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First off, the book is really easy to read, I've only read a few chapters, but so far, there aren't any grammatical errors, which just shows how much work the author is putting in. My only little suggestion is if there were more details about the main character and everything surrounding her. Other than that, good job author.
I won't say this book was great because the book was awesome and since I like Dragon ball so much this book is excellent.Please keep it up
I dont watch dragon ball but I know a decent part of it. This novel is pretty good so far, and i really like the mc's backstory. Recommended.
I love action novel😁... this is one of my favorite genre. I just wish that the chapters where longer though, but the story is definitely a page turner .
Even though I haven't completed DB, The story is easy to understand and reveals some information about the real story. Great action fanfic! Keep up the good work!All the best...
It's really a good story after all. Although the writing style and the length of each chapters are different from ordinary novel, but I still find it enjoyable to read. Keep up your good work!
I read quite a bit of the chapters. I could say it was a good read. I mean its quick, and short chapter or more like SoL type story. Although I don't really know anything about dragon ball. It still enjoyable to read. Overall rate it is a good ride👍
I like it. main character is quite refreshing. and author did a good job in worldbuilding.
This is great! An Fl book with action instead of random marriage drama?? A Def must read! The descriptions in the story and on par with most authors out there. I can see your love for dragon ball in your work and the way you structure is addicting along with the pacing. Fl books like these rarely do well but im certain and im hope this book will be an exception keep going author!!
It's really a nice story.i really liked it.but I think that you should add word count of upcoming chapters.that will catch readers easily. I will keep reading it. well done author .
The novel is based on the hypothetical future of the hit franchise Dragon Ball. The start of the fan fiction is solid. The chapters are also interesting since not many people try to insert cultivation in Dragon Ball. I Just hope that this fiction continues since I would like to read more chapters All the best.
Exciting News for Readers! The 43rd Tenkaichi Budokai arc is reaching its thrilling climax, and I'm already hard at work on the next arc. Codenamed "Kurayami," it promises a multitude of characters and jaw-dropping surprises. Stay tuned for this upcoming webnovel journey! 🌟 #KurayamiArc #NewAdventuresAwait#DragonBallLegacyofSeraphine
---Dear Readers,It is with great excitement and passion that I embark on this journey of storytelling. As a devoted fan of the world of Dragon Ball, I have spent countless hours immersing myself in its rich lore and captivating characters. Now, I am thrilled to share my own unique take on this beloved universe through the tale of Seraphina, a young and talented martial artist with dreams that soar as high as the stars themselves.In my free time, I've delved deep into the realms of creativity, seeking to bring forth a narrative that honors the spirit of the Dragon Ball series while introducing new dimensions and characters. Seraphina's journey is one that has resonated with me personally, and I hope it will resonate with you as well. It's a story of determination, friendship, and self-discovery, set in a world where martial arts and the mystical power of ki reign supreme.With this fanfic, I aim to pay tribute to the remarkable universe that Akira Toriyama created while adding my own artistic flourish. Together, let's explore the adventures, challenges, and aspirations of Seraphina as she sets forth on her quest to become a Galactic Patrol officer. I invite you to join me in this adventure, and I hope that, with every page you turn, you'll find yourself drawn deeper into the magical world of Dragon Ball.Thank you for joining me on this exciting journey, and I can't wait to share Seraphina's story with you.Sincerely,The_Mrsix
This is like a little surprise. I didn't expect to find such a good novel. Just read few chapters and I already want more! The character design and plot is really good along with perfect grammar.
First off, the book is really easy to read, I've only read a few chapters, but so far, there aren't any grammatical errors, which just shows how much work the author is putting in. My only little suggestion is if there were more details about the main character and everything surrounding her. Other than that, good job author.
I won't say this book was great because the book was awesome and since I like Dragon ball so much this book is excellent.Please keep it up
I dont watch dragon ball but I know a decent part of it. This novel is pretty good so far, and i really like the mc's backstory. Recommended.
I love action novel😁... this is one of my favorite genre. I just wish that the chapters where longer though, but the story is definitely a page turner .
Even though I haven't completed DB, The story is easy to understand and reveals some information about the real story. Great action fanfic! Keep up the good work!All the best...
It's really a good story after all. Although the writing style and the length of each chapters are different from ordinary novel, but I still find it enjoyable to read. Keep up your good work!
I read quite a bit of the chapters. I could say it was a good read. I mean its quick, and short chapter or more like SoL type story. Although I don't really know anything about dragon ball. It still enjoyable to read. Overall rate it is a good ride👍
I like it. main character is quite refreshing. and author did a good job in worldbuilding.
This is great! An Fl book with action instead of random marriage drama?? A Def must read! The descriptions in the story and on par with most authors out there. I can see your love for dragon ball in your work and the way you structure is addicting along with the pacing. Fl books like these rarely do well but im certain and im hope this book will be an exception keep going author!!
It's really a nice story.i really liked it.but I think that you should add word count of upcoming chapters.that will catch readers easily. I will keep reading it. well done author .
The novel is based on the hypothetical future of the hit franchise Dragon Ball. The start of the fan fiction is solid. The chapters are also interesting since not many people try to insert cultivation in Dragon Ball. I Just hope that this fiction continues since I would like to read more chapters All the best.
Exciting News for Readers! The 43rd Tenkaichi Budokai arc is reaching its thrilling climax, and I'm already hard at work on the next arc. Codenamed "Kurayami," it promises a multitude of characters and jaw-dropping surprises. Stay tuned for this upcoming webnovel journey! 🌟 #KurayamiArc #NewAdventuresAwait#DragonBallLegacyofSeraphine
---Dear Readers,It is with great excitement and passion that I embark on this journey of storytelling. As a devoted fan of the world of Dragon Ball, I have spent countless hours immersing myself in its rich lore and captivating characters. Now, I am thrilled to share my own unique take on this beloved universe through the tale of Seraphina, a young and talented martial artist with dreams that soar as high as the stars themselves.In my free time, I've delved deep into the realms of creativity, seeking to bring forth a narrative that honors the spirit of the Dragon Ball series while introducing new dimensions and characters. Seraphina's journey is one that has resonated with me personally, and I hope it will resonate with you as well. It's a story of determination, friendship, and self-discovery, set in a world where martial arts and the mystical power of ki reign supreme.With this fanfic, I aim to pay tribute to the remarkable universe that Akira Toriyama created while adding my own artistic flourish. Together, let's explore the adventures, challenges, and aspirations of Seraphina as she sets forth on her quest to become a Galactic Patrol officer. I invite you to join me in this adventure, and I hope that, with every page you turn, you'll find yourself drawn deeper into the magical world of Dragon Ball.Thank you for joining me on this exciting journey, and I can't wait to share Seraphina's story with you.Sincerely,The_Mrsix
This is like a little surprise. I didn't expect to find such a good novel. Just read few chapters and I already want more! The character design and plot is really good along with perfect grammar.