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Начало было интересным, но момент когда Люцифер стал ОП, и канон ушел сразу. Я ожидал что будет хоть какое то развитие сюжета, обретение прошлых сил и путешествие Люцифера ро миру Марвел. Но этого нет... Он просто шел нашел Локи который дрался с черным отрядом, взял скипетр и сразу вернул все силы... Зачем тут квесты, зачем система, зачем это было все... Будто 2 разных автора, 1 автор писал про приключение Люцифера в другом мире и выполняющего квесты(это то что даёт описание фанфика). А есть автор который забыл или не читал начальные главы и стал писать чтобы поскорее завершить этот фанфик... Очень прискорбно сто такое интересное начало было убито последующими главами... Будто кто то между тем что он сходил а барьер и нападением Локи, автор не выложил глав 20-30 развития истории. Если сказать проще то фанфик был хорош, а стал !#₽#&#
This is very interesting concept. It's a pity that this is a version from the TV series, but it is ok. I hope this work won't be dropped [img=recommend]
Good choice with story line practically writes it self. interaction between Lucifer and Avengers is hilarious. to bad chapter releases are so slow.
Its actually soo good... Hopefully he uses his compulsion to get stronger 💪 🙏 😏
Interesting plot Looking forward to more chapters Pls don’t drop And more frequent updates if possible 🤩🤩🤩🤩😊
been looking for a lucifer inspired fanfic with quality and it seems I've found it. chapters are a bit short but that is about the only thing I can criticize. It'd be nice to see a few appearances of other characters. Maze being a favorite but amenadiel showing up would be some great comedy. anyways, great story do far.
Encompasses Lucifer from the tv show pretty well at least from the chapters I have read. But is Lucifer weaker (currently and at full power) than Thor . I would like to know his power rating because in the show and the comics he is op.
nice story and concept .....I just wish u make the chapters longer and pls don't drop.....keep up the good work 👍😊
A very promising work about an interesting character and I hope the author reduces the influence of the system on the story..................
good writing, wish it was longer though, is it possible the man with the brown hair and brown eyes was the one and only Tony Stark. Also remember Lucifer is not exactly week, even though he Lost all is powers, he also can speak any language in the universe, and he's pick up some fighting skills throughout his life. Quick question though when he does unlocked his powers will the powers get stronger than what they was on the tv show
would like to read this one but autor moved the story to his patrion page so this is just addvertising for his or her story to find here
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Начало было интересным, но момент когда Люцифер стал ОП, и канон ушел сразу. Я ожидал что будет хоть какое то развитие сюжета, обретение прошлых сил и путешествие Люцифера ро миру Марвел. Но этого нет... Он просто шел нашел Локи который дрался с черным отрядом, взял скипетр и сразу вернул все силы... Зачем тут квесты, зачем система, зачем это было все... Будто 2 разных автора, 1 автор писал про приключение Люцифера в другом мире и выполняющего квесты(это то что даёт описание фанфика). А есть автор который забыл или не читал начальные главы и стал писать чтобы поскорее завершить этот фанфик... Очень прискорбно сто такое интересное начало было убито последующими главами... Будто кто то между тем что он сходил а барьер и нападением Локи, автор не выложил глав 20-30 развития истории. Если сказать проще то фанфик был хорош, а стал !#₽#&#
This is very interesting concept. It's a pity that this is a version from the TV series, but it is ok. I hope this work won't be dropped [img=recommend]
Good choice with story line practically writes it self. interaction between Lucifer and Avengers is hilarious. to bad chapter releases are so slow.
Its actually soo good... Hopefully he uses his compulsion to get stronger 💪 🙏 😏
Interesting plot Looking forward to more chapters Pls don’t drop And more frequent updates if possible 🤩🤩🤩🤩😊
been looking for a lucifer inspired fanfic with quality and it seems I've found it. chapters are a bit short but that is about the only thing I can criticize. It'd be nice to see a few appearances of other characters. Maze being a favorite but amenadiel showing up would be some great comedy. anyways, great story do far.
Encompasses Lucifer from the tv show pretty well at least from the chapters I have read. But is Lucifer weaker (currently and at full power) than Thor . I would like to know his power rating because in the show and the comics he is op.
nice story and concept .....I just wish u make the chapters longer and pls don't drop.....keep up the good work 👍😊
A very promising work about an interesting character and I hope the author reduces the influence of the system on the story..................
good writing, wish it was longer though, is it possible the man with the brown hair and brown eyes was the one and only Tony Stark. Also remember Lucifer is not exactly week, even though he Lost all is powers, he also can speak any language in the universe, and he's pick up some fighting skills throughout his life. Quick question though when he does unlocked his powers will the powers get stronger than what they was on the tv show
would like to read this one but autor moved the story to his patrion page so this is just addvertising for his or her story to find here