Name: Naruto: Legacy of Lava, Ice and Storm
Rating: 4.17 (20 reviews)
Author: Pikachu234

LV 2

So far the story has been good and the author take there time in deciding how the plot moves forwards. It is very au so if you where hoping for a Canon self insert this is not it. Overall I would say it's a worthwhile read and has good potential.

1yr 4

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Bullshitter

A good fan fic I would say. Good storyline and I quite liked the MC. I hope the author receives all the love. :)

10mth 2

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LV 3

Desire96

okay, seeing this was published nearly half a year ago and 90 chapters are there, It's almost one chapter every alternate day which is nice, writing quality is also up to the standard, character is also a bit unique, I am happy it's not a boring generic mc of standard isekai fanfics who is supposed to make every decision right, on that note, I would suggest author to make Mc suffer due to his stupid decisions he might make which is highly likely coz of his character which will make a bit entertaining for us, and for a story to be enjoyable, it's not necessary for a mc to be smart or not dumb, coz mc's of favourite stories like One piece, Naruto.. etc are just in that umbrella, and still I like them, no need to strive for perfection, plus the decisions he is making is affecting the world... you should not make all that in good direction as I have seen, Some unknowing decisions of his should make the world more worse than cannon in some aspects as I don't like everything good happening in the novel, it feels like wish fulfilment which probably it is, but that' just a opinion of mine which you are free to ignore... charcter's are given some depth which is high by webnovel standards, so is world building, you have put effort in researching, some things are illogical, but so is the original series itself, so I am not gonna complain about that and just assume chakra to be magical which it should be, Looking forward to how you make this story interesting after this point...

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7mth 2

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LV 14

GhostAKilla

Pretty interesting so far only problem I got with it is the chapters are short wish they were longer

1yr 6

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LV 4

Kancha_T

This story is pretty good and even the grammar is good thus making the story an easy and interesting read. I am surprised by such less traffic on this amazing fic. Even in its initial phase this story is not slow. The pace of the story is good since the author has beautifully written MC's training and academy arc and not make it boring. Subtle changes done by our hero to change the plot and save others was well done. All in all this story deserves my rating.

11mth 3

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Ignox_Xongi

7mth 2

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AstralNinja420

I mean just a possibility he could use wind and earth release to create and shockwave or earthquake kinda similar to whitebeard devil fruit gura gura no mi or as known tremor tremor fruit

10mth 2

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LV 4

Ayu123456

One of the best Naruto fics Gramer is fine . Character development is good. Love the interactions between hiruzen (third hokage) and the MC. Ninjutsu is explained well Pls don’t drop please update more frequently 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

4mth 1

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LV 4

AvengerV

i think the novel is a 4.5 but i really like the last chapter so 5 mmm is funny to see ... makes me feel relax after read a lot of ff whhere mc is sociopathix or want to be the king of the world mm so i think that is fresh to read

5mth 1

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LV 4

Humbuub

might as well give him Mokuton or Rinnengan while at it. Make him a Jinchuuriki as well and a Kekkei Tota user.

7mth 1

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Jeremy_Stone_1106

Great Great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great,.......

10mth 1

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Murod

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10mth 1

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LV 11

Adeniran_Charles

pretty decent so far. hoping to see more of this

11mth 1

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LV 3

The_Terrarian_5548

pretty good so far writing sometimes get funky. love it so far keep it up. .........................................................

1yr 1

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SaintPiccolo

I basically despise Hiruzen. But the protagonist is the icing on the cake. I'm getting brain numbness like this, I'm going to stop reading this to save my brain cells.

4mth

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LV 4

XP_HAVOK

great noveI and depth to the characters but don't forget to flush out other people like his family and teamates and such instead of only using them for plot points its ok to have some general life chapters to add world building it doesn't have to be all training ones to explain where your taking him also the scenes with him trying to convince people with an innocent facade is cringe it comes off like an adult trying to act like a little kid besides that I love the story

5mth

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MorTemTK

I’ve read upto around chapter 60 and I’ve been enjoying it so far, but it is extremely slow paced while at the same time being fast paced in the mcs growth, I don’t have anything against that, but I’m going to have to take a break from reading till you have like 200 chapters out or something in case it’s dropped. He’s still 6 years old right now. Anyway good story, looking forward to more.

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