Tower defense: Sacrificial tome from the start!

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sahejRocks

Shameless author review here!This is a novel that I have thought about writing multiple times. And now I have the opportunity.Whatever experience I gave with my ongoing other novels, I have put my best in this one.Now! Dive in this tower development novel and enjoy!Have a nice year, everyone!

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ScaleOfJudgement

the title is wrong, there is no tombs involved, a Tome is though

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Hekdxu

The story seems good so far and mor importantly it's well written

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Gik3K0

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NandoXD

Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

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Onism_Experience

I dare to say right now there’s only 12 chapters but I was extremely hooked by how well put together this novel has been thus far and I’m looking forward to reading more in the future. Keep up the great work 😃

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WriterTheos

Very good! I liked that the action started quite quickly and he already got transmigrated to the TD world instantly. Many hopes for this novel in the future!

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Herzen

The novel has a good premise, the world background seems okay and has potential for more future updates and twist, i can't say more about the novel chapter 44+ but so far I can only say one word "frustrating". MC supposedly has this laid back attitude and thinks he can just be the best instantly as long as he makes the decision to be better. Not properly using resources he already has and not making the necessary upgrades at a time where he could have had even better results , Mind you am not talking about knowledge beyond his ability. He certainly doesn't know a lot of things but what he has already experienced from what the Author said could have made him even better. It's just frustrating. Even still the Story is good and has good potential .

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Pragmatico

Read what was free and stopped. Grammar is ok but needs to be edited. At times the MC is called Lucas and it states tower points instead of exp when he kills enemies. The flow of the sentences at times is off and could be worded better. Analogies don’t normally translate so well so google some to make the story more relatable. MC is very generic and has nothing outstanding so far besides seeing vitality or life force. He doesnt even use the tome( not tomb by the way) beside twice and it’s in the story title. He has been there 3 days plus that 3 points he could have spent and gained back but nope he just sits and meditates. The world background is also completely a mystery at this time. Characters can’t even visit each other or form groups for mutual aid. There is no geography to speak of and weather seems to be constantly cloudy and sunny. Updates are unstable as well so far with about one chapter every few days from posting history so far. Wish you luck though