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作者: Drkest

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Born as a second son to teh Mad King, how will Daemon Targaryen change the fate of the Targaryen dynasty? This is the story of a man who would rise up from the ashes and change the very history of this world, a man scorned and burnt by his own father.
This is the story of Daemon Targaryen-The Burnt Prince.

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Silver_mirror

Forced plot. Writer is a fan of King Baldwin, no surprise there as he won againt legendary Saladin when he was a teen. But that create a problem of hammering a massive round log into a microscopic square hole. Maybe some back story of sibling rivalry turned in plotting and scheming to kill of Rheaturd's (Rhaegar) perceived replacement of being continue to be the crown prince (as we read he was constantly threatened by little mad prince after his birth). At the sham trial Queen was nowhere to be found, a plot hole. (If only some back story showed his blood family along with sister in law were in that scheme). Red priestess resurrecting the burned one another forced story. Red priestess was full on fanatic if she was in play, nothing absolutely nothing would herm her precious Azor/prince or princess that was promised. Major plot hole. Also after losing instead of taking his head and nailing and handing from the wall of king's landing or red keep to have a reminder kings back stabbing subject, he was burned to death by wildfyre, if that was the case every lord and lady would keep 100 miles distance between Mad king and themselves. Rebellion would not happen as canon. Brandon would never in million years would go to king's landing to demand justice for the "abduction" of Loseryana the wh*re of westeros, homewrecker of royal proportion (Lyanna climbing up a married man's bed who have already 2 trueborn childing with a princess while engaged to another lord unmarried, un-widowed with no trueborn child, what a logic). Stark logic of course Stark motto it's honorable and justified if only they do it. Bunch of double, triple and multiple standard hypocrites. Rickard Stark would never go to king's landing without entire northern army (children and old solders even maybe all spearwives included any and everyone that can hold or carry some kind of weapon) along with entire riverland and vale behind him for answering his heir's crime. Another awful plot hole. BTW where was Brandon, Ned and Rickard when Lyanna put the crown of winter rose on her head from a married prince who is already father of a child and in front a heavily pregnant princess wife? Any sane highborn/noble daughter would mortified along with her family by the action of the prince and that of a family of a lord paramount. The only course of action is shotgun wedding to Robbert then and there. OG plot hole. (Hungry bear path describe starks "wolf blood" perfectly). Onto current ff. Maybe it could be done by everyone though he was death but the prince was too stubborn to die, helped by random kindly passerby or fisherman. If Ashara loved the 2nd prince so much she deserved to know he lives asap. Only above mention rivalry and or acrimonious relationship with his entire family would keep the prince go to help his mother, younger brother, sinter-in-law, his niece and baby nephew. Sorry of inconstancy I am on heavy pain meds and my thinking plus writing skill is now equivalent to a toddler. Human life is overrated to save at this kind of cost. WQ 3. SoU 3 SD 1 CD 1 WB 2 ff so WB doesn't matter. Anyway writer is is practicing writing and enjoying it kudos to him. May you all have happy healthy and cruelty free long life. Bye GLnHF.

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Ash_D_Born

do not drop please its really good so far

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Mamamesta

Plot too slow [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Bob_Bob_8597

One of the best game of thrones novels out there. So far it hasn’t had a big grammar issues or stuff of that sort and the story is unique intriguing. Continue the good work

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Aniket_Aggarwal

Its' really good so far, one of the most unique perspective of any GOT fanfic, I've read till now, please keep posting...

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Loneee_3

One of the Best GOT novel i have ever read 😲🫡🫡 The only problem is the chapter update is a bit slow

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Destro1337

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I_Am_Memphis

I didn't know this was also here in Webnovel(I read this in SV). Anyways, this is one of the best GOT fics I've ever read. ----------------------------

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Zhawan2002

one of the rare decent NEW fics that I coincidentally found and finish today, after looking for a week for new GOT fanfics. Only problem is, it doesn't have GOT tag XD, it'd be helpful if it does so that u don't have to look for weeks just to find decent story like this.

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Khons
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This is such a good fic. I wholeheartedly recommend reading this.

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Destro1337

Cool 🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒 🆒 🆒 🆒 🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒

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TaterRumble

One of the best GOT fics in a long time bro keep it up. Great writing, great premise, good story telling, and good execution. Long may he reign.

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Sleepy_thriller

The story is wonderful with a good exploration of the world. It gives new prospect of fanfiction compared to generic ones in webnovel. .............

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SugarHoneyIceTea

GOT [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Enigma_9135

good work, don't drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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The_man_The_myth

This would be a lot more popular if you added the right tags to it almost impossible to find otherwise

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Zay_Hayden

Just wow, very good. This dude has it all the writing quality, and grammar. On top of a good idea. I just wish we got more!

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frost_claw

really good writing with good plot,small spelling errors

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HungryWolf2024

Very interesting take on the Targaryen Bloodline ability. As far as the flashback in each chapter, I didn't mind as it broke the monotony without taking away from the present day. Also very grounded, which I enjoyed.

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IAteYourToast

this is one or maybe the best got fanfic I ever read i hope you won't drop this

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Chapter 39: Chapter 39-To The Wall! 1 months ago

卷 1

  1. 1
    Chapter 1-The Burnt Prince! 9 months ago
  2. 2
    Chapter 2-I am Back! 9 months ago
  3. 3
    Chapter 3-A Head Rolls! 9 months ago
  4. 4
    Chapter 4-A Spider's Last Crawl! 9 months ago
  5. 5
    Chapter 5-A Lion's Glare! 9 months ago
  6. 6
    Chapter 6-A Dawn's Lament! 8 months ago
  7. 7
    Chapter 7-A Dragon's Roar! 8 months ago
  8. 8
    Chapter 8-Consequences! 8 months ago
  9. 9
    Chapter 9-Payback! 8 months ago
  10. 10
    Chapter 10-Times to Come! 8 months ago
  11. 11
    Chapter 11-Broken Prayers! 7 months ago
  12. 12
    Chapter 12-The Tide Changes! 7 months ago
  13. 13
    Chapter 13-Ghosts of Our Past! 7 months ago
  14. 14
    Chapter 14-The Truth Shall Set You Free! 7 months ago
  15. 15
    Chapter 15-A Posioned Gift! 6 months ago
  16. 16
    Chapter 15-A Gamble Too Far? 6 months ago
  17. 17
    Chapter 17-The Lives at Stake! 6 months ago
  18. 18
    Chapter 18-Fire Made Flesh! 6 months ago
  19. 19
    Chapter 19-A Crime Too Late! 5 months ago
  20. 20
    Chapter 20-A Withered Rose! 5 months ago
  21. 21
    Chapter 21-A War Won! Onto the Next One! 5 months ago
  22. 22
    Chapter 22-Treason in the Night! 5 months ago
  23. 23
    Chapter 23-Fool and Foolish! 5 months ago
  24. 24
    Chapter 24-A Royal Army! 4 months ago
  25. 25
    Chapter 25-A Love yet Alive! 4 months ago
  26. 26
    Chapter 26-A Journey too Late! 4 months ago
  27. 27
    Chapter 27-Sacrifice too Little! 4 months ago
  28. 28
    Chapter 28-I am His! And He is Mine! 3 months ago
  29. 29
    Chapter 29-Interlude! 3 months ago
  30. 30
    Chapter 30-Te Years Later! 3 months ago
  31. 31
    Chapter 31-Time to Clean House! 3 months ago
  32. 32
    Chapter 32-The First Front! 2 months ago
  33. 33
    Chapter 33-Familial Betrayals! 2 months ago
  34. 34
    Chapter 34-DRACARYS! 2 months ago
  35. 35
    Chapter 35-Tragedy of Dreams! 2 months ago
  36. 36
    Chapter 36-Consequences! 1 months ago
  37. 37
    Chapter 37-As the King Commands! 1 months ago
  38. 38
    Chapter 38-The March of Death! 1 months ago
  39. 39
    Chapter 39-To The Wall! 1 months ago
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