Pokemon - The Timeless Journey

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OllieZ

Thanks for writing the fic! Not revealing Rhyhorn's potential is one of the best decisions you made. In my opinion, Potential is the bane of real Pokemon bonding, as I will truly not care about Rhy if he was discovered trash from the start. I will still be disappointed if he really is Trash-tier, but now we would have already bonded with him. Potential makes Pokemon Pay to Win. Thankfully, If I understood right, they can still reach the top with resources, so I hope that it isn't that hard for a Trash Potential to become Medium (Silver) in potential, and that the higher potential are still possible for them, as it really will look like training Trash Potentntial into a waste of time. I still abhor those "realistic" weak-to-strong fics that give the MC trash potential after another, as they never reach that strong part. They drop the fic before it reaches, as they were too busy making the world darker and to make the MC suffer from it. My wish is for this to not turn into that. Anyways, as MC is already deemed special due his dilligence in Psychic training, and looks like he is going to be rewarded by it, I don't think this will be the case. I know you tagged #NoCheats, but Reincarnation and knowing the Pokemon setting is a Cheat on itself, and I hope you can abuse the knowledge all you possibly can.

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Tsukuyomi777

A fantastic pokemon story 1 Things aren't handed to the MC on a silver platter 2 He is smart 3 The fanfic is realistic and explores more about the pokemon world 4 Over all writing quality and update speed is good 5 Bonus points for No Harem Though I had a few suggestions(my fovorites) for Pokemon like Garchomp its a good physical attacker can fight on land air and water Or Volcarona for ranged attacks

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Cocoerloko

I'm on chapter 18 and I must say that I'm liking where the story is going. So I'm going to give you 5 stars to encourage you. I hope you don't abandon the story, since most fanfic of Pokémon end up down.

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Tathagata_Bose

Yess, it is very intriguing and fascinating for me. For me, this novel currently is even better than Naruto the Wind Calamity(though it is also good). The small details, the gradual development or changes in character, the helplessness (but not in an edgy way) makes this very good. Also, yes the small and large details, the balance between the Pokemon world and realism; worldbuilding is I think, quite good till now(chapter 70). I just hope that Orion is not given a huge hack by which he can endlessly supply food materials for his pokemon, and thus can endlessly catch pokemons. In my opinion, he may have many pokemons but it should not be just that he can easily supply them food just by robbing the rich and people who are referred to as 'evil'. I don't have anything against it but I think it would be good if he has much helplessness(not in an edgy way).

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Ethan_Lam_1217

So far I am really enjoying the story. The story does a good job with the world being dangerous, realistic, and vast, which are the traits that I love to see in Pokémon fanfics. In addition the MC seems to be likeable, has a brain, and has self-awareness. I am eager to continue reading the story.

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_leonid_

the only thing I can't stand in this ff is that Pokemons doesn't have names , like they're just characters and nothing more... why trainers don't gave names to them? !? it's strange

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Dakudei

All right, this novel is the best pokefic in Webnovel No drop please

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Anderson_

you better keep making chapters as almost every Pokémon fanfiction of a similar type got dropped quick and this is good

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Adolli

One of the best realistic Pokémon fanfics I have ever read, keep up the good work

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KabuNo

I usually read and do not comment, but the effort that has gone into this fic has compelled me to log in. There isn't a single part of this story that is lacking!

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Desire96

Okay, Writing Quality is nice along with update schedule which is 3 chapter per day, chapter length seems 1.5k at least, not sure about that as I making my own specualtions on that, story is realistic and world building is sufficient such that things makes sense, Characters arent' portrayed too much except for the mc but nonetheless, We might see that in upcoming chapters, overall keep it up and as always see you on next episode of dragon ball ... i mean next chapter of Timeless Journey.

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HEMANG_SEN

A very well thought out novel . The basic pokemon series is just way too simplistic . I like the way , you are not afraid to add realism . There is also the fact that I enjoy the writing style . Well... the story is just at its start , so I would update later on

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1stDrunkenImmortal

Great fanfic 👍👍.

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Slifirenti_snake

Everything about this book is good I highly recommend To author: I wonder how you will deal with it when he inevitably gets multiple of the same Pokemon also plates eggy Pokemon next

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john_mark_7956

Great storie so far. While it is a bit slow, it dont has too much info damp to dizy you. Author make a nice stori with a good history so far and i realy hope it will not be abandomed

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kovaksens

Very promising and cool work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Parth_Hadole

i am liki g the way story is progressing and hope he gets beldium from Sabrina the story is very nuce no oak legacy or oak god till now like in every fic a very nice approach and always liked rypherior so hope he stays with it in his main team in future

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BooB_Uchiha

Good Pokémon fanfic. Good character he is smart and doesn't have a system to spoonfeed him(atleast no system yet) logical side character overall on of the best Pokémon fanfic

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