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レビューを書くThis novel should be up there in the top 5 instead of current place. Everything bout this novel is perfect..
This is my first time writing a review. Book is 👌 amazing. The Characters are fleshed out. The male lead has a good head on his shoulder. The female lead is just so cute. she is the perfect blend of strong and Innocent without being naive. I love her so much. And I'm so giddy about the romance. Leon is also such a darling. Anyway, the characters are great in their own way. And they have such Interesting background stories. You won't miss out with this one?
A novel that has really great potential. If the writer continues in this manner, he will surpass his previous novel in many aspects. Keep going, writer. I support you.^_^
The Forgotten Minds arc was really unbearable for me. Some people may disagree with me, but having a sudden transition into a naive and whiny MC really ticked me off. Aside for that, author cooked hard with this one. Perfect balance between humor, adventure, intensity, and mystery.
ネタバレを明かすreally good but need a slower pace everything is happening soo fast and the pace needs to be a bit slow with more filler and chapters like the acting part but overall a 5 star for me i really enjoyed it
Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare
I could spend 10 minutes hyping this up but I’m just going to summarize my opinion of this work in one word, beautiful.
ネタバレを明かすOverall, very amazing storyline. The author is very good with twists and reveals and it keeps you engaged and excited most of the time.
I will not lie. This novel is just bad writing. Plane and simple. . . Everything feels rushed. I can tell from reading each chapter that the author uploaded them without any reviewing or editing or proofreading, it's like he just wrote the chapters and uploaded them like that. It is truly disappointing because I actually liked his previous novel, The Author's POV, and expected this new 'novel' of his to be just as good, or even better than the first one. I was wrong. There are a few interesting fight scenes, there is a lot of setup and major potential for later developments for some of the established concepts, but it cannot make up for the bad story since the author never follows through with his ideas, making the story inconsistent and full of plot holes. The story ends up being boring, and with no real stakes. And it doesn't help that, on one the hand,the writting is awkward and poorly executed. And on the other hand, the characters -- the MC particularly -- have no drive, personality, or actual logic, they are not even the slightest bit relatable. No, It doesn't matter how much the Mc may suffer and struggle through something, I cannot care for him if there are, again, no real stakes, and consequences for his actions. He can do anything he wants and nothing will happen. I struggle to believe this is the same author who wrote TAPOV. I don't know what happened to him to write something of such poor quality, compared to his first novel which, in my opinion, was really good, but I hope he gets his act together and write something better. He should sit down, think through and note down everything he plans for his novel, only then will he be able to salvage this calamity.
It's absolutely a fantastic novel. Author, your work is awasome, I wish you continue doing that do you like.
Glad to be the 200th review to this masterpiece. On my side I see no imperfections whatsoever, some readers be saying its slow or get mad at the beginning then proceed to hate or give bad reviews if only they could read further. The power system is so UNIQUE!!!
Whaoued then disappointed. This sums up my relationship with this book. At first( and even now), I really liked it. But now ,there are just too much things I don’t like about it to go any further. Pros : - The writing quality is great( I do not remember spotting any mistake). - The plot is intriging and the story is full of mysteries and twists. - You can jump chapters without worrying about being unable to understand. It’s not like the author is redundant with informations , but when you read an advanced chapter, even without having read tens of chapters prior to it , you can still get the key parts of what happened and where the story is headed . - The Mc makes plans to get what he wants( and there are unforseen variables to mess it up) - Thank you author for not having written Aoife as a stereotypical tsundere-girl-who looks-down- on- the -Mc-first( I like how the author made her reflect about her own strengh instead of making her antagonise Julien in every ways , even if she thinks he is unworthy of being the black star). - Jullien is not a sidekick kind of Mc. He is not obssessed with keeping Leon in the limelight( contrary to Ren dover which is one of the major reasons why I disliked the author’s pov). - The set ups are good( was looking forward to Julien meeting 'his' family) - The author doesn’t info dump us like he did in his other book. Cons : - The writing style is too melodramatic. One of the story’s main themes is emotions. But I don’t feel the emotions the author write about when I read it. I think it’s because there are expressed in a long-winded and overdramatic way. And it doesn’t help that the author always puts Mc through gruesome sufferings . - The Mc is always " on the verge of dying". The author loves to write about how Mc is giving his all in this or that situation but it’s hard to care about it the way we should when it happens everytime. It’s to the point I just feel annoyed each time he says he is on the" verge of dying". Sure it’s motivating to read about an Mc who is hardworking and pushes back his limites. But when things are always the same : 1. It feels like you do not progress at all 2. It’s emotionally taxing to read about someone's misery every chapter. 3.If there are no major / irreversible drawbacks to pushing oneself so hard , it just feels like plot armor. Moreover , the pace the author chose makes the reading experience even more tiring. -The rythm of the chapters is not that dynamic( in backstories especially). The book's pace is not a problem in general because there are many action scenes ( training or combat) and we discover characters or hidden informations etc etc. But when we get into backstories... This together with the writing makes it hard to care( aside from Jullien and Leon’s backstories, the others just felt too tedious to read through). It doesn’t help that some characters are just far too less interesting to me , for me to read / care about their past( Delilah I'm sorry). -The characters feel a bit shallow. There is character growth for leon , jullien ,delilah, Aoife and kiera. But it doesn’t feel compelling to me. Maybe it’s because of the fact that Julien doesn’t interact with them much and in a meaningful enough way for it to feel real. I don’t really know. But they all( even julien) lack a little something to feel true. There are also characters like evelyn whom i and the story do not care about . - No breathing room between arcs: After each battle arc, there is... Another battle arc ! The only arc that can be considered a resting one is the theater arc( and even if it wasn’t as high as in other arcs , there was tension ). I believe an arc can still be interesting even if the tension is not that high. Also , one of my most hated tropes is used during an entire arc: amnesia!!! - The power system is strange : I don’t get why julien does not get any exp when he makes jokes. Conclusion? I think it’s a good book; just not my cup of tea
Great novel and the mystery building up around the past present and future is too intriguing its just that I personally would like Emmet to follow the path of jack of all traits but master of none as his domain basically allows him to a close combatant like leon, his curse and emotive magic with his bone (aether strings) should probably allow him to be marionette and possibly with the last two bone slots remaining he could become a mage that can control or copy and use all elements like how angel controlled Aoife to do it during the tournament and he already is beast master with Owl-might amd pebble. Just a suggestion to author nothing much. 😇😇😅 I know its too long of a review but cheer up mate and publish more works like this and the previous one and enlighten me with another perspective . After all its all about perspectivep!?!😎😎
ネタバレを明かすcaptivating storyline and creative plot twists. Writing is also very descriptive and also describes sound effects clearly. The background of the world is unique and complicated, and interesting information is revealed bit by bit along the way. there are many unexpected plot twists along the way. also many funny parts, even in serious settings. an area for improvement is spelling errors and such. though, overall writing is coherent and flows together smoothly. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
man how come i cant enjoy this author's works at all 😭😭 i dont have money to read more but i dont want to continue either. author's pov was mostly info dump but this one gives info too low. also the part where mc first used his powers just came out of nowhere and somehow "he knew what he had to do" just cause he experienced a little of it. i find mc so boring too. he's like this very chill character whose character is defined by the side characters than have any depth of his own. also i dislike it when it novels have nothing interesting going on...emotions usage is nice for powers but it's lacking up to where i read
It was alright. The power system was unique but beyond that, I'm not a fan. Maybe this simplistic writing isn't for me. I like things being detailed but this is written like a story boarded webtoon. Plot is okay, and MC is...well he's not hate able but he's just there. I'm not invested in the world building and story. Not for me
The end of this story seems far away, however it is so good that I can't stop reading it every day. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
currently at ch 349 and would just like to say great novel great character great mc and good world building also if delilah is not the fl I am not reading it anymore
Although we are still at the beginning of this novel, what I like is the pace of the novel Each arc ends in 100 chapters and does not contain any unnecessary fillers The characters of this novel are very real and attractive to the extent that I like them all On the other hand, the idea of emotional magic is a new and fun idea for me, and the secrets behind the world and the main character make everything more interesting for me. Definitely, if it continues like this until the end of the story, it will be the best novel I have read 10/10 for me A special novel
Honestly i would have quit if it was not for the author's previous work.And I am glad i didn't. The start was brutal and the mc was not to my taste but the character development by 70 chs, was through the roof and by ch 200, ohh boy i was hook. Author, your works are definitely in another class. But the part about theatre when the world background has the magical technology to produce movies feel kind of immature and like a plothole. It would have been better if you tried that part with cinemas instead of theatre. All else was amazing. Keep up the good work.
A truly remarkable novel, from the protagonist to the supporting characters, with story development and mystery. I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!^_^^_^
This novel should be up there in the top 5 instead of current place. Everything bout this novel is perfect..
This is my first time writing a review. Book is 👌 amazing. The Characters are fleshed out. The male lead has a good head on his shoulder. The female lead is just so cute. she is the perfect blend of strong and Innocent without being naive. I love her so much. And I'm so giddy about the romance. Leon is also such a darling. Anyway, the characters are great in their own way. And they have such Interesting background stories. You won't miss out with this one?
A novel that has really great potential. If the writer continues in this manner, he will surpass his previous novel in many aspects. Keep going, writer. I support you.^_^
The Forgotten Minds arc was really unbearable for me. Some people may disagree with me, but having a sudden transition into a naive and whiny MC really ticked me off. Aside for that, author cooked hard with this one. Perfect balance between humor, adventure, intensity, and mystery.
ネタバレを明かすreally good but need a slower pace everything is happening soo fast and the pace needs to be a bit slow with more filler and chapters like the acting part but overall a 5 star for me i really enjoyed it
Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare
I could spend 10 minutes hyping this up but I’m just going to summarize my opinion of this work in one word, beautiful.
ネタバレを明かすOverall, very amazing storyline. The author is very good with twists and reveals and it keeps you engaged and excited most of the time.
I will not lie. This novel is just bad writing. Plane and simple. . . Everything feels rushed. I can tell from reading each chapter that the author uploaded them without any reviewing or editing or proofreading, it's like he just wrote the chapters and uploaded them like that. It is truly disappointing because I actually liked his previous novel, The Author's POV, and expected this new 'novel' of his to be just as good, or even better than the first one. I was wrong. There are a few interesting fight scenes, there is a lot of setup and major potential for later developments for some of the established concepts, but it cannot make up for the bad story since the author never follows through with his ideas, making the story inconsistent and full of plot holes. The story ends up being boring, and with no real stakes. And it doesn't help that, on one the hand,the writting is awkward and poorly executed. And on the other hand, the characters -- the MC particularly -- have no drive, personality, or actual logic, they are not even the slightest bit relatable. No, It doesn't matter how much the Mc may suffer and struggle through something, I cannot care for him if there are, again, no real stakes, and consequences for his actions. He can do anything he wants and nothing will happen. I struggle to believe this is the same author who wrote TAPOV. I don't know what happened to him to write something of such poor quality, compared to his first novel which, in my opinion, was really good, but I hope he gets his act together and write something better. He should sit down, think through and note down everything he plans for his novel, only then will he be able to salvage this calamity.
It's absolutely a fantastic novel. Author, your work is awasome, I wish you continue doing that do you like.
Glad to be the 200th review to this masterpiece. On my side I see no imperfections whatsoever, some readers be saying its slow or get mad at the beginning then proceed to hate or give bad reviews if only they could read further. The power system is so UNIQUE!!!
Whaoued then disappointed. This sums up my relationship with this book. At first( and even now), I really liked it. But now ,there are just too much things I don’t like about it to go any further. Pros : - The writing quality is great( I do not remember spotting any mistake). - The plot is intriging and the story is full of mysteries and twists. - You can jump chapters without worrying about being unable to understand. It’s not like the author is redundant with informations , but when you read an advanced chapter, even without having read tens of chapters prior to it , you can still get the key parts of what happened and where the story is headed . - The Mc makes plans to get what he wants( and there are unforseen variables to mess it up) - Thank you author for not having written Aoife as a stereotypical tsundere-girl-who looks-down- on- the -Mc-first( I like how the author made her reflect about her own strengh instead of making her antagonise Julien in every ways , even if she thinks he is unworthy of being the black star). - Jullien is not a sidekick kind of Mc. He is not obssessed with keeping Leon in the limelight( contrary to Ren dover which is one of the major reasons why I disliked the author’s pov). - The set ups are good( was looking forward to Julien meeting 'his' family) - The author doesn’t info dump us like he did in his other book. Cons : - The writing style is too melodramatic. One of the story’s main themes is emotions. But I don’t feel the emotions the author write about when I read it. I think it’s because there are expressed in a long-winded and overdramatic way. And it doesn’t help that the author always puts Mc through gruesome sufferings . - The Mc is always " on the verge of dying". The author loves to write about how Mc is giving his all in this or that situation but it’s hard to care about it the way we should when it happens everytime. It’s to the point I just feel annoyed each time he says he is on the" verge of dying". Sure it’s motivating to read about an Mc who is hardworking and pushes back his limites. But when things are always the same : 1. It feels like you do not progress at all 2. It’s emotionally taxing to read about someone's misery every chapter. 3.If there are no major / irreversible drawbacks to pushing oneself so hard , it just feels like plot armor. Moreover , the pace the author chose makes the reading experience even more tiring. -The rythm of the chapters is not that dynamic( in backstories especially). The book's pace is not a problem in general because there are many action scenes ( training or combat) and we discover characters or hidden informations etc etc. But when we get into backstories... This together with the writing makes it hard to care( aside from Jullien and Leon’s backstories, the others just felt too tedious to read through). It doesn’t help that some characters are just far too less interesting to me , for me to read / care about their past( Delilah I'm sorry). -The characters feel a bit shallow. There is character growth for leon , jullien ,delilah, Aoife and kiera. But it doesn’t feel compelling to me. Maybe it’s because of the fact that Julien doesn’t interact with them much and in a meaningful enough way for it to feel real. I don’t really know. But they all( even julien) lack a little something to feel true. There are also characters like evelyn whom i and the story do not care about . - No breathing room between arcs: After each battle arc, there is... Another battle arc ! The only arc that can be considered a resting one is the theater arc( and even if it wasn’t as high as in other arcs , there was tension ). I believe an arc can still be interesting even if the tension is not that high. Also , one of my most hated tropes is used during an entire arc: amnesia!!! - The power system is strange : I don’t get why julien does not get any exp when he makes jokes. Conclusion? I think it’s a good book; just not my cup of tea
Great novel and the mystery building up around the past present and future is too intriguing its just that I personally would like Emmet to follow the path of jack of all traits but master of none as his domain basically allows him to a close combatant like leon, his curse and emotive magic with his bone (aether strings) should probably allow him to be marionette and possibly with the last two bone slots remaining he could become a mage that can control or copy and use all elements like how angel controlled Aoife to do it during the tournament and he already is beast master with Owl-might amd pebble. Just a suggestion to author nothing much. 😇😇😅 I know its too long of a review but cheer up mate and publish more works like this and the previous one and enlighten me with another perspective . After all its all about perspectivep!?!😎😎
ネタバレを明かすcaptivating storyline and creative plot twists. Writing is also very descriptive and also describes sound effects clearly. The background of the world is unique and complicated, and interesting information is revealed bit by bit along the way. there are many unexpected plot twists along the way. also many funny parts, even in serious settings. an area for improvement is spelling errors and such. though, overall writing is coherent and flows together smoothly. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
man how come i cant enjoy this author's works at all 😭😭 i dont have money to read more but i dont want to continue either. author's pov was mostly info dump but this one gives info too low. also the part where mc first used his powers just came out of nowhere and somehow "he knew what he had to do" just cause he experienced a little of it. i find mc so boring too. he's like this very chill character whose character is defined by the side characters than have any depth of his own. also i dislike it when it novels have nothing interesting going on...emotions usage is nice for powers but it's lacking up to where i read
It was alright. The power system was unique but beyond that, I'm not a fan. Maybe this simplistic writing isn't for me. I like things being detailed but this is written like a story boarded webtoon. Plot is okay, and MC is...well he's not hate able but he's just there. I'm not invested in the world building and story. Not for me
The end of this story seems far away, however it is so good that I can't stop reading it every day. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
currently at ch 349 and would just like to say great novel great character great mc and good world building also if delilah is not the fl I am not reading it anymore
Although we are still at the beginning of this novel, what I like is the pace of the novel Each arc ends in 100 chapters and does not contain any unnecessary fillers The characters of this novel are very real and attractive to the extent that I like them all On the other hand, the idea of emotional magic is a new and fun idea for me, and the secrets behind the world and the main character make everything more interesting for me. Definitely, if it continues like this until the end of the story, it will be the best novel I have read 10/10 for me A special novel
Honestly i would have quit if it was not for the author's previous work.And I am glad i didn't. The start was brutal and the mc was not to my taste but the character development by 70 chs, was through the roof and by ch 200, ohh boy i was hook. Author, your works are definitely in another class. But the part about theatre when the world background has the magical technology to produce movies feel kind of immature and like a plothole. It would have been better if you tried that part with cinemas instead of theatre. All else was amazing. Keep up the good work.
A truly remarkable novel, from the protagonist to the supporting characters, with story development and mystery. I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!^_^^_^