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tried the first chapter,tried the next and the next and kept on going☺️,I love it
Bro got badluck💀 but on the real, this is good, though it is a bit fast pace in the beginning, I think the author was setting up the scene, also the characters are very well done, I like the writing, especially on the first chapter. GJ Author
I shall where this goes! Got way darker than I thought it would tho. Otherwise, I do see potential and if written well, I can see it being even better.
Really love the twist of the storyy, synopsis is well thought and the characters aren’t just cardboard characters either- would recommend others to give it a try.
So far, I can say that the book has a good storyline with pretty interesting characters. A diverse range of creatures other than humans, and also a decent number of amazing skills are displayed amongst the characters.
The MC is definitely a struggle type, no plot armor is detected here! He's not too overpowered but not weak either, the story has a great pace and some action-packed yet sometimes calming and slow descriptions, its the perfect blend! Every time i put this book down I wonder what happens next! It's always on the go and i love it, keep going author!
like the way this story is going , I hope that his second slavery would be last. keep going and have a good day
A good book. An interesting start and the author captures my emotions. I'll see where this goes.
Overall This work has a good story and I won't spoil it. The plot is interesting and the flow of the story is good. It is very readable and the author has a good grasp of storytelling. The pacing is fine, not too fast or slow. Pros Action packed, well paced and has a good MC. Not too overpowered, but can fend for himself if needed. MC is good natured and likeable. Cons MC was too submissive, but I can understand because of his circumstances. He lived in a world where humans are not the top of the food chain. Others Reminds me of Conan the Barbarian or Berserk. Sadly, the MC just faced overwhelming odds against his favor.
I like the premises so far ( can't spoil it ), but 1 think i want to say is... "Some people see it as tragedy, and some people see it as comedy." I'm sorry author san. i know you intended to make it into a sad tragic story, but i keep laughing when Renzor get emotional damage. ( can't spoil it tho ) the world building a bit vague, yet the progress so far ahead. i hope author san want to describe the world more, i like to know more. and the power system and martial art method explained wonderfully. all and all, it's an interesting book. 😉👌
I am enjoying my time reading this, although it can be a bit slow and boring sometime. I like how the story is developing, keep up the good work 👍
I was enjoying the story so far until he was turned into a slave, though I had no problem with him being a slave a it would have been something different. But then again he doesn't even act like he was just forcefully enslaved. It was really going well then it got really disappointing.
ネタバレを明かす tried the first chapter,tried the next and the next and kept on going☺️,I love it
Bro got badluck💀 but on the real, this is good, though it is a bit fast pace in the beginning, I think the author was setting up the scene, also the characters are very well done, I like the writing, especially on the first chapter. GJ Author
I shall where this goes! Got way darker than I thought it would tho. Otherwise, I do see potential and if written well, I can see it being even better.
Really love the twist of the storyy, synopsis is well thought and the characters aren’t just cardboard characters either- would recommend others to give it a try.
So far, I can say that the book has a good storyline with pretty interesting characters. A diverse range of creatures other than humans, and also a decent number of amazing skills are displayed amongst the characters.
The MC is definitely a struggle type, no plot armor is detected here! He's not too overpowered but not weak either, the story has a great pace and some action-packed yet sometimes calming and slow descriptions, its the perfect blend! Every time i put this book down I wonder what happens next! It's always on the go and i love it, keep going author!
like the way this story is going , I hope that his second slavery would be last. keep going and have a good day
A good book. An interesting start and the author captures my emotions. I'll see where this goes.
Overall This work has a good story and I won't spoil it. The plot is interesting and the flow of the story is good. It is very readable and the author has a good grasp of storytelling. The pacing is fine, not too fast or slow. Pros Action packed, well paced and has a good MC. Not too overpowered, but can fend for himself if needed. MC is good natured and likeable. Cons MC was too submissive, but I can understand because of his circumstances. He lived in a world where humans are not the top of the food chain. Others Reminds me of Conan the Barbarian or Berserk. Sadly, the MC just faced overwhelming odds against his favor.
I like the premises so far ( can't spoil it ), but 1 think i want to say is... "Some people see it as tragedy, and some people see it as comedy." I'm sorry author san. i know you intended to make it into a sad tragic story, but i keep laughing when Renzor get emotional damage. ( can't spoil it tho ) the world building a bit vague, yet the progress so far ahead. i hope author san want to describe the world more, i like to know more. and the power system and martial art method explained wonderfully. all and all, it's an interesting book. 😉👌
I am enjoying my time reading this, although it can be a bit slow and boring sometime. I like how the story is developing, keep up the good work 👍
I was enjoying the story so far until he was turned into a slave, though I had no problem with him being a slave a it would have been something different. But then again he doesn't even act like he was just forcefully enslaved. It was really going well then it got really disappointing.
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