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me gusta mucho pero la falta algo tampoco me gusta onda que siempre las cosas que haga el protagonista sean muy bien recibidas sin criticas y me parece exagerado pero aparte de eso me parece una buena historia para pasar el rato
It's good story, with each character have their own development and background. Even one used character have more character development than I have. Simply this is NOICE.
CH 44. So far the world background is quite good, a very ADVANCED world but lacking in entertainment. Knowing films, anime and games in this world is impressive as Copy - Paste because AI plays an important role in this world. People are starting to enjoy Instant Things, like they are too dependent on AI. So here's what's interesting, MC brings his knowledge of the past into this world with a slightly different nuance. I even found some of the POV reactions very entertaining. So far MC hasn't had any issues that make for a suspenseful story but a slice of relaxed life is also good for my soul, hahaha. Well this is good, Recommendation for a cup of coffee.
I'm not very good at making reviews, but I tried it here. I was looking for a story similar to the novel "Black tech internet Cafe system", and I found it (it took a long time), I think this story is good, it's more or less the same as the story I mentioned above, what I enjoy about this kind of story is the reaction of the players and how the players play it, and that's why I enjoy this story, although the update is a bit long (in my opinion). this is a translation, please understand.
Its a good novel but the stability of updates is uncertain and the story is progressing very slowly with a lot of useless pov's of random people.
the novel is top tier it made me cry in some chapters funny in most chapter and very good
Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.
Esto es una novela que merece dejar de ser fic, pero gracias a ser fic he podido leerla. Tiene cosas negativas, pero el autor simplemente mejora si nota esto, espero sinceramente que termine esta obra y poder acompañar la misma
tudo aqui é muito, escreve bem, tem uma otima história e tudo que a envolve. o único problema é a lentidão para updates, porém se é necessário essa demora toda, para que entregar esses ótimos capítulos tudo bem o importante é a qualidade oque tem aqui.
Take it 5 stars. 5 stars will be so excellent that there is nothing you want to kick at all. Hey, the story is perfect. The story is interesting. The story sometimes has a story. I don't want to spoil it. Let's go listen for yourself and see how it will be. [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
It is gratifying to discover a compelling narrative that aligns with my preferred genre of game development.💯💯💯 Please more chapters 🙏🙏🙏
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...... Топ, сначала думал, что из-за молого количество глав и долгого выпуска будет коротко даже, если интересно. Но это достаточно объёмная работа и она захватывающая.
Very good story! it reminds me of game developer system, but instead of going to other worldd you go to the future, also i like that you didnt pick normal games and movies like minecraft or fortnite, the obly bad thing i could find is that at the beggining i couldnt understand the names, it was very confusing who was who, also the random chapter that daniel wants to contact with the protagonist.
Me gusta esta novela, sus trama tiene un buen enlace que te deja intrigado. Deseó leer ma de esta historia y ver cómo el protagonista se enfrenta a sus competidores que an perdido su creatividad con el tiempo.
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Amei ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ amei amei amei amei amei
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This story has to be one of my all time favourites. The plot is extremely well developed and while I find the history of the world has a few holes in it like how does a space fairing civilization lose all forms of entertainment media when one planet is destroyed it does little to take away from the plot. Each character feels like they have an actual history to them and it just sucks you in. I wish the updates were more consistent but that is the main thing. Overall I give 5/5 writing quality, 3/5 stability of updates, 5/5 story development, 5/5 character development, 4/5 world background. I am currently up to chapter 34
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Чтож, это свежий глоток воздуха в этом направлении литературы. Когда я только начал читать произведения описывающие игры и процесс их создания, я был поражён. Но с каждой следующей работой разочаровывался. Почти все похожи друг на друга. Но эта книга - нечто новое и интересное. Я с удовольствием слежу за новыми обновлениями, а я придирчивый читатель, и это для меня не характерно. Спасибо большое Автору за его труд.
I really liked this fanfiction, it's great, I'm looking forward to the continuation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope you get well soon and I love your novel and hope you can continue to write new chapters. Thanks for bringing to life this story and don’t be discouraged by any negative comments know that I will continue reading so long as you continue writing ;)
Love it. ..........................................................................................................................................
Get better soon 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
me gusta mucho pero la falta algo tampoco me gusta onda que siempre las cosas que haga el protagonista sean muy bien recibidas sin criticas y me parece exagerado pero aparte de eso me parece una buena historia para pasar el rato
It's good story, with each character have their own development and background. Even one used character have more character development than I have. Simply this is NOICE.
CH 44. So far the world background is quite good, a very ADVANCED world but lacking in entertainment. Knowing films, anime and games in this world is impressive as Copy - Paste because AI plays an important role in this world. People are starting to enjoy Instant Things, like they are too dependent on AI. So here's what's interesting, MC brings his knowledge of the past into this world with a slightly different nuance. I even found some of the POV reactions very entertaining. So far MC hasn't had any issues that make for a suspenseful story but a slice of relaxed life is also good for my soul, hahaha. Well this is good, Recommendation for a cup of coffee.
I'm not very good at making reviews, but I tried it here. I was looking for a story similar to the novel "Black tech internet Cafe system", and I found it (it took a long time), I think this story is good, it's more or less the same as the story I mentioned above, what I enjoy about this kind of story is the reaction of the players and how the players play it, and that's why I enjoy this story, although the update is a bit long (in my opinion). this is a translation, please understand.
Its a good novel but the stability of updates is uncertain and the story is progressing very slowly with a lot of useless pov's of random people.
the novel is top tier it made me cry in some chapters funny in most chapter and very good
Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.Very good.
Esto es una novela que merece dejar de ser fic, pero gracias a ser fic he podido leerla. Tiene cosas negativas, pero el autor simplemente mejora si nota esto, espero sinceramente que termine esta obra y poder acompañar la misma
tudo aqui é muito, escreve bem, tem uma otima história e tudo que a envolve. o único problema é a lentidão para updates, porém se é necessário essa demora toda, para que entregar esses ótimos capítulos tudo bem o importante é a qualidade oque tem aqui.
Take it 5 stars. 5 stars will be so excellent that there is nothing you want to kick at all. Hey, the story is perfect. The story is interesting. The story sometimes has a story. I don't want to spoil it. Let's go listen for yourself and see how it will be. [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
It is gratifying to discover a compelling narrative that aligns with my preferred genre of game development.💯💯💯 Please more chapters 🙏🙏🙏
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...... Топ, сначала думал, что из-за молого количество глав и долгого выпуска будет коротко даже, если интересно. Но это достаточно объёмная работа и она захватывающая.
Very good story! it reminds me of game developer system, but instead of going to other worldd you go to the future, also i like that you didnt pick normal games and movies like minecraft or fortnite, the obly bad thing i could find is that at the beggining i couldnt understand the names, it was very confusing who was who, also the random chapter that daniel wants to contact with the protagonist.
Me gusta esta novela, sus trama tiene un buen enlace que te deja intrigado. Deseó leer ma de esta historia y ver cómo el protagonista se enfrenta a sus competidores que an perdido su creatividad con el tiempo.
ネタバレを明かす Amei ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ amei amei amei amei amei
Very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
This story has to be one of my all time favourites. The plot is extremely well developed and while I find the history of the world has a few holes in it like how does a space fairing civilization lose all forms of entertainment media when one planet is destroyed it does little to take away from the plot. Each character feels like they have an actual history to them and it just sucks you in. I wish the updates were more consistent but that is the main thing. Overall I give 5/5 writing quality, 3/5 stability of updates, 5/5 story development, 5/5 character development, 4/5 world background. I am currently up to chapter 34
ネタバレを明かす Чтож, это свежий глоток воздуха в этом направлении литературы. Когда я только начал читать произведения описывающие игры и процесс их создания, я был поражён. Но с каждой следующей работой разочаровывался. Почти все похожи друг на друга. Но эта книга - нечто новое и интересное. Я с удовольствием слежу за новыми обновлениями, а я придирчивый читатель, и это для меня не характерно. Спасибо большое Автору за его труд.
I really liked this fanfiction, it's great, I'm looking forward to the continuation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope you get well soon and I love your novel and hope you can continue to write new chapters. Thanks for bringing to life this story and don’t be discouraged by any negative comments know that I will continue reading so long as you continue writing ;)