea un poco de manera irregular .............................................................
meu irmão finalmente encontrei uma fanfic de supernatural e melhor ainda é um brasileiro que escreve ela, saiba que estou aqui lendo e te apoiando o maximo q dá, força irmão
The novel was a really fun read. but like most stories based in the supernatural universe, it has been dropped "temporarily"
seems interesting but the story flow is bad and the dialogues looks like AI generated or translated from a CN fic. LoL the first dialogue alone turned me off already, nobody says "oh you convinced me". MC wasn't even convincing, just your typical Cardboard characters with soulless dialogues.
The premise is good, but the grammar makes me want to cut out my eyes. You should definitely get some better software, or if it’s a person translating then find someone who can actually speak English. I am sure it’s much better in the original language.
Bro you had me at no harem. Harems just become boring if you’ve stayed on webnovel as long I have. Also I like it when characters gain stuff from other worlds that gradually make them stronger. Have you ever seen that one novel where multiple characters travel through worlds. Basic normal people from earth taken to this being that’s referred to as god. They can buy bloodlines and abilites from worlds or even gain them in said world they visit. That’s what this synopsis reminded me of so I’m looking forward to it.
A masterpiece. Please don't give up writing. I absolutely advise you to read this fanfic, I've been waiting for a supernatural fanfic for such a long time!
The first thing I would like to say - Give me your typing skills!!! Man, I can't really type beyond a chapter or two in a day and you posted 40 chapters in 9 days?! You kidding me?! Anyways, coming to the book itself- It's great! The idea, the vision; everything comes together really well. That being said, the only thing I would suggest is to get a grammatical editing tool like Grammarly. Since you translate from Brazilian Portuguese, the translator can botch up sometimes. But all in all, it's a pretty solid book. If you guys are hesitating, don't. This is a novel with real thought behind it. The author has improved tremendously in the latest chapter, so it will be an enjoyable experience. Good luck :)
Hhhhhhhhhhhuuuuuuuummmmm gggggggy I love this so much I love it so much I can’t wait to see it in person I love it I love it I love it and I love the way you did the colors and the way you made it so much I love it so much I can’t stop loving it I love it so much I love you so much and I hope you have a great day today and I hope you have a great day and I love you too and I hope you have a great day I love you and I hope you have a great day too and I hope you have a great day at work is it is it is it is a good day and I love you too and I’m going home and I’m going out of the world and I’m so happy that you’re doing great job and I’m just so much love to hear that I hope you’re so proud that you’re so proud and I’m sure that you’re so much fun I hope you’re so much love you so have fun and I love you too I and I I’m so proud that I can’t stop uetyeyeu I can’t stop by to say I love it is it is so good luck with your work out of here I hope it works for your work and you have a great 👍 keep up ⬆️ with the work and keep it going I hope you have fun with your work is very important to me I will be happy for the rest yof yeueuwuueyeyey I love you ❤️ and I will miss your work too and you have a good night sleep and good luck too and I’ll talk soon and I’ll see you later I love and kiss you and kiss your
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I’m currently 35 chapters in and it’s good. I would personally prefer it if the protagonist was a little more overpowered… but right now it’s looking like the author is going for a more balanced approach. 🤷🏻♂️ One thing new readers should be aware of is that the whole ‘horror movie’ aspect of the story is relatively separate from his day-to-day activities (unless you consider living in the TV series Supernatural as horror 😅) so this isn’t a hodgepodge amalgamation of a bunch of horror stories causing chaos and confusion, it’s ‘systemic’ and orderly. The characters represented aren’t perfectly representative to their theatrical counterparts either… as the author has gone for a reasonably more realistic portrayal, and while this particular alteration feels slightly off putting I believe it’s better for the overall plot. So if you happen to like Supernatural/horror and your looking for a little light reading then this story is a good choice.
Uma obra muito boa com grande potencial, até o momento estou gostando muito, já estou começando a ficar ansioso todos os dias esperando o lançamento de mais capítulos. Suguru padeiro recomenda esta fic.
Well, it does have a few grammar errors, but its not something that affect the quality of the work. A Supernatural fanfic is amazing and a breath of fresh air, I cannot recomend it enough. Now stop reading this and go read the fic!
It’s great work, author, keep it up, don’t give up. Many will come to criticize, but few know how hard it is for us BRs to translate into English… The FF idea is great, dude, very creative. I’ve always liked the Supernatural series, but unfortunately, there are few fanfics about it. It’s good to finally have some. The chapters have a good update rate, the characters are well written, and as the story progresses, you can see the evolution. Go for it!
Great story it has a few grammar errors but there not horrible I RECOMMEND TO HORROR SHOW/MOVIE LOVERS
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histoire intéressante, j en suis au chapitre 25 et je trouve que c est un très très bon début, j espère que l histoire continuera sur cette lancé
Author's a G, what can I say. ------------------------------------- ------------------------------------- ------------------------------------- ------------------------------------- ------------------------------------- ------------------------------------- ------------------------------------- -------------------------------------
The idea is very good but the grammar is horrible, most sentences are confusing or downright nonsensical, I don't know if its a translation or what but I can't enjoy it at all.
A história e muito boa , alguns erros mas aceital . As idéias do autor são muito boas com mundos quase não usados mas muito bons , oque torná tudo muito melhor , que continue assim .
Great story thanks for making it in English it's one of the only few supernatural stories out there will the mc be on arc angel level later
I've been waiting literally for years to see a fanfic that was specifically about a journey between horror movies, and this story finally did what I'd been hoping to see for so long...
It is really good even if there are mistakes, Since the author is translating the story to English. it is still really good and I recommend you read it
The novel is not very good, especially the protagonist, who in his right mind and with the ability to think would confront Jason believing that he was going to make him accessible, is a complete idiot.
A história até o momento que eu li( capítulo 16) está indo bem, apenas alguns inconvenientes que eu não gostei. Por exemplo a dependência do Mc com os irmãos winchester, mas fora esse pequeno detalhe a história está muito boa. A apenas uma coisa que eu acho que não faz sentido nenhum, essa ideia de poder comprar a linhagem kripitonia não faz muito sentido para o estilo do romance, por exemplo séria muito mais agradável uma linhagem sobrenatural, exemplo meio anjos ou meio demônio. Tem muitas linhagem sobrenaturais que podem ser aproveitadas, agora que parei para pensar você pode colocar o mundo de castelvania. Tipo o alucard e poderoso pra caramba. Ótima história
No bad. But for me, I've read so many novels where the MCs are getting stronger and stronger, I'm fed up! I'm looking for difference! Of course, I'm not saying don't read this FF. I read 2-3 chapters. It doesn't look bad.
Hey, author, can you send this to me on Google Drive so that I can help with the grammar and vocabulary mistakes because I really want to read this.
A masterpiece. Please don't give up writing. I absolutely advise you to read this fanfic, I've been waiting for a supernatural fanfic for such a long time!
bueno realmente espero que sigas actualizando la novela aunque sea un poco de manera irregular .............................................................
meu irmão finalmente encontrei uma fanfic de supernatural e melhor ainda é um brasileiro que escreve ela, saiba que estou aqui lendo e te apoiando o maximo q dá, força irmão
The novel was a really fun read. but like most stories based in the supernatural universe, it has been dropped "temporarily"
seems interesting but the story flow is bad and the dialogues looks like AI generated or translated from a CN fic. LoL the first dialogue alone turned me off already, nobody says "oh you convinced me". MC wasn't even convincing, just your typical Cardboard characters with soulless dialogues.
The premise is good, but the grammar makes me want to cut out my eyes. You should definitely get some better software, or if it’s a person translating then find someone who can actually speak English. I am sure it’s much better in the original language.
Bro you had me at no harem. Harems just become boring if you’ve stayed on webnovel as long I have. Also I like it when characters gain stuff from other worlds that gradually make them stronger. Have you ever seen that one novel where multiple characters travel through worlds. Basic normal people from earth taken to this being that’s referred to as god. They can buy bloodlines and abilites from worlds or even gain them in said world they visit. That’s what this synopsis reminded me of so I’m looking forward to it.
A masterpiece. Please don't give up writing. I absolutely advise you to read this fanfic, I've been waiting for a supernatural fanfic for such a long time!
The first thing I would like to say - Give me your typing skills!!! Man, I can't really type beyond a chapter or two in a day and you posted 40 chapters in 9 days?! You kidding me?! Anyways, coming to the book itself- It's great! The idea, the vision; everything comes together really well. That being said, the only thing I would suggest is to get a grammatical editing tool like Grammarly. Since you translate from Brazilian Portuguese, the translator can botch up sometimes. But all in all, it's a pretty solid book. If you guys are hesitating, don't. This is a novel with real thought behind it. The author has improved tremendously in the latest chapter, so it will be an enjoyable experience. Good luck :)
Hhhhhhhhhhhuuuuuuuummmmm gggggggy I love this so much I love it so much I can’t wait to see it in person I love it I love it I love it and I love the way you did the colors and the way you made it so much I love it so much I can’t stop loving it I love it so much I love you so much and I hope you have a great day today and I hope you have a great day and I love you too and I hope you have a great day I love you and I hope you have a great day too and I hope you have a great day at work is it is it is it is a good day and I love you too and I’m going home and I’m going out of the world and I’m so happy that you’re doing great job and I’m just so much love to hear that I hope you’re so proud that you’re so proud and I’m sure that you’re so much fun I hope you’re so much love you so have fun and I love you too I and I I’m so proud that I can’t stop uetyeyeu I can’t stop by to say I love it is it is so good luck with your work out of here I hope it works for your work and you have a great 👍 keep up ⬆️ with the work and keep it going I hope you have fun with your work is very important to me I will be happy for the rest yof yeueuwuueyeyey I love you ❤️ and I will miss your work too and you have a good night sleep and good luck too and I’ll talk soon and I’ll see you later I love and kiss you and kiss your
ネタバレを明かす I’m currently 35 chapters in and it’s good. I would personally prefer it if the protagonist was a little more overpowered… but right now it’s looking like the author is going for a more balanced approach. 🤷🏻♂️ One thing new readers should be aware of is that the whole ‘horror movie’ aspect of the story is relatively separate from his day-to-day activities (unless you consider living in the TV series Supernatural as horror 😅) so this isn’t a hodgepodge amalgamation of a bunch of horror stories causing chaos and confusion, it’s ‘systemic’ and orderly. The characters represented aren’t perfectly representative to their theatrical counterparts either… as the author has gone for a reasonably more realistic portrayal, and while this particular alteration feels slightly off putting I believe it’s better for the overall plot. So if you happen to like Supernatural/horror and your looking for a little light reading then this story is a good choice.
Uma obra muito boa com grande potencial, até o momento estou gostando muito, já estou começando a ficar ansioso todos os dias esperando o lançamento de mais capítulos. Suguru padeiro recomenda esta fic.
Well, it does have a few grammar errors, but its not something that affect the quality of the work. A Supernatural fanfic is amazing and a breath of fresh air, I cannot recomend it enough. Now stop reading this and go read the fic!
It’s great work, author, keep it up, don’t give up. Many will come to criticize, but few know how hard it is for us BRs to translate into English… The FF idea is great, dude, very creative. I’ve always liked the Supernatural series, but unfortunately, there are few fanfics about it. It’s good to finally have some. The chapters have a good update rate, the characters are well written, and as the story progresses, you can see the evolution. Go for it!
Great story it has a few grammar errors but there not horrible I RECOMMEND TO HORROR SHOW/MOVIE LOVERS
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histoire intéressante, j en suis au chapitre 25 et je trouve que c est un très très bon début, j espère que l histoire continuera sur cette lancé
Author's a G, what can I say. ------------------------------------- ------------------------------------- ------------------------------------- ------------------------------------- ------------------------------------- ------------------------------------- ------------------------------------- -------------------------------------
The idea is very good but the grammar is horrible, most sentences are confusing or downright nonsensical, I don't know if its a translation or what but I can't enjoy it at all.
A história e muito boa , alguns erros mas aceital . As idéias do autor são muito boas com mundos quase não usados mas muito bons , oque torná tudo muito melhor , que continue assim .
Great story thanks for making it in English it's one of the only few supernatural stories out there will the mc be on arc angel level later
I've been waiting literally for years to see a fanfic that was specifically about a journey between horror movies, and this story finally did what I'd been hoping to see for so long...
It is really good even if there are mistakes, Since the author is translating the story to English. it is still really good and I recommend you read it
The novel is not very good, especially the protagonist, who in his right mind and with the ability to think would confront Jason believing that he was going to make him accessible, is a complete idiot.
A história até o momento que eu li( capítulo 16) está indo bem, apenas alguns inconvenientes que eu não gostei. Por exemplo a dependência do Mc com os irmãos winchester, mas fora esse pequeno detalhe a história está muito boa. A apenas uma coisa que eu acho que não faz sentido nenhum, essa ideia de poder comprar a linhagem kripitonia não faz muito sentido para o estilo do romance, por exemplo séria muito mais agradável uma linhagem sobrenatural, exemplo meio anjos ou meio demônio. Tem muitas linhagem sobrenaturais que podem ser aproveitadas, agora que parei para pensar você pode colocar o mundo de castelvania. Tipo o alucard e poderoso pra caramba. Ótima história
No bad. But for me, I've read so many novels where the MCs are getting stronger and stronger, I'm fed up! I'm looking for difference! Of course, I'm not saying don't read this FF. I read 2-3 chapters. It doesn't look bad.