Reviews of Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy by Life_sa_Beach_ - Webnovel

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CHEON_MA

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youri_02

Bro love the work , keep it going 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Aryan_khan_5507

How about you do tower of God (fan fiction).

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ZERO_00000

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FanmanofRed33

I really like this Fan Fic only comment is that I'd like more interaction of the Mc and baby FIM naruto & saska. from what the author has written I love how Mc care for them and I love how the baby naruto and saska ack together. It's adorable

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ArTaz

WOW, just WOW. This is one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read so far, The story is not too fast but not too slow either, so far I like everything about this story. The MC is good, moderately kind, moderately violent, it's a bit of a shame that there are so few chapters, but I'm willing to wait, the main thing is that the author doesn't abandon it. Success in writing to this author and all the best, very much looking forward to the continuation. There is a suggestion to make him not a settler, and that he would remember his past life, as the Chinese say, leaves a bad taste in the mouth, I think so would be more logical, and in fact he lived 20 years in the world of Naruto, and he in any case interacted with some characters, and no one noticed the change in him? This is at least strange, unless the MC did not appear from nowhere, but judging by the story he had parents in the ANBU. And if you can add some backstory, it just feels like no one knew him until he relocated except Teuchi. Like with Tsunade...

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Hamzas_Saputra

please provide more updates. This novel is one of the good fan fic novels in my library, even though the updates are slow, it doesn't reduce my enthusiasm for reading it.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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shyfix291

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Daoistf9kQIN

5 stars...................🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟...........

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StrafeId

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John_Rex_98

well yes of course......my only complaint was the rants.....the took half the chapter.....

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kalyan_kumar_kk2

i am not very good at explaining things but I hope you never drop this ,keep up the good work and thank you

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MinatoSenju

I find this story good in his lore development and harem . There is nothing to improve . For me you can do the Asuma bashing as much as you want [img=exp]

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J0s3_Angel

..................Good story/fanfiction, mostly entertaining, without a doubt an enjoyable read for many, it may or may not be to your taste..............

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Facez_

it good fanfic. everything good expected Author complaints on chapters. it break my focus once I want to focus on the story!! hai ya sometime I just think u want vent u anger not made the story. so please if u want to complaints make a another chapter instead. please

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Invincible

Good! Its fanfic to fanfic )

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DemonicDao

This is the kind of fanfic I appreciate someone who knows the characters and plot but makes the story thier own. Keep up the good work

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Rizz_Bandit

How dare you not make more chaps. Very good fic btw so good it has encouraged me to rate it keep up the good work 👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾😁

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Kono_Timoda

Honestly it's a pretty poor quality fanfictions, like 3/5 . I was expecting a FF that will have the MC and kushina learn to love each other and fall in love and see how there relationship blooms. But, it's a wish fulfilment and what you get is a decent third-rate fic that honestly feels like the author has no experience: the environment is not described, immersive is easily broken, the pov changes happen too fast and the author seems to focus on the system a lot rather than the characters. It feels like I'm reading script with extra details, like after this event this happens, instead of an outsider watching a story. I feel like Ch 1 - 20 was a good start and then 20 - 40, with how you introduced each love interest, started to feel very cheap. There was no tension and each relationship feels shallow. Plus starting to feel like a translation (I know it's not a translation) and phases feel unnaturally to read. For the author, I feel like you are trying to do too much for each chapter, and you don't give time for the plot points to breath. Either slow it down and try and make the dialogue more natural or extend the chapters to 3000 words, 1000 is way too low for what you are trying to do. Great idea btw, keep on trying 👍🏾

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_LordRavenclaw

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Disturbing_Reality

overall great book I highly recommend it for someone that wants to read a nice fic judging by the development so far it's a bit of a slow burn but ....... still one of my favorite fanfic on webnovel message to author :

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Absoluto

o nome dessa fanfic devia ser "pai é quem cria" kkkkkkkkkkkkk

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DaoistRedDragon

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MR_hentai

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TheGuardian

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HardKiller07

So far I like how the story progresses, a bit too obstinate for me, but you can skip it.... The rest is fine, it's recommended to hang out when you have free

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Klazy_Labbit

came for the story but stayed for the author's rant. Usually when I see an author rant, I roll my eyes and proceed to scroll till chapter begins but author here has refreshing takes on things while being hilarious. That said the fic is not perfect but it works. It doesn't take itself too seriously and is a quite relaxing read. The interactions b/w characters seemed a bit cringe but thats prolly my Cn mc edge overdose. Overall a decent fic.

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Luizz_Ricardo

This fanfic is very good, the author just needs to add a little more action.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................