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It's really one of the best fanfic i have ever read i loved everything in this story and i am looking forward to it's next chapter ❤ hope you can update soon 😊
please come back and write more this fan fic is amazing and I can't wait to read more of it
I see LGBT on the description so I am assuming the MC will have sêx with another man so im not reading just as u said on the description. Thanks for the advise.
Probably one of the worse fanfics I’ve ever had the misfortune of reading. Author just needlessly makes MC suffer as much as possible. That’s it that’s all the plot this travesty has is building up relationships just to tear them down and make the MC suffer when she was spose to have been “Blessed with another life by God” so that she can see the value of living but this Author clearly escaped from Suicide Watch because that’s all this story is about. Unless your looking for motivation to kill yourself I would stay away from this story.
Very good and funny fanfic. The only thing that probably started to irritate me towards the end. These are dialogues with the 4th wall and songs (not in terms of their writing, but rather in terms of Google translation of these songs)
I'm giving you 5 stars just for the LGBTQ warning. it's not my thing and i appreciate you for the warning. keep up the great work
This is a really interesting story, im really looking forward to future updates and am excited for the future develpoement between the both of them, maybe a sibling or parent child relationship? Its pretty sweet.
This review is in no part about the LGBT. When I saw it was a Twilight fanfic I expected some drama, but this here is having tons and tons of drama. I think the author exaggerated about how the MC reacts to certain situations or actions. Even though the author gave an explanation about how the MC brain wasn't developed yet so she acts childish, I simply don't buy it. She's a grown woman (mentally) and can apparently make perfectly logical decisions, but her behavior still remains childish... Anyway, I can say that I kinda enjoyed reading this fanfic, but I only reached to chapter 25 before I stopped. Not because it got bad or anything, but it just wasn't my cup of tea.
I shall give this 5 stars as its a good book even though I want to make u stub your toes for the drama in the later chapters.
Love the plot, and the writing style. It really pulls you in. And I personally love the Yandere moments.
best Twilight story i've read so far (I have read a lot) The first few chapters were too emotional, made me teary eyed. there is really nothing to criticize in the story so far. hope author will continue to gift us with Robin life
i was a bit iffy on the bxb but i m not as disturbed by it as i thoight i would be otherwise i love the story and would rcomend it to anyone who can get through emotional rollercoaster books and that are okay with lgbtq+++ topics/genres
I heard there was to be yuri in this story, so as a man of culture, I had to bookmark, hehe
I love it.. easily on my top 5 of twilight fanfic.. i like the story and characters and im excited to the future of them..hope you finish this and not drop halfway
naja Story und schreibstil und Charaktere sind gut 👍 aber Autor hatte keine Ahnung von twilight und wie da die Sachen wie mate bond läuft und es interessiert ihn auch net, wenn er ne eigene welt erschaffen würde wäre das kein problem aber wenn man eine welt wie twilight nimmt muss man sich schon an Gesetze dieser welt halten! Autor will sogar nicht mal seine Fehler eingestehen und sagt ich zitie ich ignoriere einfach die negativen Kommentare!
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Writing quality: 4.5 stars many songs and among them are the MC's thoughts so they force you to read the lyrics of the song, excellent spelling for me. Update stability: 5 stars Story Development: 3.5 is a slow story and there is no set goal or objective that the MC wants to achieve, except for the vulturis to accept his and his partner Rosalie's transformation into a vampire to avoid what happened to Edward and Bella in the original. World Background: 3 stars is twilight and there is not much development or expansion of said world. Character design: 2 stars. An adult woman transmigrated into the body of a child, a hypocritical MC who complains that Edwar is an invasive mind reader and emotionally and mentally manipulates the Cullens to further her own interests, without any mental development because if something bad happens to the MC begins to blame ROB and the world without accepting that her passive attitude is what causes her pain. In the end, her previous life only serves to define that she likes women, nothing more and nothing less. Another thing to mention is that Rosalie, her romantic interest, is unfaithful and marries a man when she and the MC confirm their relationship and there is no excuse that can change this fact no matter what develops there in the future. I'm on chapter 48.
The fanfic started out absolutely amazing! But…ran into some problems. For one, there is a LOT of drama, most of which is completely unnecessary. Primarily between Rosalie and Robin (Rosalie is the love interest btw). The main point of drama that sort of ruined this fic for me, is Rosalie marrying another individual (a man) after Robin left the country for a few months. It came out of literally nowhere, and right after they got together (as in like a chapter or two). It made the entire build up of them getting together, seem to be for nothing. And just put even more drama in the way of what people actually want. The drama honestly gives me major Wattpad vibes. As in: The love interest cheats on the mc. The mc is still completely in love, and doesn’t truly move on. Once the love interest “realizes their mistake” they go back to the MC, who then accepts them back instantly with no repercussions. That’s sorta what this feels like is going to happen. Idk though, as that has yet to happen just yet. But there has been a flash forward that proves they are together in the future, which I honestly see as a negative, as it corners the author into that direction, should they ever wish to change their mind. It also just confirms to the user that Robin (the mc) WILL get back with Rosalie, even after Rosalie has basically cheated on her, and broken her heart (even worse considering they are literally mates, and cheating is one of the worst possible things you can do to a mate). Another problem that some might have with the fic, is how long it’s taking to get to canon. Personally this isn’t a problem, but for others, it might be. Considering we are going on 50 chapters, and she has yet to get to the canon timeline. Besides that, the only other thing I could do without, is the songs in like every single chapter. This is mostly cause it’s sorta c ringe, and nothing else. Anyways, that’s all! I hope those who are reading this to decide on whether or not to read this, made their decision! And I hope the author can understand that this is just what I feel, and some others have expressed. Have a good day!
Автор полная дура заставляет страдать им под предлогом мол не все может быть розово ? Блять серьезно?!! Это насколько стали трусливыми авторы что не могут сделать им счастливой сильной и чтоб у неё был стальной стержень? Но нет блять давай добавим драмы страдании и издевательство над гг , автора ты мазахиска?? Мне жаль будущею- будущего парня - девушку если станет встречаться с тобой такой дурой
I love this fic!!! 😍 The story, the romance, the love interest, everything. Probably the best story I read here(webnovel)
I am going to try to write a quick review writing quality is really good, the symbols used to tell when and how someone is talking, such as in her mind or hand signs, and other ways are really easy to follow, which is amazing for me and awes me (especially since I can't write characters talking and I get confused) story development is amazing as well. It's not rushed. Nothing is overly skipped, and when it is, it makes sense and is easy to follow. updates regularly, as you can tell, but how many chapters and things and the world background is good character make sense and background of sai characters is easy to follow. in conclusion, in my opinion, this is the best twilight FF. ps sorry if the spelling is whack lol pps as a joke, and seriously, this is a better love story than Twilight, lol keep it up. It's an awesome book
seriously author you should see this through to the end of your desire for the story take whatever comments or good ideas you come across and forget the rest of them and if it's a small hope please continue to write different twilight fanfic sadly we don't get alot of them on here or even past 50ch 😮💨
I really love this twilight fanfic. The mc is so cute, and her reactions are believable, a very well written story with excellent flow. I recommend reading before judging it.
Pretty long review ahead. TL;DR: You should definitely check this book. I am not a fan of Twilight -it never was and probably still isn't my cup of tea- and the only knowledge I have is up to the 3rd movie I was forced to watch and had almost forgotten everything by now. I don’t even know how I opened this book and the synopsis was kinda interesting and I was also curious about a term I didn't know about. Reached out to the author about the term and actually got a reply(and a pretty polite and friendly one) so I decided to take the plunge and read as if I was reading an original instead of a FF since I remember close to zero from Twilight. And I read 91 chapters in less than 2 days despite taking plenty of breaks in between. I liked the characters and their interactions (although sometimes cringe worthy), world building is solid and the pace is neither too fast nor too slow. I had a pretty good time reading it all things considered, though I still have zero interest in going back to watch any of the movies or read any of the books.
It's really one of the best fanfic i have ever read i loved everything in this story and i am looking forward to it's next chapter ❤ hope you can update soon 😊
please come back and write more this fan fic is amazing and I can't wait to read more of it
I see LGBT on the description so I am assuming the MC will have sêx with another man so im not reading just as u said on the description. Thanks for the advise.
Probably one of the worse fanfics I’ve ever had the misfortune of reading. Author just needlessly makes MC suffer as much as possible. That’s it that’s all the plot this travesty has is building up relationships just to tear them down and make the MC suffer when she was spose to have been “Blessed with another life by God” so that she can see the value of living but this Author clearly escaped from Suicide Watch because that’s all this story is about. Unless your looking for motivation to kill yourself I would stay away from this story.
Very good and funny fanfic. The only thing that probably started to irritate me towards the end. These are dialogues with the 4th wall and songs (not in terms of their writing, but rather in terms of Google translation of these songs)
I'm giving you 5 stars just for the LGBTQ warning. it's not my thing and i appreciate you for the warning. keep up the great work
This is a really interesting story, im really looking forward to future updates and am excited for the future develpoement between the both of them, maybe a sibling or parent child relationship? Its pretty sweet.
This review is in no part about the LGBT. When I saw it was a Twilight fanfic I expected some drama, but this here is having tons and tons of drama. I think the author exaggerated about how the MC reacts to certain situations or actions. Even though the author gave an explanation about how the MC brain wasn't developed yet so she acts childish, I simply don't buy it. She's a grown woman (mentally) and can apparently make perfectly logical decisions, but her behavior still remains childish... Anyway, I can say that I kinda enjoyed reading this fanfic, but I only reached to chapter 25 before I stopped. Not because it got bad or anything, but it just wasn't my cup of tea.
I shall give this 5 stars as its a good book even though I want to make u stub your toes for the drama in the later chapters.
Love the plot, and the writing style. It really pulls you in. And I personally love the Yandere moments.
best Twilight story i've read so far (I have read a lot) The first few chapters were too emotional, made me teary eyed. there is really nothing to criticize in the story so far. hope author will continue to gift us with Robin life
i was a bit iffy on the bxb but i m not as disturbed by it as i thoight i would be otherwise i love the story and would rcomend it to anyone who can get through emotional rollercoaster books and that are okay with lgbtq+++ topics/genres
I heard there was to be yuri in this story, so as a man of culture, I had to bookmark, hehe
I love it.. easily on my top 5 of twilight fanfic.. i like the story and characters and im excited to the future of them..hope you finish this and not drop halfway
naja Story und schreibstil und Charaktere sind gut 👍 aber Autor hatte keine Ahnung von twilight und wie da die Sachen wie mate bond läuft und es interessiert ihn auch net, wenn er ne eigene welt erschaffen würde wäre das kein problem aber wenn man eine welt wie twilight nimmt muss man sich schon an Gesetze dieser welt halten! Autor will sogar nicht mal seine Fehler eingestehen und sagt ich zitie ich ignoriere einfach die negativen Kommentare!
mooooooooooooooooooorrrreeeeeeeeeeee!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Writing quality: 4.5 stars many songs and among them are the MC's thoughts so they force you to read the lyrics of the song, excellent spelling for me. Update stability: 5 stars Story Development: 3.5 is a slow story and there is no set goal or objective that the MC wants to achieve, except for the vulturis to accept his and his partner Rosalie's transformation into a vampire to avoid what happened to Edward and Bella in the original. World Background: 3 stars is twilight and there is not much development or expansion of said world. Character design: 2 stars. An adult woman transmigrated into the body of a child, a hypocritical MC who complains that Edwar is an invasive mind reader and emotionally and mentally manipulates the Cullens to further her own interests, without any mental development because if something bad happens to the MC begins to blame ROB and the world without accepting that her passive attitude is what causes her pain. In the end, her previous life only serves to define that she likes women, nothing more and nothing less. Another thing to mention is that Rosalie, her romantic interest, is unfaithful and marries a man when she and the MC confirm their relationship and there is no excuse that can change this fact no matter what develops there in the future. I'm on chapter 48.
The fanfic started out absolutely amazing! But…ran into some problems. For one, there is a LOT of drama, most of which is completely unnecessary. Primarily between Rosalie and Robin (Rosalie is the love interest btw). The main point of drama that sort of ruined this fic for me, is Rosalie marrying another individual (a man) after Robin left the country for a few months. It came out of literally nowhere, and right after they got together (as in like a chapter or two). It made the entire build up of them getting together, seem to be for nothing. And just put even more drama in the way of what people actually want. The drama honestly gives me major Wattpad vibes. As in: The love interest cheats on the mc. The mc is still completely in love, and doesn’t truly move on. Once the love interest “realizes their mistake” they go back to the MC, who then accepts them back instantly with no repercussions. That’s sorta what this feels like is going to happen. Idk though, as that has yet to happen just yet. But there has been a flash forward that proves they are together in the future, which I honestly see as a negative, as it corners the author into that direction, should they ever wish to change their mind. It also just confirms to the user that Robin (the mc) WILL get back with Rosalie, even after Rosalie has basically cheated on her, and broken her heart (even worse considering they are literally mates, and cheating is one of the worst possible things you can do to a mate). Another problem that some might have with the fic, is how long it’s taking to get to canon. Personally this isn’t a problem, but for others, it might be. Considering we are going on 50 chapters, and she has yet to get to the canon timeline. Besides that, the only other thing I could do without, is the songs in like every single chapter. This is mostly cause it’s sorta c ringe, and nothing else. Anyways, that’s all! I hope those who are reading this to decide on whether or not to read this, made their decision! And I hope the author can understand that this is just what I feel, and some others have expressed. Have a good day!
Автор полная дура заставляет страдать им под предлогом мол не все может быть розово ? Блять серьезно?!! Это насколько стали трусливыми авторы что не могут сделать им счастливой сильной и чтоб у неё был стальной стержень? Но нет блять давай добавим драмы страдании и издевательство над гг , автора ты мазахиска?? Мне жаль будущею- будущего парня - девушку если станет встречаться с тобой такой дурой
I love this fic!!! 😍 The story, the romance, the love interest, everything. Probably the best story I read here(webnovel)
I am going to try to write a quick review writing quality is really good, the symbols used to tell when and how someone is talking, such as in her mind or hand signs, and other ways are really easy to follow, which is amazing for me and awes me (especially since I can't write characters talking and I get confused) story development is amazing as well. It's not rushed. Nothing is overly skipped, and when it is, it makes sense and is easy to follow. updates regularly, as you can tell, but how many chapters and things and the world background is good character make sense and background of sai characters is easy to follow. in conclusion, in my opinion, this is the best twilight FF. ps sorry if the spelling is whack lol pps as a joke, and seriously, this is a better love story than Twilight, lol keep it up. It's an awesome book
seriously author you should see this through to the end of your desire for the story take whatever comments or good ideas you come across and forget the rest of them and if it's a small hope please continue to write different twilight fanfic sadly we don't get alot of them on here or even past 50ch 😮💨
I really love this twilight fanfic. The mc is so cute, and her reactions are believable, a very well written story with excellent flow. I recommend reading before judging it.
Pretty long review ahead. TL;DR: You should definitely check this book. I am not a fan of Twilight -it never was and probably still isn't my cup of tea- and the only knowledge I have is up to the 3rd movie I was forced to watch and had almost forgotten everything by now. I don’t even know how I opened this book and the synopsis was kinda interesting and I was also curious about a term I didn't know about. Reached out to the author about the term and actually got a reply(and a pretty polite and friendly one) so I decided to take the plunge and read as if I was reading an original instead of a FF since I remember close to zero from Twilight. And I read 91 chapters in less than 2 days despite taking plenty of breaks in between. I liked the characters and their interactions (although sometimes cringe worthy), world building is solid and the pace is neither too fast nor too slow. I had a pretty good time reading it all things considered, though I still have zero interest in going back to watch any of the movies or read any of the books.