This story has to be one of my all time favourites. The plot is extremely well developed and while I find the history of the world has a few holes in it like how does a space fairing civilization lose all forms of entertainment media when one planet is destroyed it does little to take away from the plot. Each character feels like they have an actual history to them and it just sucks you in. I wish the updates were more consistent but that is the main thing. Overall I give 5/5 writing quality, 3/5 stability of updates, 5/5 story development, 5/5 character development, 4/5 world background. I am currently up to chapter 34
Honestly this story is great and i know i would be more then happy to wait a week for these chapters. Obviously i wouldnt complain if it was every three days or every hour ;). But seriously take your time writing keeping it to a good quality and dont get burned out. Would hate to lose another one of my favourite books to burn out. :(
Note: This chapter is a bit shorter. Thursday's chapter should be longer. This week, this story ranked pretty high, which surprised me. I didn't expect people to like it, after all, I'm writing something I would like to read, but I appreciate the support. I saw that you would like me to post more chapters or open a Patreon. I can only apologize, but I really can't do that. Some chapters I write super fast, others may take one or two days, and if I'm unlucky, even three. Many times I write a chapter and then delete and write it again, either because it turned out bad or because I think it had wrong information or opened too many plot holes. So, even though I would like to earn some money, I think it's better to keep it as a hobby. But I appreciate the support, and if you have any advice, feel free to share, haha.
Others · just_a_potato_soul
Yes
4. Is the pace enjoyable for you? (Y/N)
Movies · DumbedDown
I don’t believe adding another female lead to the story would be good for its future however if you do choose to add more limit it to only one more please.
1. To see the MC have an additional partner later in the novel? (Y/N/Comment)
Movies · DumbedDown
Honestly. That’s about the same as a lot of novels mate. Don’t strain yourself. All I know is that I have another novel to look forward to the next upload. Take your time and take car of yourself.
Once a week, or even twice, is what I will try to do.
Movies · ZeroX0666
Honestly this one and the Vampire one are my favourite, not beacuase of marvel but i just love the concepts. Unfortunatley there are not alot of good halo related fics. If anyone knows one please let me know,
Marvel: The Halo System
Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
Hey mate just do what you think you can do bt if you do choose to drop please let everyone know.
Mate hope you get better soon. Take care of your health.
Maybe the radio could detect his anxiousness and then take an educated guess about why that would be.
Liu Shiqing laughed and shook his head, feeling a bit greedy. Just as he had dismissed this thought, the signal receiver made a creaking sound. In the blink of an eye, the signal receiver had transformed into a regular-sized wristwatch. The synthesized voice came again—"According to the master's needs, entering transformation, mute, and invisibility mode."
Urban · Daqin Cavalry
Hello, it has indeed been a few days
Twilight: Return of Vengeance
Movies · AaronBlackwood