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I was confused until I realized this is a fanfiction of a fanfiction. The MTL didn't have a system, I like this version more, and I don't think it's just because it's easier to read, because it totally is. I also noticed some plot points were removed, but I think that's your freedom as a fanfic author and good riddance.
Excellent! Fantastic! A Masterpiece in making. I have fallen in love with the cuteness of kushina and the cast with all the goods and bads(none) i embrace this holy grail. YOU! YES, YOU who is wasting time reading comments, go and take a sip of this heavenly nectar and come back as a true man of culture. I mean it stop scrolling and go read its {chef's kiss}.
You should keep writing this novel. I don't know much to encourage people but you are one hell of a fine writer so keep dropping. Also don't forget to request me power stone I don't use them I just give out when I feel like it.
Gracias por seguir trabajando y trayendo está historia, es bastante divertido y tiene sus momentos de seriedad, me preguntó será que Mc tendrá que hacer durante cierta parte de la historia un momento de solo crianza a sus hijas?
I don't care what other people say. This is also my first time reading anything from author....(haven't check author's profile yet) But this is an amazing story..Good Job author.
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Every chapter of this fanfic contains 30% of the author's complaints 40% other's pov 10% mc status update 20% development of the story the only time a chapter focuses on the mc is when he's bonking. it's entertaining especially when u change a butchered chinese fanfic but i recommend u put ur rambling in the end of the chapter, not all pp want it after all.
author, I didn't like the beginning very much, but somewhere in the middle I started to like it, so author, keep up the good work. (this is a translation)
Moar and is it harem? ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Would rate higher but the visceral recoil to this authors Atrocious Status measurements I experience every chapter tanks the rating otherwise solid 3.5/5-4/5 but due to horrible choices made 2.5/5-3/5 is where I'll rate it as is
lol the guardian of the galaxy quate was used for the tittle of the fanfic. honestly the fanfic is decent
Hello there, Life_sa_Beach. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
I have only one problem with this fanfic, Author keep posting story in middle of his b*tching, just let me enjoy my b#tching without interruption.
Un buen cap. Solo diría que esta metiendo poco avance, este capitulo pudo estar agregado al anterior sin ningún problema y avanzar en la historia.
The only issue I have is the constant defensiveness at the beginning of each chapter (currently chapter 30). I use a text to speech to listen to books while doing other things, reading, writing, playing games, watching shows, etc. So every chapter, having to mess with the text to speech add on I have to skip it is kind of annoying. It's also a bit hard to tell where the story begins and the author note ends. Other than these slights, the fic in phenomenal!
Llevo leyendo esto desde la semana pasada y de forma lenta y calmada, debo decir que es una buena historia y esta tan bien escrita que yo leyendo (y algunas veces por vago uso el traductor) no me he dado cuenta de casi ninguna falta de escritura/ortografía. si eres alguien que pensaba que seria una historia típica china da gracias que no lo es. no soy ni escritor ni tengo ningún certificado de critico experto en literatura, aun asi para mi, le doy 9. bastante buena para echar el rato o leer si te aburres, post para autor, bien echo al no seguir la trama original china, ya me imagino lo horrible que era, si lees esto espero que pases un buen dia/noche un saludo de un amigo hispano.
i love the Story plus the comments are hillarious. great work. please keep it up
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I really like this Fan Fic only comment is that I'd like more interaction of the Mc and baby FIM naruto & saska. from what the author has written I love how Mc care for them and I love how the baby naruto and saska ack together. It's adorable
WOW, just WOW. This is one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read so far, The story is not too fast but not too slow either, so far I like everything about this story. The MC is good, moderately kind, moderately violent, it's a bit of a shame that there are so few chapters, but I'm willing to wait, the main thing is that the author doesn't abandon it. Success in writing to this author and all the best, very much looking forward to the continuation. There is a suggestion to make him not a settler, and that he would remember his past life, as the Chinese say, leaves a bad taste in the mouth, I think so would be more logical, and in fact he lived 20 years in the world of Naruto, and he in any case interacted with some characters, and no one noticed the change in him? This is at least strange, unless the MC did not appear from nowhere, but judging by the story he had parents in the ANBU. And if you can add some backstory, it just feels like no one knew him until he relocated except Teuchi. Like with Tsunade...
reading 9 chapter, here is brief summary of the novel, it chinese novel the user translated, however it more like director cut version rather than true translation where this person here have significanly changed novel, for the better, because the raw version can cause your blood level to spike(if it doesn't then be ashame at your self) it's good and interesting but its slice of life, which not everyone cup of tea,
I was confused until I realized this is a fanfiction of a fanfiction. The MTL didn't have a system, I like this version more, and I don't think it's just because it's easier to read, because it totally is. I also noticed some plot points were removed, but I think that's your freedom as a fanfic author and good riddance.
Excellent! Fantastic! A Masterpiece in making. I have fallen in love with the cuteness of kushina and the cast with all the goods and bads(none) i embrace this holy grail. YOU! YES, YOU who is wasting time reading comments, go and take a sip of this heavenly nectar and come back as a true man of culture. I mean it stop scrolling and go read its {chef's kiss}.
You should keep writing this novel. I don't know much to encourage people but you are one hell of a fine writer so keep dropping. Also don't forget to request me power stone I don't use them I just give out when I feel like it.
Gracias por seguir trabajando y trayendo está historia, es bastante divertido y tiene sus momentos de seriedad, me preguntó será que Mc tendrá que hacer durante cierta parte de la historia un momento de solo crianza a sus hijas?
I don't care what other people say. This is also my first time reading anything from author....(haven't check author's profile yet) But this is an amazing story..Good Job author.
[img=Cries][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Speechless][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Every chapter of this fanfic contains 30% of the author's complaints 40% other's pov 10% mc status update 20% development of the story the only time a chapter focuses on the mc is when he's bonking. it's entertaining especially when u change a butchered chinese fanfic but i recommend u put ur rambling in the end of the chapter, not all pp want it after all.
author, I didn't like the beginning very much, but somewhere in the middle I started to like it, so author, keep up the good work. (this is a translation)
Moar and is it harem? ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Would rate higher but the visceral recoil to this authors Atrocious Status measurements I experience every chapter tanks the rating otherwise solid 3.5/5-4/5 but due to horrible choices made 2.5/5-3/5 is where I'll rate it as is
lol the guardian of the galaxy quate was used for the tittle of the fanfic. honestly the fanfic is decent
Hello there, Life_sa_Beach. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
I have only one problem with this fanfic, Author keep posting story in middle of his b*tching, just let me enjoy my b#tching without interruption.
Un buen cap. Solo diría que esta metiendo poco avance, este capitulo pudo estar agregado al anterior sin ningún problema y avanzar en la historia.
The only issue I have is the constant defensiveness at the beginning of each chapter (currently chapter 30). I use a text to speech to listen to books while doing other things, reading, writing, playing games, watching shows, etc. So every chapter, having to mess with the text to speech add on I have to skip it is kind of annoying. It's also a bit hard to tell where the story begins and the author note ends. Other than these slights, the fic in phenomenal!
Llevo leyendo esto desde la semana pasada y de forma lenta y calmada, debo decir que es una buena historia y esta tan bien escrita que yo leyendo (y algunas veces por vago uso el traductor) no me he dado cuenta de casi ninguna falta de escritura/ortografía. si eres alguien que pensaba que seria una historia típica china da gracias que no lo es. no soy ni escritor ni tengo ningún certificado de critico experto en literatura, aun asi para mi, le doy 9. bastante buena para echar el rato o leer si te aburres, post para autor, bien echo al no seguir la trama original china, ya me imagino lo horrible que era, si lees esto espero que pases un buen dia/noche un saludo de un amigo hispano.
i love the Story plus the comments are hillarious. great work. please keep it up
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I really like this Fan Fic only comment is that I'd like more interaction of the Mc and baby FIM naruto & saska. from what the author has written I love how Mc care for them and I love how the baby naruto and saska ack together. It's adorable
WOW, just WOW. This is one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read so far, The story is not too fast but not too slow either, so far I like everything about this story. The MC is good, moderately kind, moderately violent, it's a bit of a shame that there are so few chapters, but I'm willing to wait, the main thing is that the author doesn't abandon it. Success in writing to this author and all the best, very much looking forward to the continuation. There is a suggestion to make him not a settler, and that he would remember his past life, as the Chinese say, leaves a bad taste in the mouth, I think so would be more logical, and in fact he lived 20 years in the world of Naruto, and he in any case interacted with some characters, and no one noticed the change in him? This is at least strange, unless the MC did not appear from nowhere, but judging by the story he had parents in the ANBU. And if you can add some backstory, it just feels like no one knew him until he relocated except Teuchi. Like with Tsunade...
reading 9 chapter, here is brief summary of the novel, it chinese novel the user translated, however it more like director cut version rather than true translation where this person here have significanly changed novel, for the better, because the raw version can cause your blood level to spike(if it doesn't then be ashame at your self) it's good and interesting but its slice of life, which not everyone cup of tea,