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Entrail_JI

Hello, author here. I held off on review until I managed to get some things sorted. I’m excited to announce my second book on this platform. Advent of the Three Calamities. If you’ve read my previous book, then you’ll come to find some similarities between the two books. Mostly in the plot twists, and interactions. I’ve taken a long break since my last novel. There were A LOT of things I was unsatisfied with. Hopefully, this book will be better. I hope it is. Thank you for your support!

11mth
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Apolonchene06

Honestly only 16 chapters and I'm already hooked. The novel is a bit strange and hard to understand at the start but when you start to understand what's happening you also understand how great the potential of the novel is.The author focuses on an entirely different path compared to his other novel, we start with an mc already at the top but weak, he reincarnates in an unknown body without any memory, so he doesn't know how to cast any spell and use mana but he's freaking good at emotion magic whose power depends on the understanding of the emotions.It's way better than any other magical novel cause here we don't have a bunch of elemental or conceptual spells that are just dumbed down and spammed but we really understand the intricacy of the spell by feeling the emotions alongside the mc.The author is doing an incredible job at conveying feelings especially by playing with our empathy like a boss.Making me even doubt who the saddest between the mc and me when he cast a sadness spell 🤣.Anyway the mc is thrown in disarray at the very start, without any anchor and knowledge about the world and he's in a difficult situation cause he's placed at the first rank of the academy. Very different to Ren who tried to look as lackluster as possible while being strong when here the mc needs to own up to his rank with his meager strength ...very interesting concept and story, great writing as always , and the world background seems intrigiuing.

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11mth
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Deadly_Healer

There are not a lot of stories these days that can hook you since start. Good stories have become rare these days. But here I am hooked since prologue. I love the theme of novel which is mainly focused on emotions so I know for sure that it's gonna be a thrilling and blood pumping roller coaster of emotions. MC feels a like person and most importantly human, a real living HUMAN like all of us. He isn't someone who was like. "Oh I died but nah I got transmigrated so like all other Mcs my job should be avoid bad ending and og protagonist and go my way by avoiding death at costs as well as making a lot of strong connection all the way." He behaves how anyone of us could have behaved.He goes through all phases of regret, denial, reluctance, partial acceptance. He doesn't wanna live there he wanna go home where his little brother is. He loves him more than anything even more than himself. So another merit is, he isn't a cold blooded murderer but a sane and principled person. I also love the duality of his character He is mentally broken and sane at the same time. He has suffered by a lot of negative emotions in his past life and is mentally vulnerable but at the same time that's his strongest trait. He is mentally strong because he has already been exposed to all kinds of negativities to extreme. Every chapter is like he is walking on a thin line between sanity and insanity no one knows when and where will he trip. Whether he will loose himself in dark abyss or will be king of its king is still a mystery? So if you wanna know 😜 do give this a try.

11mth
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Nino3
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muito boa a construção da historia e como o protagonista não ganha seus poderes de mão beixada e sim se esforça para consequilos.

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mad_man_3176

I don't know how to say this author, but I really love this novel. I just started it and am still in chap 9, but the personality and character of ml is my fav and I could say from my soul that this was the kind of novel I wanted to read. I read your authors pov novel and it was epic and this novel too I hope would be epic ( though I'm hooked at chap 1 itself), please keep up the excellent work and I hope after this novel is finished there will be another novel from you.

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Fallingtotheabyss

I started to read this novel due to stacking another one, and gods. I gulfed this thing down in three days. I absolutely love the writing style, and even more the relationships between the characters. How the friendship of the main cast builds slowly but surely, with every one of them having their own life, struggles and desires. I need more of Leon and Julien's interactions, they just make laugh until my stomach hurts. The world has me fascinated and intrigued, and every chapter answers questions while leaving enough to keep you interested. In short, I absolutely love this novel, straight to my favorite list.

11d
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Shaidira

I love this story.🥰😘 Fast paced action, intriguing and engaging mystery in the main story and many unique development arcs and subplots used to progress the mc and supporting characters. No slow/ filler chapters! The author/ story skips over the time between arcs so although time progesses, the pace doesn't slow down for the reader. A very bingeworthy and easy to read novel with many twists and turns, interesting subplots and intelligent writing that focuses on developing the story and characters (without treating the readers like idiots that need longwinded explanaitions or monologues) BIGGEST PEAVE..... not updating often enough!!!!🤨 ????Why is it that most of the novels that I feel are well written and bingeworthy end up with slow updates?????🥺😢😭 Please return to 1 chapter a day 🥺

14d
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BlackSpace19

I have read about 400+ chapters so far , It starts a little bit slow but gets quite interesting soon enough. Overall an awesome story ,I'm enjoying it

15d
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code_1326

Is it having harem or not I am at ch 273 and I am having some doubts about multiple romances occuring btw I hate harem Anyhow good storyline and everything and I hope mc only have single romance partner

22d
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md_rizvi

One word trash. It has so many plot holes and problems that, if were to give a proper review, I will need to write a small story as a review. Shitty story, not well planned, Author just add random things time to time, Try copy mysterious scenes from other novel trying make the story good, but instead mada it into a shit. Can't believe this shit written by the Same person who wrote Authors pov. Compared to that this is trash. After every 2 chapters the shitty author forgets what exactly he wrote in previous chapter. Trash writer, fk this shit. in one chapter he will Mc is strong, but in the next he will write mc is weak. Just so the mc couldn't defeat the Original Mc😐. Fk this trash, I really tried man, I read close 300 chapter, but saw no improvement.... instead it got trashier and trashier. Fk this I won't give anymore review. I don't even know if he will keeps this review or will just delete it. since most the review here are good since, they just gave it good review because he is the author of Authors pov. At least most of them.

22d
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lil_ba_z

Please what chapter does he stop being weak. Ended D D D D D D D D D F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F

24d
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Hasakone

Emotions are like a drug to us. The more we experience them, the more we become addicted.

26d
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Yanlin_X

peak writing. perfect down to the minute detail. Imma ass-kiss this with no shame because it deserves it. perfect character development, plot, world building, plot, everything!!! It deserves to be at number 1. the best newly released webnovel. would put it in my top 5 along RI. Good work author

1mth
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Prakhar_Baghel

It seems like the comedy in the later half of the story seems to be much more obvious and it becomes irritating how there is something related to comedy in every chapter.

1mth
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Santiago3223344414

even words can’t describe this masterpiece.

1mth
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FeedbackByChance

Only here because of my love for your previous work 'The Author's Pov'. and once again, i am satisfied(until now). I won't talk much about the qualities of the book as my opinion is shown in the stars i give for each category. but i have one remark; one of the things i loved so much about your previous book is the aspect of The story is the drives of the events. but in this one, i feel like the characters are overwhelming the story. it's not necessarily a bad thing, but it's the way i read your works (from my perspective at least). Anyway, i do like the story very much, i like its direction, the character(except sithrus and Aeofi), the plot, and not to forget, the plays. good luck with it 👏

1mth
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Door_Lord

After Ch300+ this Novel became so much better, before... I liked it but I didn't feel like I need to read it everyday, but plottwist and crazy lore of this enitire book made me so invested...I prefer this Novel more that LOTM(Even tho its not better written than LOTM, I like this novel more) I have to say at first I didn't really liked Julien as a Main character. but oh man how wrong I was he is now one of my favorite. Also its been talked alot if this Novel is better than Author's POV and in my opinion Its wayyyyy better you can see how much and that's even an understaitment whole dialoges,lore,Main Characters,everything that APOV was good at AOTC does better, It doesn't even sometimes feel like its the same Author because of how fast and much he inproved If Anyone wondering if they should pick it up, I would say wait till this novel end's because you will suffer for having to wait for peak everyday

1mth
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Jarvisss

Where did such a high grade come from? This shit is not worthy of a rating above 2.9. Most of the book is how the hero suffers and overcomes himself. The author probably considers himself a genius and that it develops the hero, but after looking at the comments, he will see that this is the most garbage that is here, because when this happens from time to time, it helps the plot, but when the humiliation and pain of the main character is the whole plot, it is better to finish writing. The main character and the enemy have level 4, the hero also has a movement technique. But while she managed to overcome the whole arena and get to the main character, he couldn't even take a step? I haven't read anything more stupid for a long time. This is at the same level of idiocy as the fact that he is in a hurry to partially create a domain, instead of calmly understanding over time what suits him and needs more. And why is he ruining his future? For the sake of a reward, which he doesn't even know anything about.

1mth
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Z77
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okay, first of all I don't post reviews for any novels. I just tell my opinion. take it or leave it. The novel is good. Not like it's the best I've ever read, for example ORV, TBATE etc.. But this has really become one of my favourites now. I had read up to the recent chapter like 450 or something and the flow of the story is super natural and unique. It isn't a copy of anything, it has its own style and that's what makes it more interesting to read for me. The first thing I've ever done after waking up was reading something or watching something interesting so that I won't just sleep again. Now, I wake up and check whether the chapter was released and he didn't disappoint, since the update stability is always good. I know Webnovel has more cliche novels and boring ones. But this one is worth your time. That's what I think guys Ah, right. His other novel is also very good.

1mth
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potatomashed

I'll be real honest. The writing feels so amateur-ish in the sense that the author knows how to write but for the life of me, I cannot understand why he chose to write THIS particular way. It feels like I'm reading a fantasy book for kids. The writing is off-putting. All the unnecessary SFX instead of describing properly. All the weird sentence structures. Sometimes, there is not even a sentence. It's just small words. Single words would constantly take up lines, endlessly. Idk what exactly the author is thinking writing like this. Because of this very reason, I cannot focus. It's very disruptive. The narration is so unreliable. Sometimes, the surrounding descriptions don't feel enough either. It's very small sentences or lines. I tried hard to like this but I cannot. All the good reviews seem to be okay with this so maybe I'm the bad guy? I don't know.

2mth
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arab_stor_1412

A truly remarkable novel with character development, comedy, world-building, drama, and mystery that made me genuinely consider this one of the best novels released this year.

2mth
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Humanchaos

A very enjoyable novel with the potential to be one of the best I’ve read, thanks to its world-building and character development. This is truly a peak project!

2mth
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Forecaster001

Your novel is truly excellent and beautiful. The development of events and characters is incredibly well done, the mystery is truly captivating, and the detailed world-building is outstanding. You are truly talented, my friend. Keep going!👏👏😎

2mth
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Kleinreis

A truly remarkable novel, from the protagonist to the supporting characters, with story development and mystery. I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!⁦^⁠_⁠^⁩⁦^⁠_⁠^⁩

2mth
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Jian_Zhi

This novel should be up there in the top 5 instead of current place. Everything bout this novel is perfect..

2mth
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OgoWise

This is my first time writing a review. Book is 👌 amazing. The Characters are fleshed out. The male lead has a good head on his shoulder. The female lead is just so cute. she is the perfect blend of strong and Innocent without being naive. I love her so much. And I'm so giddy about the romance. Leon is also such a darling. Anyway, the characters are great in their own way. And they have such Interesting background stories. You won't miss out with this one?

2mth
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salo4_games

A novel that has really great potential. If the writer continues in this manner, he will surpass his previous novel in many aspects. Keep going, writer. I support you.^_^

2mth
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DaoisthTqAAs

The Forgotten Minds arc was really unbearable for me. Some people may disagree with me, but having a sudden transition into a naive and whiny MC really ticked me off. Aside for that, author cooked hard with this one. Perfect balance between humor, adventure, intensity, and mystery.

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kraxzzz

really good but need a slower pace everything is happening soo fast and the pace needs to be a bit slow with more filler and chapters like the acting part but overall a 5 star for me i really enjoyed it

2mth
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Common_Man_8597

if you like TAPOV , you will SURELY like this book Even more than TAPOV

2mth
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Breckie_Smith

Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare

2mth
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MatrixUnknown

I could spend 10 minutes hyping this up but I’m just going to summarize my opinion of this work in one word, beautiful.

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2mth
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Kilo_Yin

Overall, very amazing storyline. The author is very good with twists and reveals and it keeps you engaged and excited most of the time.

2mth
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Entrail_JI

Hello, author here. I held off on review until I managed to get some things sorted. I’m excited to announce my second book on this platform. Advent of the Three Calamities. If you’ve read my previous book, then you’ll come to find some similarities between the two books. Mostly in the plot twists, and interactions. I’ve taken a long break since my last novel. There were A LOT of things I was unsatisfied with. Hopefully, this book will be better. I hope it is. Thank you for your support!

11mth
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Apolonchene06

Honestly only 16 chapters and I'm already hooked. The novel is a bit strange and hard to understand at the start but when you start to understand what's happening you also understand how great the potential of the novel is.The author focuses on an entirely different path compared to his other novel, we start with an mc already at the top but weak, he reincarnates in an unknown body without any memory, so he doesn't know how to cast any spell and use mana but he's freaking good at emotion magic whose power depends on the understanding of the emotions.It's way better than any other magical novel cause here we don't have a bunch of elemental or conceptual spells that are just dumbed down and spammed but we really understand the intricacy of the spell by feeling the emotions alongside the mc.The author is doing an incredible job at conveying feelings especially by playing with our empathy like a boss.Making me even doubt who the saddest between the mc and me when he cast a sadness spell 🤣.Anyway the mc is thrown in disarray at the very start, without any anchor and knowledge about the world and he's in a difficult situation cause he's placed at the first rank of the academy. Very different to Ren who tried to look as lackluster as possible while being strong when here the mc needs to own up to his rank with his meager strength ...very interesting concept and story, great writing as always , and the world background seems intrigiuing.

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11mth
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Deadly_Healer

There are not a lot of stories these days that can hook you since start. Good stories have become rare these days. But here I am hooked since prologue. I love the theme of novel which is mainly focused on emotions so I know for sure that it's gonna be a thrilling and blood pumping roller coaster of emotions. MC feels a like person and most importantly human, a real living HUMAN like all of us. He isn't someone who was like. "Oh I died but nah I got transmigrated so like all other Mcs my job should be avoid bad ending and og protagonist and go my way by avoiding death at costs as well as making a lot of strong connection all the way." He behaves how anyone of us could have behaved.He goes through all phases of regret, denial, reluctance, partial acceptance. He doesn't wanna live there he wanna go home where his little brother is. He loves him more than anything even more than himself. So another merit is, he isn't a cold blooded murderer but a sane and principled person. I also love the duality of his character He is mentally broken and sane at the same time. He has suffered by a lot of negative emotions in his past life and is mentally vulnerable but at the same time that's his strongest trait. He is mentally strong because he has already been exposed to all kinds of negativities to extreme. Every chapter is like he is walking on a thin line between sanity and insanity no one knows when and where will he trip. Whether he will loose himself in dark abyss or will be king of its king is still a mystery? So if you wanna know 😜 do give this a try.

11mth
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Nino3
LV 3 Badge

muito boa a construção da historia e como o protagonista não ganha seus poderes de mão beixada e sim se esforça para consequilos.

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16h
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mad_man_3176

I don't know how to say this author, but I really love this novel. I just started it and am still in chap 9, but the personality and character of ml is my fav and I could say from my soul that this was the kind of novel I wanted to read. I read your authors pov novel and it was epic and this novel too I hope would be epic ( though I'm hooked at chap 1 itself), please keep up the excellent work and I hope after this novel is finished there will be another novel from you.

1d
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Fallingtotheabyss

I started to read this novel due to stacking another one, and gods. I gulfed this thing down in three days. I absolutely love the writing style, and even more the relationships between the characters. How the friendship of the main cast builds slowly but surely, with every one of them having their own life, struggles and desires. I need more of Leon and Julien's interactions, they just make laugh until my stomach hurts. The world has me fascinated and intrigued, and every chapter answers questions while leaving enough to keep you interested. In short, I absolutely love this novel, straight to my favorite list.

11d
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Shaidira

I love this story.🥰😘 Fast paced action, intriguing and engaging mystery in the main story and many unique development arcs and subplots used to progress the mc and supporting characters. No slow/ filler chapters! The author/ story skips over the time between arcs so although time progesses, the pace doesn't slow down for the reader. A very bingeworthy and easy to read novel with many twists and turns, interesting subplots and intelligent writing that focuses on developing the story and characters (without treating the readers like idiots that need longwinded explanaitions or monologues) BIGGEST PEAVE..... not updating often enough!!!!🤨 ????Why is it that most of the novels that I feel are well written and bingeworthy end up with slow updates?????🥺😢😭 Please return to 1 chapter a day 🥺

14d
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BlackSpace19

I have read about 400+ chapters so far , It starts a little bit slow but gets quite interesting soon enough. Overall an awesome story ,I'm enjoying it

15d
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code_1326

Is it having harem or not I am at ch 273 and I am having some doubts about multiple romances occuring btw I hate harem Anyhow good storyline and everything and I hope mc only have single romance partner

22d
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md_rizvi

One word trash. It has so many plot holes and problems that, if were to give a proper review, I will need to write a small story as a review. Shitty story, not well planned, Author just add random things time to time, Try copy mysterious scenes from other novel trying make the story good, but instead mada it into a shit. Can't believe this shit written by the Same person who wrote Authors pov. Compared to that this is trash. After every 2 chapters the shitty author forgets what exactly he wrote in previous chapter. Trash writer, fk this shit. in one chapter he will Mc is strong, but in the next he will write mc is weak. Just so the mc couldn't defeat the Original Mc😐. Fk this trash, I really tried man, I read close 300 chapter, but saw no improvement.... instead it got trashier and trashier. Fk this I won't give anymore review. I don't even know if he will keeps this review or will just delete it. since most the review here are good since, they just gave it good review because he is the author of Authors pov. At least most of them.

22d
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lil_ba_z

Please what chapter does he stop being weak. Ended D D D D D D D D D F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F

24d
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Hasakone

Emotions are like a drug to us. The more we experience them, the more we become addicted.

26d
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Yanlin_X

peak writing. perfect down to the minute detail. Imma ass-kiss this with no shame because it deserves it. perfect character development, plot, world building, plot, everything!!! It deserves to be at number 1. the best newly released webnovel. would put it in my top 5 along RI. Good work author

1mth
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Prakhar_Baghel

It seems like the comedy in the later half of the story seems to be much more obvious and it becomes irritating how there is something related to comedy in every chapter.

1mth
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Santiago3223344414

even words can’t describe this masterpiece.

1mth
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FeedbackByChance

Only here because of my love for your previous work 'The Author's Pov'. and once again, i am satisfied(until now). I won't talk much about the qualities of the book as my opinion is shown in the stars i give for each category. but i have one remark; one of the things i loved so much about your previous book is the aspect of The story is the drives of the events. but in this one, i feel like the characters are overwhelming the story. it's not necessarily a bad thing, but it's the way i read your works (from my perspective at least). Anyway, i do like the story very much, i like its direction, the character(except sithrus and Aeofi), the plot, and not to forget, the plays. good luck with it 👏

1mth
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Door_Lord

After Ch300+ this Novel became so much better, before... I liked it but I didn't feel like I need to read it everyday, but plottwist and crazy lore of this enitire book made me so invested...I prefer this Novel more that LOTM(Even tho its not better written than LOTM, I like this novel more) I have to say at first I didn't really liked Julien as a Main character. but oh man how wrong I was he is now one of my favorite. Also its been talked alot if this Novel is better than Author's POV and in my opinion Its wayyyyy better you can see how much and that's even an understaitment whole dialoges,lore,Main Characters,everything that APOV was good at AOTC does better, It doesn't even sometimes feel like its the same Author because of how fast and much he inproved If Anyone wondering if they should pick it up, I would say wait till this novel end's because you will suffer for having to wait for peak everyday

1mth
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Jarvisss

Where did such a high grade come from? This shit is not worthy of a rating above 2.9. Most of the book is how the hero suffers and overcomes himself. The author probably considers himself a genius and that it develops the hero, but after looking at the comments, he will see that this is the most garbage that is here, because when this happens from time to time, it helps the plot, but when the humiliation and pain of the main character is the whole plot, it is better to finish writing. The main character and the enemy have level 4, the hero also has a movement technique. But while she managed to overcome the whole arena and get to the main character, he couldn't even take a step? I haven't read anything more stupid for a long time. This is at the same level of idiocy as the fact that he is in a hurry to partially create a domain, instead of calmly understanding over time what suits him and needs more. And why is he ruining his future? For the sake of a reward, which he doesn't even know anything about.

1mth
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Z77
LV 4 Badge

okay, first of all I don't post reviews for any novels. I just tell my opinion. take it or leave it. The novel is good. Not like it's the best I've ever read, for example ORV, TBATE etc.. But this has really become one of my favourites now. I had read up to the recent chapter like 450 or something and the flow of the story is super natural and unique. It isn't a copy of anything, it has its own style and that's what makes it more interesting to read for me. The first thing I've ever done after waking up was reading something or watching something interesting so that I won't just sleep again. Now, I wake up and check whether the chapter was released and he didn't disappoint, since the update stability is always good. I know Webnovel has more cliche novels and boring ones. But this one is worth your time. That's what I think guys Ah, right. His other novel is also very good.

1mth
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potatomashed

I'll be real honest. The writing feels so amateur-ish in the sense that the author knows how to write but for the life of me, I cannot understand why he chose to write THIS particular way. It feels like I'm reading a fantasy book for kids. The writing is off-putting. All the unnecessary SFX instead of describing properly. All the weird sentence structures. Sometimes, there is not even a sentence. It's just small words. Single words would constantly take up lines, endlessly. Idk what exactly the author is thinking writing like this. Because of this very reason, I cannot focus. It's very disruptive. The narration is so unreliable. Sometimes, the surrounding descriptions don't feel enough either. It's very small sentences or lines. I tried hard to like this but I cannot. All the good reviews seem to be okay with this so maybe I'm the bad guy? I don't know.

2mth
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arab_stor_1412

A truly remarkable novel with character development, comedy, world-building, drama, and mystery that made me genuinely consider this one of the best novels released this year.

2mth
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Humanchaos

A very enjoyable novel with the potential to be one of the best I’ve read, thanks to its world-building and character development. This is truly a peak project!

2mth
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Forecaster001

Your novel is truly excellent and beautiful. The development of events and characters is incredibly well done, the mystery is truly captivating, and the detailed world-building is outstanding. You are truly talented, my friend. Keep going!👏👏😎

2mth
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Kleinreis

A truly remarkable novel, from the protagonist to the supporting characters, with story development and mystery. I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!⁦^⁠_⁠^⁩⁦^⁠_⁠^⁩

2mth
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Jian_Zhi

This novel should be up there in the top 5 instead of current place. Everything bout this novel is perfect..

2mth
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OgoWise

This is my first time writing a review. Book is 👌 amazing. The Characters are fleshed out. The male lead has a good head on his shoulder. The female lead is just so cute. she is the perfect blend of strong and Innocent without being naive. I love her so much. And I'm so giddy about the romance. Leon is also such a darling. Anyway, the characters are great in their own way. And they have such Interesting background stories. You won't miss out with this one?

2mth
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salo4_games

A novel that has really great potential. If the writer continues in this manner, he will surpass his previous novel in many aspects. Keep going, writer. I support you.^_^

2mth
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DaoisthTqAAs

The Forgotten Minds arc was really unbearable for me. Some people may disagree with me, but having a sudden transition into a naive and whiny MC really ticked me off. Aside for that, author cooked hard with this one. Perfect balance between humor, adventure, intensity, and mystery.

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kraxzzz

really good but need a slower pace everything is happening soo fast and the pace needs to be a bit slow with more filler and chapters like the acting part but overall a 5 star for me i really enjoyed it

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Common_Man_8597

if you like TAPOV , you will SURELY like this book Even more than TAPOV

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Breckie_Smith

Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare

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MatrixUnknown

I could spend 10 minutes hyping this up but I’m just going to summarize my opinion of this work in one word, beautiful.

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Kilo_Yin

Overall, very amazing storyline. The author is very good with twists and reveals and it keeps you engaged and excited most of the time.

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