A good read for me. One problem is that it's very slow paced. I thought that he'll find his brothers and then save his girlfriend before the story kicks off. Well, if you have doubts about this book, don't. the quality of writing is as good as it is. although little errors here and there, they don't interrupt the flow of the story that you have to stop and think about what the author means.I hope for more of this. Emotions and details are fleshed out and I love it.
Wow... I read this book. And I'm shocked that its not contracted yet.
Read the previous version of this book and I liked it. Hope the author continues.
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You should've just posted all the former chapters.Anyways, gonna wait for more chaps to come
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Nice
On the other side of the bed... Was his most prized possession, his gaming chair.
Lord MMORPG: The Demon Progenietor
Games · Dexter_Sled_1111
Wow... The world background is nothing special but damn.I like how the author doesn't waste too much time explaining characters and just goes down to business.Me for example, I wouldn't want to be reading about how someone failed in a math test for more than two chapters.YES! Authors can do it...The story is quite nice but the author isn't giving much screen time to Harry and Sandra which is the only downside.
yh... lol
Her huge storage space came in handy as well. A War Rune's storage space preserved ingredients, which would go bad if left as it is for days. With that basic understanding of the War Rune, Tiara gladly accepted turning into a living fridge.
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain
Hmmm... the story is quite good. Different from the normal cultivation stories I read.Different energy.Different world.Multiple worlds.Modern time.System.And an MC who is bound to a God upon revenge.I'm intrigued.
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More chapterssss... MOOREEE
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Hehe. Nice. But it seems like a waste of time writing for the satisfaction of others. Don't take my words to heart, it's rare to see a GOOD and FREE story.Thanks man. I'll drop a review soon.
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx