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Writing quality is bad with author puting the same thing as previous chapter in next chapter to increase word count and there is alot of grammatical errors and at the end writes lendy author comments that can be written in the author comment section that is made just for that, but overall story is good except for all the annoying habits.
it's a good novel to read so pls post more than 300 chapters in a year and I guarantee that this novel will become popular 😀.
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The free chapters are only 19 and I don't think there is any development in the story at all in these 19 chapters, it's just MC going around getting stronger. Where is the story? are there more characters? Usually most Authors make 40 chapters as free, Authors who are not confident or think that story didn't develop much would go for 60 free chapters. But here Author is just overconfident, 19 chapters of MC living in forest and then paid chapters.
tbh i don't know what everyone liked so much abt it . like the chapters don't feel that good,are comparatively short (though this may be just for me ) and a part of each chapter is just used up for the full status sheet,the copy of the ending of the last chapter as a unnecessary recap of sort at the start of each new chapter and author notes at the end .ie the content per chapter is seems low for me . not that interesting
Poison Test: Moderate. Alright then, the first thing you may want to know is that the author writes in Arabic then translates to English. As the result the grammar is all over the place and some stuff are translated incorrectly (Ex: Leon asks the system to unlock the skill: "skill unlock system" or (someone asked the author if there is ntr which he responded 'no' then 'yes, a lot' to ntr'd). Story is pretty normal, nothing special so far. I may say that author did shot himself in the foot by locking at the chapter 20. Other than that, I see nothing else worse mentioning.
Buena novel, pero no voy sigui pagado por pure relleno 🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🦵🤷♂️🦵👏👏👏🦵🦵🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️
It's been a while since I have commented sorry... But good job on the novel . I wonder when Arthur and Leon will talk to each other maybe even fight.SOOO EXCITING!!!
Its a great novel ... similar to other only at the beginning but afterwards it shows its uniqueness and I liked it very much .... keep up the good work author san 👍 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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A system ?? Why the f*** do you need a system ? Isn’t enough that you steal the other hard work ? no you have to give the ‘side character’ a system with shop !!! That Pathetic drop
trash .. i mean literal trash ... I would have liked to explain my reasoning but this novel is not just worth it.. also the amount of bot/fake reviews is insane
What a great novel I'm really entranced by it too bad I can't pay for the locked chapters as I am too broke and too young . I can only support u with little power stones and little comments like this... sorry
I don't know why there are so many 5 star reviews but it's not that good.... The narration is good but the language quality must be improved
I know, I know, I know that I have spelling mistakes. I admit, I am not an expert in the English language, and the autocorrect makes it more difficult, but at least I make the rest of the novel better.
I still stand by what I said. The writer surprises readers with the logical extent of the novel. At least he did not remove from his MC a random person who suddenly became strong.
Good, very good in reality. I love these types of novels, and they exist in abundance, but unfortunately without any real quality. Just writing without planning. I liked your work. Please continue. It is of adequate quality.
Amazing, just the writer needs to improve his English and if we ignore that everything is fine Hhuuuiiuuihjyjyjujujukukimikikikikimimomokimololilililimililimomomomimmimimimim
Someday this novel will become famous Kyoyuoyouhybybyb nybhbybh h h h hnhnhnynybybynynybunynybunynynynybynynunhnhnhnhnhnjnhnhnhnhnjnjnjnjnhnhnhnhnh h h h j j jnjnj
The writer still needs some language improvements. Other than that, everything is fine. The characters are good, the world is vast and well-crafted, and the plot is good.
Despite the grammatical and spelling problems, the novel has an elaborate plot and the characters that have appeared so far are also good, so I say just read this novel.
If you like fantasy and displacement novels, you are in the right place Grbtyumununybybynynynunirgrvtvtvtvtbybybynyjynynuunununumumumukujumrhthyhyhyhyhybynunujununununun
I give myself a five You know that no one can give himself less than that, and if someone does that, it means that he has low self-esteem, unless he admits his mistakes like me, but I have changed my effort and prefer to reward myself for it.to That's why I gave myself a five-star rating in everything
Writing quality is bad with author puting the same thing as previous chapter in next chapter to increase word count and there is alot of grammatical errors and at the end writes lendy author comments that can be written in the author comment section that is made just for that, but overall story is good except for all the annoying habits.
it's a good novel to read so pls post more than 300 chapters in a year and I guarantee that this novel will become popular 😀.
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The free chapters are only 19 and I don't think there is any development in the story at all in these 19 chapters, it's just MC going around getting stronger. Where is the story? are there more characters? Usually most Authors make 40 chapters as free, Authors who are not confident or think that story didn't develop much would go for 60 free chapters. But here Author is just overconfident, 19 chapters of MC living in forest and then paid chapters.
tbh i don't know what everyone liked so much abt it . like the chapters don't feel that good,are comparatively short (though this may be just for me ) and a part of each chapter is just used up for the full status sheet,the copy of the ending of the last chapter as a unnecessary recap of sort at the start of each new chapter and author notes at the end .ie the content per chapter is seems low for me . not that interesting
Poison Test: Moderate. Alright then, the first thing you may want to know is that the author writes in Arabic then translates to English. As the result the grammar is all over the place and some stuff are translated incorrectly (Ex: Leon asks the system to unlock the skill: "skill unlock system" or (someone asked the author if there is ntr which he responded 'no' then 'yes, a lot' to ntr'd). Story is pretty normal, nothing special so far. I may say that author did shot himself in the foot by locking at the chapter 20. Other than that, I see nothing else worse mentioning.
Buena novel, pero no voy sigui pagado por pure relleno 🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🦵🤷♂️🦵👏👏👏🦵🦵🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️
It's been a while since I have commented sorry... But good job on the novel . I wonder when Arthur and Leon will talk to each other maybe even fight.SOOO EXCITING!!!
Its a great novel ... similar to other only at the beginning but afterwards it shows its uniqueness and I liked it very much .... keep up the good work author san 👍 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
O man, I am approaching a million Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
A system ?? Why the f*** do you need a system ? Isn’t enough that you steal the other hard work ? no you have to give the ‘side character’ a system with shop !!! That Pathetic drop
trash .. i mean literal trash ... I would have liked to explain my reasoning but this novel is not just worth it.. also the amount of bot/fake reviews is insane
What a great novel I'm really entranced by it too bad I can't pay for the locked chapters as I am too broke and too young . I can only support u with little power stones and little comments like this... sorry
I don't know why there are so many 5 star reviews but it's not that good.... The narration is good but the language quality must be improved
I know, I know, I know that I have spelling mistakes. I admit, I am not an expert in the English language, and the autocorrect makes it more difficult, but at least I make the rest of the novel better.
I still stand by what I said. The writer surprises readers with the logical extent of the novel. At least he did not remove from his MC a random person who suddenly became strong.
Good, very good in reality. I love these types of novels, and they exist in abundance, but unfortunately without any real quality. Just writing without planning. I liked your work. Please continue. It is of adequate quality.
Amazing, just the writer needs to improve his English and if we ignore that everything is fine Hhuuuiiuuihjyjyjujujukukimikikikikimimomokimololilililimililimomomomimmimimimim
Someday this novel will become famous Kyoyuoyouhybybyb nybhbybh h h h hnhnhnynybybynynybunynybunynynynybynynunhnhnhnhnhnjnhnhnhnhnjnjnjnjnhnhnhnhnh h h h j j jnjnj
The writer still needs some language improvements. Other than that, everything is fine. The characters are good, the world is vast and well-crafted, and the plot is good.
Despite the grammatical and spelling problems, the novel has an elaborate plot and the characters that have appeared so far are also good, so I say just read this novel.
If you like fantasy and displacement novels, you are in the right place Grbtyumununybybynynynunirgrvtvtvtvtbybybynyjynynuunununumumumukujumrhthyhyhyhyhybynunujununununun
I give myself a five You know that no one can give himself less than that, and if someone does that, it means that he has low self-esteem, unless he admits his mistakes like me, but I have changed my effort and prefer to reward myself for it.to That's why I gave myself a five-star rating in everything