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This novel deserves 5 stars in nearly every aspect. The only 4 star was for the update rate, but you already explained the difficult circumstances you found yourself in and I understand that and wish you all the best for the healing process! :) I‘ve read countless web novels over the past years and I have to say that in comparison to them and the ones I read lately, this novel (and My Elf System) stands out exceptionally in so many ways. The world building, characters and their development, the action and lewd scenes and simply everything about it are so well thought out and written, that it captures the reader and leaves me wanting for more! Great work, dear author and please keep it up! I wish you all the best and am looking forward to future chapters.
This novel is unforgettable. Even after not reading weeks/months at a time, the story and characters stay with me. It's beautifully written, and I can recall it vividly without needing to reread. It has just enough consistency without having to stress about little character developments and introducing enough new characters. For a working adult with not much time to read -I am satisfied reading every chapter. Great work.
Story has huge potential but falls short because of a few reasons, mainly the progression of the story or rather lack there of. Story is so slow and filled with so much filler content that I end up skimming over most of the story and completely loses immersion
Arthur why don't you do 2 or 3 ch in a week instead of 1 you know it just to slow 🐌
At this point ım only reading for nyx and ı realy hope his mother isnt a part of his harem…and his aunt
Author have you dropped this novel? Just curious if I need to remove it from my reading list. I really like the story but it hasn’t updated in a bit.
I love it, good writing accompanied by good characters and an interesting background. I hope the author can continue with this quality.
Love it from start to finish. Was looking for this kind of story and it didnt disappoint. Only downside is updates are kinda random. Great Novel give it a try it wont let you down!
I really enjoyed it so far, up to about chapter 110. the main character is very ruthless but is kind to his love ones. sometimes I feel the love part is a bit off, like placement wise and perhaps spammed too much. Also he became brothers with someone in 1 day, and kinda let himself be used and dragged into a nobles fight. I can just see how the pointless fight will lead to them be tracked down by his mother's family. I wish it didn't have to be so obvious. maybe they could have changed there names at the very least and wore disguises. I highly recommend the book and feel at has good potential. I am looking forward to the next story arc.
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I have really enjoyed this story so far, and I find myself looking forward to continuing it. If I was forced to make one small suggestion, it would be that at times the words used during smut scenes like Yeah, come off as a bit odd. It's not something that ever bothered me too much, but just a small suggestion that maybe it could flow a little smoother.
I really like the pace of the story and the character development so far (40th chapter right now) thanks for the work
I kinda started loving the story after the MC's father was side lined because of his righteous BS and I kinda like the MCs when they have that crazy side to them. Love the story so far🔥✌️
I've only read a few chapters, but I've already seen that it's a very good work, seriously. I read the first fifteen chapters with a smile on my face, it won me over easily!
SPOILER !! DONT'TTOUCH IT i like big harem..........which is here (not sure if has big harem yet) i hate yuri.........which is not here i like win CEST.... .which is here i like ruthless mc ...which is here i like good plot...... which is here i like romance ......which is here i like good character development ........which is here so I Dont need any more reasons to give 5stars
Nice start for a novel. Though it is a bit rough around the edges, it has the potential to be a really good read. 5 stars for encouragement and keep working hard!
The novel's idea and world are very interesting, not to mention the addition of astral beasts; at first, it was nice to see a novel where the father wasn't dead or made useless, only to let the MC end up with their mother. Sadly, this happens, and all development toward a balanced family ends. There is no inc*st tag, but there will be some, which isn't my thing. The characters are alright; the women feel like carbon copies of each other because of the scent thing, and all fall for him easily, but the MC himself is interesting and has a very dynamic difference in his two sides and should interest anyone who reads for sure. The power system lacks depth, suffers the same as LK, and is wishy-washy at best. While the action is average, it has some good parts despite being weaker than many current novels. As for writing, quality remains the same as LK, and there is little improvement between the two. The usage of italics also makes it difficult to read, but it's better than many novels on WN, so give it a read while you’ve nothing to do. There are a lot of good ideas countering the negative.
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A wholesome story with enjoyable content. Good MC who isn't a loser, although he is still maturing, with likeable female leads and good progression. So far, by chap 33, the pace is quite slow, as it focuses on building up the MC's power and his relationships, but we can expect and exciting adventure in the long run. Author is also receptive to feedback, so start reading and share your views.
It a very cute book that I recommend with all my heart to read! Not only the story as a good character dynamic, but it also very relaxing to read! So that why I recommend that you read it
Really loving everything so far, and am excited to see where the story goes. PS- (Who doesn’t love a cute succubus stuck with a MC from day one… better yet a shy tsundere succubus?)
The story seems good. It is enjoyable. It is well written and engaging. I had to drop it, though. I won't be taken advantage of. A snu-snu scene? Cost in coins or passes shot to the roof. A new development? Costs shot to the roof. Is there something similar to a cliffhanger? Costs shot to the bloody roof. From 14 coins to 26 or 28, or from 1 fast pass to 3. On the other platform it's even worse. So, if you are wealthy enough or you don't care about letting whoever is setting the prices mess with your eagerness, then you definitely will enjoy this novel.
This novel deserves 5 stars in nearly every aspect. The only 4 star was for the update rate, but you already explained the difficult circumstances you found yourself in and I understand that and wish you all the best for the healing process! :) I‘ve read countless web novels over the past years and I have to say that in comparison to them and the ones I read lately, this novel (and My Elf System) stands out exceptionally in so many ways. The world building, characters and their development, the action and lewd scenes and simply everything about it are so well thought out and written, that it captures the reader and leaves me wanting for more! Great work, dear author and please keep it up! I wish you all the best and am looking forward to future chapters.
This novel is unforgettable. Even after not reading weeks/months at a time, the story and characters stay with me. It's beautifully written, and I can recall it vividly without needing to reread. It has just enough consistency without having to stress about little character developments and introducing enough new characters. For a working adult with not much time to read -I am satisfied reading every chapter. Great work.
Story has huge potential but falls short because of a few reasons, mainly the progression of the story or rather lack there of. Story is so slow and filled with so much filler content that I end up skimming over most of the story and completely loses immersion
Arthur why don't you do 2 or 3 ch in a week instead of 1 you know it just to slow 🐌
At this point ım only reading for nyx and ı realy hope his mother isnt a part of his harem…and his aunt
Author have you dropped this novel? Just curious if I need to remove it from my reading list. I really like the story but it hasn’t updated in a bit.
I love it, good writing accompanied by good characters and an interesting background. I hope the author can continue with this quality.
Love it from start to finish. Was looking for this kind of story and it didnt disappoint. Only downside is updates are kinda random. Great Novel give it a try it wont let you down!
I really enjoyed it so far, up to about chapter 110. the main character is very ruthless but is kind to his love ones. sometimes I feel the love part is a bit off, like placement wise and perhaps spammed too much. Also he became brothers with someone in 1 day, and kinda let himself be used and dragged into a nobles fight. I can just see how the pointless fight will lead to them be tracked down by his mother's family. I wish it didn't have to be so obvious. maybe they could have changed there names at the very least and wore disguises. I highly recommend the book and feel at has good potential. I am looking forward to the next story arc.
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I have really enjoyed this story so far, and I find myself looking forward to continuing it. If I was forced to make one small suggestion, it would be that at times the words used during smut scenes like Yeah, come off as a bit odd. It's not something that ever bothered me too much, but just a small suggestion that maybe it could flow a little smoother.
I really like the pace of the story and the character development so far (40th chapter right now) thanks for the work
I kinda started loving the story after the MC's father was side lined because of his righteous BS and I kinda like the MCs when they have that crazy side to them. Love the story so far🔥✌️
I've only read a few chapters, but I've already seen that it's a very good work, seriously. I read the first fifteen chapters with a smile on my face, it won me over easily!
SPOILER !! DONT'TTOUCH IT i like big harem..........which is here (not sure if has big harem yet) i hate yuri.........which is not here i like win CEST.... .which is here i like ruthless mc ...which is here i like good plot...... which is here i like romance ......which is here i like good character development ........which is here so I Dont need any more reasons to give 5stars
Nice start for a novel. Though it is a bit rough around the edges, it has the potential to be a really good read. 5 stars for encouragement and keep working hard!
The novel's idea and world are very interesting, not to mention the addition of astral beasts; at first, it was nice to see a novel where the father wasn't dead or made useless, only to let the MC end up with their mother. Sadly, this happens, and all development toward a balanced family ends. There is no inc*st tag, but there will be some, which isn't my thing. The characters are alright; the women feel like carbon copies of each other because of the scent thing, and all fall for him easily, but the MC himself is interesting and has a very dynamic difference in his two sides and should interest anyone who reads for sure. The power system lacks depth, suffers the same as LK, and is wishy-washy at best. While the action is average, it has some good parts despite being weaker than many current novels. As for writing, quality remains the same as LK, and there is little improvement between the two. The usage of italics also makes it difficult to read, but it's better than many novels on WN, so give it a read while you’ve nothing to do. There are a lot of good ideas countering the negative.
ネタバレを明かす A wholesome story with enjoyable content. Good MC who isn't a loser, although he is still maturing, with likeable female leads and good progression. So far, by chap 33, the pace is quite slow, as it focuses on building up the MC's power and his relationships, but we can expect and exciting adventure in the long run. Author is also receptive to feedback, so start reading and share your views.
It a very cute book that I recommend with all my heart to read! Not only the story as a good character dynamic, but it also very relaxing to read! So that why I recommend that you read it
Really loving everything so far, and am excited to see where the story goes. PS- (Who doesn’t love a cute succubus stuck with a MC from day one… better yet a shy tsundere succubus?)
The story seems good. It is enjoyable. It is well written and engaging. I had to drop it, though. I won't be taken advantage of. A snu-snu scene? Cost in coins or passes shot to the roof. A new development? Costs shot to the roof. Is there something similar to a cliffhanger? Costs shot to the bloody roof. From 14 coins to 26 or 28, or from 1 fast pass to 3. On the other platform it's even worse. So, if you are wealthy enough or you don't care about letting whoever is setting the prices mess with your eagerness, then you definitely will enjoy this novel.