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Thus far i really enjoy the story and the aspect that it is consistant but i have also asked several questions about the story and the author has answered them in a satisfactory way. I truly anticipate the future endevours of Dexter and i am equally as exhilarated as to what the author has in store for us in the upcomming chapters. Continue doing a good job with the book and as you mentioned in your own review, you have some ways to go in making a flowing story through writing like some of the top books, but that can only be learnt with practice, so just keep up what you have been doing and you will soon be there.
I love your story, keep it up. It gives a different feeling to other vampire stories
Writing quality 4 stars: readable just some typos here and there Updating stability👍🏾 nothing there Now story and character development Had 3 and 2 stars respectively I don’t know where the story is going It’s so scattered I can’t even explain it Author sets up something and then later there’s a contradiction to what he set up Not to mention for a fiction writer who knows karate Ah well I rest my case World background 4 stars: just like your Korean tower apocalypse novel but not yet fleshed out Overall 3.6 stars: good to pass time(couldn’t stomach the frustration of the early 20-24 chapters) Good job author
the author is very consistent and interactive with his readers. every chapter I've read to this date had me invested and wanting to read the next chapter. I've updated my privilege several times, more than any novel previously. My new favorite, knocking my werewolf system down to second place.
This story starts out pretty great until around chap 88 where there are four chaps that make no sense and then huge jumps of days and important skips like turning his brothers and running out of food over all starts great but feels like the author gave up around chapter 90 or 100
This is a really good book a great one even but only downside is that it’s licensed and there’s no where else I can read 😔 and I simply cannot afford to pay for chapters
the writing isn't good, but understandeble. the story in itself is also good. The thing I like the most is thst the vsmpire stufg is done as it is suposed to do. noting like tje norm where the vsmire drinks blood one time then the mc is just vsmpire in name. Here it is done good. There is some chapters that seems to be missing as there are time skips that dosn't mske sense. I would say it is ok. . Not reslly good and not bad.
i like how the story is progressing but I believe the storyline would be best if the mc is going solo working under others feels somehow to me
Overall it's a really fun read, pacing is great and the story is interesting. A few questionable decisions by the MC but it doesnt affect the quality. I would definitely recommend for a fun read (ps 100 chapters in) . 👌
the overall story is awesome, but can you unlock all the chapters for volume 1, please 🙏.
Nice book, author. I was captivated by the synopsis so I decided to give the book a try. well, it didn't disappoint and I like it, hopefully, more chapters will keep coming.
I mean there isn’t much to say it’s your basic apocalypse story with a mc who became a vampire. There isn’t really anything different from other stories like it. The mc is ok not that good but not the worst a lil dumb sometimes though. The world background is decent but not that much different from other apocalypse stories on here. The writing good but the first like 70 chapters have parts were mc learns something then next chapter he’s learning it again from someone else like it’s new information. Overall a ok book but not good enough to have to pay for it.
Author, I would to talk with you. My discord name is Jetlord 004. I did try with your discord name but it did not work. So, I had to do this in this way to get your attention.
and here you can advertise your novel, please tell me yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Interesting setup and characters. Slow and steady story development. Some unexpected developments that definitely gave me a surprise when I read it.There are a few things to be improved like some spelling mistakes or done grammar but overall its not too bad. Anyways it's a good read, so I recommend it. Spoilers ahead: While it's definitely good so far, I feel like there's also a lot to be improved upon. As already mentioned some spelling mistakes like a "rhe" instead of a "the". While its not that annoying I think something like this could be easily avoided. While I think there are also some grammar mistakes as a non native English speaker I only feel like some parts sound weird, I can't exactly spot them properly. For the story I feel like human inventiveness is a bit lacking. We've already seen that creating skills is possible but no one has really actively tried that yet. Don't know if you have some plan for that but I think that should definitely be included more actively instead of accidentally like we've seen so far. Additionally did no one ever try to use monster materials? So far everyone gets items the easy way by purchasing them in the heaven tower but I think they are a bit too reliant on it. Did noone try to make some weapons or armor out of mutated animal parts? Or are they always in such a bad condition that they can't be used anymore. Still I feel like they are taking the easy way out by relying on the heaven tower too much. What if you can't access it anymore at some point? Then they will be forced to get more creative. There are two things that I don't really like so far. First the "son of the sun" technique just fell into his arms with no good reason. It seemed a bit to easy to get something so precious.Secondly Hannah the female lead needed to be saved... I mean as a wolf shouldn't she easily been able to take care of some small fries? If she wasn't a wolf I would understand that she needed to be saved and can then train to not be dead weight, but alas she was a supernatural creature even before the apocalypse, probably even something quite special as her race is blocked for us. Now that I think about it maybe she had done special circumstances as to why she didn't do anything all that time, but still. Anyways I really like it so far. Especially the no harem part. Probably wouldn't even have begun reading if it had a harem tag. Its nice that you take time with character development and world building. I hope you continue with your good work and accomplish everything you want with this novel.
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Great novel I like it a lot my only issue is that he uses lightning. But that’s just me personally bc I think it’s overused and there are other elements that are not shown enough like water or earth.
ネタバレを明かす
Respectfully, I just don’t like the mcs personality how he’s a pushover and p ss y. Anyways, good luck on the book author
although I just started reading this book, I can confidently say it is one of the best book WN has to offer.keep it up author
The book is actually very good. One problem, slow story development, building up thrilling scenes. So far there has only been struggles here and there for resources. One thing I don't like is the MC drinking zbie blood to survive but well, I know development is coming soon, after all, the book just has 40 chapters.Updating stability: Author still owes us a mass release.Writing quality: Easy to understand, story flows well.character design: You guys seriously need to meet the MC.Story development: Slow but steady, not rushing us, no extreme time skip.world background: So the tiran still has some mystery to it and I hope it gets revealed soon. Characters themselves are mysterious at times..Overall a good read. Now all I can do is hope that author gives us our mass release.
A good apocalypse book in my opinion. The cause and everything about it is still mysterious to me. Dexter has a fresh feeling to him. He is smart, and trusts only himself. His struggles with his vampirism side makes me wonder how strong and dangerous he would become if he accepts it.Hoping for a thousand chapters of this book. It's... just read 10 chaps. And decide for yourself.
it looks like we will have a good reading in a few months I already started to stacking chapters good job please don't drop it this novel has a great potential.
I only have a problem with the little mistakes made a few times in writing and some punc, but the premise, plot, character and world is fire. Well built and splendid
A good read for me. One problem is that it's very slow paced. I thought that he'll find his brothers and then save his girlfriend before the story kicks off. Well, if you have doubts about this book, don't. the quality of writing is as good as it is. although little errors here and there, they don't interrupt the flow of the story that you have to stop and think about what the author means.I hope for more of this. Emotions and details are fleshed out and I love it.
Wow... Okay. This book is very good. I read TDP and one thing I like about the author is his writing style. Even a dullard can understand every single word he writes. I am not trying to be insulting but thus book was far better than his previous one.The apocalypse and what caused it is being fleshed out in every chapter. The characters feel more alive, they have their own goals (which is generally to survive lol). The MC, Dexter, is a selfish person that will want to stay out of danger to prolong his life but because of his new friends... he can't.Currently his goal is to find his family and girlfriend but we haven't gone far into that. Overall a good read. ...I suspect that Dexter is the only vampire on earth and there are more vampires in the universe...tell me I'm right author 😈😈
This book had me absolutely hooked. It's truly captivating, and I couldn't put it down. The story is intriguing, and I read the first few chapters in one go. Highly recommended to anyone who enjoys a good read
I have no complaints so far. Each and every one of the characters seem relatable and easy to understand (except Leo and Beatrice). I like the unique apocalypse setting and I hope the author doesn't drop this one.
I gave myself four stars in writing quality because I'm still average in writing but I'm very sure to deliver a captivating story to you all.So here are a few things to know about my novel.1. Zombies are not zombies (they are different in this book and even more dangerous)2. My MC is very smart he has serious trust issues due to his carefully crafted backstop which was written by me. 3. I want to make my character evolve into a villain type from where he is now. And in this book I plan to explore the nature of the human fully.4. I want this book to be stoned to death (Death means number one on the power rankings lol). Also, golden tickets are important when the book becomes contracted so please support.5. You will be in for a wild ride of action, mystery, and adventures. I plan to make this book over a thousand chapters so let's go.6. Please give this novel a chance until chapter 10. I don't know how to start but I promise you that you won't be dissapointed.NOW GO AND READ MY BOOK!!
Thus far i really enjoy the story and the aspect that it is consistant but i have also asked several questions about the story and the author has answered them in a satisfactory way. I truly anticipate the future endevours of Dexter and i am equally as exhilarated as to what the author has in store for us in the upcomming chapters. Continue doing a good job with the book and as you mentioned in your own review, you have some ways to go in making a flowing story through writing like some of the top books, but that can only be learnt with practice, so just keep up what you have been doing and you will soon be there.
I love your story, keep it up. It gives a different feeling to other vampire stories
Writing quality 4 stars: readable just some typos here and there Updating stability👍🏾 nothing there Now story and character development Had 3 and 2 stars respectively I don’t know where the story is going It’s so scattered I can’t even explain it Author sets up something and then later there’s a contradiction to what he set up Not to mention for a fiction writer who knows karate Ah well I rest my case World background 4 stars: just like your Korean tower apocalypse novel but not yet fleshed out Overall 3.6 stars: good to pass time(couldn’t stomach the frustration of the early 20-24 chapters) Good job author
the author is very consistent and interactive with his readers. every chapter I've read to this date had me invested and wanting to read the next chapter. I've updated my privilege several times, more than any novel previously. My new favorite, knocking my werewolf system down to second place.
This story starts out pretty great until around chap 88 where there are four chaps that make no sense and then huge jumps of days and important skips like turning his brothers and running out of food over all starts great but feels like the author gave up around chapter 90 or 100
This is a really good book a great one even but only downside is that it’s licensed and there’s no where else I can read 😔 and I simply cannot afford to pay for chapters
the writing isn't good, but understandeble. the story in itself is also good. The thing I like the most is thst the vsmpire stufg is done as it is suposed to do. noting like tje norm where the vsmire drinks blood one time then the mc is just vsmpire in name. Here it is done good. There is some chapters that seems to be missing as there are time skips that dosn't mske sense. I would say it is ok. . Not reslly good and not bad.
i like how the story is progressing but I believe the storyline would be best if the mc is going solo working under others feels somehow to me
Overall it's a really fun read, pacing is great and the story is interesting. A few questionable decisions by the MC but it doesnt affect the quality. I would definitely recommend for a fun read (ps 100 chapters in) . 👌
the overall story is awesome, but can you unlock all the chapters for volume 1, please 🙏.
Nice book, author. I was captivated by the synopsis so I decided to give the book a try. well, it didn't disappoint and I like it, hopefully, more chapters will keep coming.
I mean there isn’t much to say it’s your basic apocalypse story with a mc who became a vampire. There isn’t really anything different from other stories like it. The mc is ok not that good but not the worst a lil dumb sometimes though. The world background is decent but not that much different from other apocalypse stories on here. The writing good but the first like 70 chapters have parts were mc learns something then next chapter he’s learning it again from someone else like it’s new information. Overall a ok book but not good enough to have to pay for it.
Author, I would to talk with you. My discord name is Jetlord 004. I did try with your discord name but it did not work. So, I had to do this in this way to get your attention.
and here you can advertise your novel, please tell me yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Interesting setup and characters. Slow and steady story development. Some unexpected developments that definitely gave me a surprise when I read it.There are a few things to be improved like some spelling mistakes or done grammar but overall its not too bad. Anyways it's a good read, so I recommend it. Spoilers ahead: While it's definitely good so far, I feel like there's also a lot to be improved upon. As already mentioned some spelling mistakes like a "rhe" instead of a "the". While its not that annoying I think something like this could be easily avoided. While I think there are also some grammar mistakes as a non native English speaker I only feel like some parts sound weird, I can't exactly spot them properly. For the story I feel like human inventiveness is a bit lacking. We've already seen that creating skills is possible but no one has really actively tried that yet. Don't know if you have some plan for that but I think that should definitely be included more actively instead of accidentally like we've seen so far. Additionally did no one ever try to use monster materials? So far everyone gets items the easy way by purchasing them in the heaven tower but I think they are a bit too reliant on it. Did noone try to make some weapons or armor out of mutated animal parts? Or are they always in such a bad condition that they can't be used anymore. Still I feel like they are taking the easy way out by relying on the heaven tower too much. What if you can't access it anymore at some point? Then they will be forced to get more creative. There are two things that I don't really like so far. First the "son of the sun" technique just fell into his arms with no good reason. It seemed a bit to easy to get something so precious.Secondly Hannah the female lead needed to be saved... I mean as a wolf shouldn't she easily been able to take care of some small fries? If she wasn't a wolf I would understand that she needed to be saved and can then train to not be dead weight, but alas she was a supernatural creature even before the apocalypse, probably even something quite special as her race is blocked for us. Now that I think about it maybe she had done special circumstances as to why she didn't do anything all that time, but still. Anyways I really like it so far. Especially the no harem part. Probably wouldn't even have begun reading if it had a harem tag. Its nice that you take time with character development and world building. I hope you continue with your good work and accomplish everything you want with this novel.
ネタバレを明かす Great novel I like it a lot my only issue is that he uses lightning. But that’s just me personally bc I think it’s overused and there are other elements that are not shown enough like water or earth.
ネタバレを明かす Respectfully, I just don’t like the mcs personality how he’s a pushover and p ss y. Anyways, good luck on the book author
although I just started reading this book, I can confidently say it is one of the best book WN has to offer.keep it up author
The book is actually very good. One problem, slow story development, building up thrilling scenes. So far there has only been struggles here and there for resources. One thing I don't like is the MC drinking zbie blood to survive but well, I know development is coming soon, after all, the book just has 40 chapters.Updating stability: Author still owes us a mass release.Writing quality: Easy to understand, story flows well.character design: You guys seriously need to meet the MC.Story development: Slow but steady, not rushing us, no extreme time skip.world background: So the tiran still has some mystery to it and I hope it gets revealed soon. Characters themselves are mysterious at times..Overall a good read. Now all I can do is hope that author gives us our mass release.
A good apocalypse book in my opinion. The cause and everything about it is still mysterious to me. Dexter has a fresh feeling to him. He is smart, and trusts only himself. His struggles with his vampirism side makes me wonder how strong and dangerous he would become if he accepts it.Hoping for a thousand chapters of this book. It's... just read 10 chaps. And decide for yourself.
it looks like we will have a good reading in a few months I already started to stacking chapters good job please don't drop it this novel has a great potential.
I only have a problem with the little mistakes made a few times in writing and some punc, but the premise, plot, character and world is fire. Well built and splendid
A good read for me. One problem is that it's very slow paced. I thought that he'll find his brothers and then save his girlfriend before the story kicks off. Well, if you have doubts about this book, don't. the quality of writing is as good as it is. although little errors here and there, they don't interrupt the flow of the story that you have to stop and think about what the author means.I hope for more of this. Emotions and details are fleshed out and I love it.
Wow... Okay. This book is very good. I read TDP and one thing I like about the author is his writing style. Even a dullard can understand every single word he writes. I am not trying to be insulting but thus book was far better than his previous one.The apocalypse and what caused it is being fleshed out in every chapter. The characters feel more alive, they have their own goals (which is generally to survive lol). The MC, Dexter, is a selfish person that will want to stay out of danger to prolong his life but because of his new friends... he can't.Currently his goal is to find his family and girlfriend but we haven't gone far into that. Overall a good read. ...I suspect that Dexter is the only vampire on earth and there are more vampires in the universe...tell me I'm right author 😈😈
This book had me absolutely hooked. It's truly captivating, and I couldn't put it down. The story is intriguing, and I read the first few chapters in one go. Highly recommended to anyone who enjoys a good read
I have no complaints so far. Each and every one of the characters seem relatable and easy to understand (except Leo and Beatrice). I like the unique apocalypse setting and I hope the author doesn't drop this one.
I gave myself four stars in writing quality because I'm still average in writing but I'm very sure to deliver a captivating story to you all.So here are a few things to know about my novel.1. Zombies are not zombies (they are different in this book and even more dangerous)2. My MC is very smart he has serious trust issues due to his carefully crafted backstop which was written by me. 3. I want to make my character evolve into a villain type from where he is now. And in this book I plan to explore the nature of the human fully.4. I want this book to be stoned to death (Death means number one on the power rankings lol). Also, golden tickets are important when the book becomes contracted so please support.5. You will be in for a wild ride of action, mystery, and adventures. I plan to make this book over a thousand chapters so let's go.6. Please give this novel a chance until chapter 10. I don't know how to start but I promise you that you won't be dissapointed.NOW GO AND READ MY BOOK!!