MAP OF THE UNDERGROUND
Above were twisting tawny rocks and below was an enclave. A densely populated urban jungle that defied conventional city planning and architectural norms. Standing in its shadow for the first time, one might hardly believe that such a place existed. The walled city was a chaotic mosaic of concrete and steel, a tangle of buildings so tightly packed together that they seemed to meld into one another, forming a colossal, interconnected hive.
Fantasy · Balcho
Author here! Strongest Among The Heavens is a mythology-inspired dual POV story starring a villain and a hero. One that focuses on a cultivation power system and the other on a traditional magic system. For those that love mythology, expect lots of it with characters from the Mahabarata, Shinto mythology, Islamic folktale, Norse and Greek pantheons, Celtic mythology, etc. It is a bit of a slowburn so don't expect every character to appear at once. However, there is detailed world building to help you speculate and predict their actions. The White Abyss and the Heavenly Tower is a source of mystery and trouble for the characters and (hopefully) fun for you readers. I'd like to think my writing style suits well for action and gets the heart pumping. The grammer and punctuation should be near perfect as I do edit heavily. Dasha and Kazi, our villain and hero, are incredibly fun characters. Try not to be turned off by the dual POVs. As a writer proud of his work, I promise that it will be worth it.
Re-read chapter 44-46.
Interesting start!
I love the action so far! Great stuff! No complaints so far! Having a blind protagonist is an interesting prospect so I wondered how the author would cook things up. So far, I'm impressed!
LOL
Yan Jin sighed again, thinking to himself, "Don't be afraid of a godlike enemy; be more worried about a pig-like teammate." As he left toward the wreckage of his hut.
Fantasy · Judejayden
Ah, thank you! I just don't know which to choose or which will make people click on it 😭 I've been flipflopping
Big mythology guy so I'm looking forward to this!
In this case, yes! He mentions it later on but invoking a spell/attack verbally causes has a faster activation time than thinking it. In quick-paced battles, these margins can make a big difference!
"Double Spark Strike!"
Fantasy · Balcho
MAP OF THE UNDERGROUND AND LOCATION OF THE DARK TOWER (DARK TOWER SYMBOL: DARK CIRCLE WITH STAR)
The central beacon to the dark streets of the Underworld. Approximately 900 meters (2952 feet) tall. A thousand Sorcerers sit on Floor 100 and remove the law of non-violence from the Underground. Annual spectators of 2 million men, women, children, demons, and everything in between. The Dark is a mini-version of the Heavenly Tower with 100 floors.
Strongest Among the Heavens
Fantasy · Balcho