So you think Hiruzen allowed this, but didn't realize they could have simply killed Kushina and weakened the Leaf Village significantly with the news of its lost bijuu? You're trying to extract logic from a plot hole that already exists in the original work — I really don't understand you. I wasn't even talking about the realism of chakra; I was talking about someone being kidnapped. After all, if it were about making things completely realistic, Kushina should never have been kidnapped in the first place. This is a fanfic, not a physics or logic thesis faithful to reality.
This chapter was kind of heavy, but this isn't a pretty world, and I wanted to bring more realism.
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Didn't they already do that in the original? Explain to me how the village's greatest weapon was stolen right under everyone's nose, including the Hokage's, because as far as I know, there was no war at that point in the canon, and it almost left the Land of Fire in the original story!
This chapter was kind of heavy, but this isn't a pretty world, and I wanted to bring more realism.
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Her chakra was sealed, my friend, but she can still release some of it. Kumo isn’t that skilled in fuinjutsu to do it completely. Besides, do you really think they can hold back the Kyuubi’s chakra if it truly wants to break free? They can't create a seal stronger than the one Kushina herself already has to contain the Kyuubi.
This chapter was kind of heavy, but this isn't a pretty world, and I wanted to bring more realism.
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You can represent it that way. I did it with the idea of eventually changing the Mongols to the Jogos Nhai, but the history and characters from this part of the world don't really exist.
Dude, this isn't canon... I'm working with Yi-Ti as if it were Japan because it was simpler to handle than trying to represent China, which I don't know much about.
"Greetings, Lord Samurai. I am Jon of Arctic, ruler of a kingdom north of the western lands. I am here for trade," Jon replied calmly.
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They are not canonical, by the way, I'm using names from One Piece precisely so that no one confuses them with actual existing names. I even referred to Yi Ti as ancient Japan, which I believe is a representation of China by the author and creator of the ASOIAF world.
Rosaria Valenstein. (Adult). [IMGs]
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Rosaria Valenstein. (Adult). [IMGs]
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An OC I created — he got kicked in the balls by Snape during the first days. This happened before Snape met Clarisse for the first time.
He has already received it on my Patreon. The challenge for him begins in chapter 140.
I enjoy a lively world, not just involving Snape in every corner, so let's have a variety of reactions. I want to bring the great families into focus in the upcoming chapters, as there are many characters I haven't written about yet. It's time to give them some attention, especially since Snape has quite a few enemies.
HP - Shadow Monarch!
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