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Bueno este fic en un molesto que solo piense en el espacio sin contar que estoy molesto porque el fic que me gustaba era el de madara y el game of throne y ahora que no esta ya este pierde el chiste pero bueno voy a verlo rara ves no te baje la clasificación para que no lo elimines
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ok ok ima be honest and i’m biased against system novels i find them to be so cliche, unrealistic, and just a crutch to any story. The main character’s mom dying boom there’s a magical cure in the system, his brothers neighbors fish a dark overlord and about to kill the mc boom system convenient power boost. you get my point but…. this story is anything besides that its so well thought out and doesn’t follow the timeline its new & refreshing. My only critique is in the being he got jumped and saw he was out numbered and overpowered so instead of trying to be the op mc he should be training ppl he can trust to have his back just in case THUS enter his harem of girls, his wife’s are less likely to betray him over any dude. but besides that this is a amazing story and highly recommend you read this fic or any of the authors other books they aree so good trust me you won’t regret it just wished he was a machine that pumped out chapters quickly lol. keep up the AMAZING work and i can’t wait to see what you continue to cook 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
The story is interesting, but I don't understand where he gets the weights, daggers and sword that suddenly appear without being mentioned before. At least say that he transfigured some garbage into those objects because it takes away a lot of immersion from the story.
Harem will ruin this novel Harem will ruin this novel Harem will ruin this novel Harem will ruin this novel Harem will ruin this novel Harem will ruin this novel
Don't make it a harem, it will ruin the novel...............................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like and hate MC because of his attitude of ignoring all actions without thinking through them which will keep him being bullied, which I think is annoying.isn't he a genius? why not think through his every action with violence and not solve problems with his intelligence. for example mc used his fists to repeatedly knock down his dorm door and after a few days, he finally used a password to get in, seriously his actions were ridiculous. The author tries to make MC the center of attention by creating problems. I felt like MC's real personality wasn't like that when I read the first chapter, his personality wasn't like I imagined at the beginning of the chapter
One of the only books and fanfic I would rate as peak content. Hope author keeps going I love it.
This is one of the best HP fanfiction out here in webnovel. for now the shadow monarch power is still not well discuss, but you kinda dont notice as the story is very good. so looking forward to what happens next!
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simply amazing unlike some hp novel where mc is simp is follow Dumbledore instructions after being intimated.
Everything sucks except the update frequency and world background. The same scenario is repeated in the book. MC is very arrogant, has no respect for other people. He looks down on everyone but I think he's just stupid. He's interested in everything except magic. I don't even understand why he's still coming to Hogwarts, all he does is provoke people, at this rate he'll turn the entire wizarding world against him
The not-so-late, oh-so-great raccoon, happy to see another new novel, your great at what you do, and I am always excited for your next work.
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Until cho 30 it was gripping would be better if chapters is being updated daily. Only think that i didnt like is mc is little bit too agresif to everything.
This is wonderful but there is practically nothing about Solo Leveling, the system appeared a little at the beginning and then nothing. But as an HP ff this is really good
I like this snape more than original snape that are not pushover simp looser this snape will live with iron fist I want him being once prince again
--------–--------------------------------------------------------Good. Very good.--------------------------------------------------------------------
It's just a silly xianxia and nothing more. The logic of the characters? Absent (=level of xianxia). From Harry Potter there are only names and that's it. The MC seems to be flashy and cool, but in reality it's eighth grader syndrome and that's it, lol
It's really good..........................................................................................................................................................
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Ohhh so you writed a Harry Potter & Shadow Monarch story now huh, interesting, will it also have Lemons and Harem like your other storys?
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Bueno este fic en un molesto que solo piense en el espacio sin contar que estoy molesto porque el fic que me gustaba era el de madara y el game of throne y ahora que no esta ya este pierde el chiste pero bueno voy a verlo rara ves no te baje la clasificación para que no lo elimines
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ok ok ima be honest and i’m biased against system novels i find them to be so cliche, unrealistic, and just a crutch to any story. The main character’s mom dying boom there’s a magical cure in the system, his brothers neighbors fish a dark overlord and about to kill the mc boom system convenient power boost. you get my point but…. this story is anything besides that its so well thought out and doesn’t follow the timeline its new & refreshing. My only critique is in the being he got jumped and saw he was out numbered and overpowered so instead of trying to be the op mc he should be training ppl he can trust to have his back just in case THUS enter his harem of girls, his wife’s are less likely to betray him over any dude. but besides that this is a amazing story and highly recommend you read this fic or any of the authors other books they aree so good trust me you won’t regret it just wished he was a machine that pumped out chapters quickly lol. keep up the AMAZING work and i can’t wait to see what you continue to cook 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
The story is interesting, but I don't understand where he gets the weights, daggers and sword that suddenly appear without being mentioned before. At least say that he transfigured some garbage into those objects because it takes away a lot of immersion from the story.
Harem will ruin this novel Harem will ruin this novel Harem will ruin this novel Harem will ruin this novel Harem will ruin this novel Harem will ruin this novel
Don't make it a harem, it will ruin the novel...............................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like and hate MC because of his attitude of ignoring all actions without thinking through them which will keep him being bullied, which I think is annoying.isn't he a genius? why not think through his every action with violence and not solve problems with his intelligence. for example mc used his fists to repeatedly knock down his dorm door and after a few days, he finally used a password to get in, seriously his actions were ridiculous. The author tries to make MC the center of attention by creating problems. I felt like MC's real personality wasn't like that when I read the first chapter, his personality wasn't like I imagined at the beginning of the chapter
One of the only books and fanfic I would rate as peak content. Hope author keeps going I love it.
This is one of the best HP fanfiction out here in webnovel. for now the shadow monarch power is still not well discuss, but you kinda dont notice as the story is very good. so looking forward to what happens next!
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
simply amazing unlike some hp novel where mc is simp is follow Dumbledore instructions after being intimated.
Everything sucks except the update frequency and world background. The same scenario is repeated in the book. MC is very arrogant, has no respect for other people. He looks down on everyone but I think he's just stupid. He's interested in everything except magic. I don't even understand why he's still coming to Hogwarts, all he does is provoke people, at this rate he'll turn the entire wizarding world against him
The not-so-late, oh-so-great raccoon, happy to see another new novel, your great at what you do, and I am always excited for your next work.
Читал оригинал, хорошая работа, хоть и долгая[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Until cho 30 it was gripping would be better if chapters is being updated daily. Only think that i didnt like is mc is little bit too agresif to everything.
This is wonderful but there is practically nothing about Solo Leveling, the system appeared a little at the beginning and then nothing. But as an HP ff this is really good
I like this snape more than original snape that are not pushover simp looser this snape will live with iron fist I want him being once prince again
--------–--------------------------------------------------------Good. Very good.--------------------------------------------------------------------
It's just a silly xianxia and nothing more. The logic of the characters? Absent (=level of xianxia). From Harry Potter there are only names and that's it. The MC seems to be flashy and cool, but in reality it's eighth grader syndrome and that's it, lol
It's really good..........................................................................................................................................................
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Ohhh so you writed a Harry Potter & Shadow Monarch story now huh, interesting, will it also have Lemons and Harem like your other storys?
RACCCCCCOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNN