The Phoenix of Jujutsu Kaisen

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BrazillianFox

Being quite honest, I almost have an aneurysm reading this, the story is so rushed that I can't enjoy it, there are too many holes, like him unlocking his power and no one sensing it... in Tokyo which is literally the base of jujutsu in Japan. Or the MC acting like an idiot adult even though he is 4 years old and everything is fine (great sage or not it would be easy for someone to discover something wrong with him) and him literally creating a sword style out of thin air (parallel and quick thinking are no excuse) when he has never used a sword before, thinking 1000 times allows someone to learn much faster, but not to the extent that the author describes because many of the great sage's skills only work because Rimuru has skills to complement them... in short, the story is very poorly written, with a strange development that makes him super powerful from the start because... I don't see any beneficial development in this story

It's bad. Rushed-kind of bad. Not thought through. Lots of mistakes were made, both grammar punctuation mistakes, and I didn't see any improvement over the course of more than 50 chapters. They were, more or less bad. Other thing is, author followed plot with only minimal changes, like someone on Satoru Gojo's level being born wouldn't change some things, like adding new characters or killing some others. I didn't see that change, it didn't make any sense for so many things to stay exactly the same, so I can't really ignore all those problems just because plot is interesting. Because it is not. It is not exactly bad for a new writer, but I wouldn't really recommend this one. 4/10 if I were being honest, maybe 5 if I were really generous.

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DaoistjkYosT

To be honest, MC's design and character are so poorly written. He behaves like an idiot and takes nothing seriously. No person with a soul of 19 years should behave like this unless he is just a delinquent. I have seen my fair share of poorly designed characters but this just takes the cake... In short, this story is a total waste of time.

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Haku_Ouroboros

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VERMITHOR

who is gonna be the waifu.more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter

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Arnab_Panday

Well, what can I say? It's bad. I got to stop five times just to read up to 7th chapter. And I also skipped a few times in the middle. But his second work is decent.

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Victor_7740

I love this fic don’t have much complaining to do so just gonna spam s to fill up the space required ssssssssssssss

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AppleBacon

Its actually pretty good, at least plot wise it's good. The writing can use some work but I like it either way. I'd give it a shot. .................................................................................................................

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Maximus_Duke

The writing quality is absolute garbage from grammar to spelling and even what's happening in the story is completely inconsistent. I'm hoping this gets better as the authors other stories are good but they really need to edit this one.

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Murod

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Mac_Laurin_AGBONON

Sinceramente eu gostei. Não é a melhor história. Não os melhores desejos. É um pouco apressado sim sim para tudo isso. Mas eu gostei bastante. Quero ver como o MC interage com o personagem principal. De todo jeito boa sorte ao autor.

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Supper_mega

I want more more more more I need more more more. btw it's really good try to read it if you have enough time

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Egoless

Great novel, don't listen to the haters keep writing. Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop Dont Drop

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Majid_Shah_6563

One of the best fanfic I have ever read , the action , comedy, character development and romance is all great

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Rimuru_2412

la neta no se porque leí esta mierda, si te gustan los personajes estilo chino puede que tegusten no esuq la historia se china pero el comportamiento del prota tan pendejo solo me recuerda a los protas chinos ( al 99% por que hay algunos buenos) decepción de historia no la recomiendo

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MrGanja890

it was good till the end I really liked this fanfiction

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Gazze

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Nikonadawa

Noice can’t believe I kept ignoring the book just for it to be good

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K_Sidhu_2892

Really good fan fic ashame that you dropped it

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ReDawn097

why you drop just why ? thos is just ridiculous