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Wow! Amazing! I feel sorry for the guys who will ignore this novel, this novel is golden 200℅ perfect.
Really cool opening. The characters are well written and you will never get bored. If you wanted some change and want to try a different genre you can give this a try. No boring chapters. <3 :D
Nice book, it hooked me straight from the start with a good synopsis and it gets more and more interesting as the story progresses. Highly recommend 👍
Alright, the cover in it self didn't attract me that much but what did was the introduction of the chapters were a girl was sobbing. I was surprised she turned out to be a succubus. Good work. Author don't give up on this book.
Uhmm the book is very nice. It's easy to read and full of action but sometimes I think you should tone it down a bit and spice it up. But in total I live it. I rate it a 5
The story has indeed done justice to its genre. The author has given it his best. The character and story development is above par given the standards. Overall, I enjoyed the story so far.
The author indeed gave it in dis book. The epilogue was d goner for me. I knew straight away I had to read it. Wanna see more of what Jon can do and whats d backstory between him and Akasha[img=update]
Admittedly, the story isn't immediately appealing. However, should the reader choose to continue on, it picks up extremely quickly and proves it's ultimate value. All in all, a worth-it read, good job author.
Enjoyed the story plan. The way the story is presented it is sure that those who prefer this genre will find it interesting and sure that they are gonna enjoy it. Interested to read more chapters. Loved it. [img=update]
This is an exciting read! Love the characters and the different religious inspirations used in the making of this wonderful story. I admit, the writing quality seemed a bit confusing, but I guess it was all in my head. Keep up the good work, author.
At first glance, the synopsis is very interesting as it is. Reading the first chapter brings out the realisation that, grammar in the story is, in fact, shapeshifting. Writing style is a bit wonky but it gets better as the book progresses. from what I can see, this work has a good potential to work on.As long as the grammar can be fixed, it is an enjoyable read.
At first when you read it, the structure of the writing is a bit off and grammar is not really present in the story. But then the book gets considerably by the time the action scene starts, which everything now upgrades and invites you in for an exciting read.
Is it me, or I just don't get this story. Maybe it is because the last chapter is 😬😬😬my coins
Wow! Amazing! I feel sorry for the guys who will ignore this novel, this novel is golden 200℅ perfect.
Really cool opening. The characters are well written and you will never get bored. If you wanted some change and want to try a different genre you can give this a try. No boring chapters. <3 :D
Nice book, it hooked me straight from the start with a good synopsis and it gets more and more interesting as the story progresses. Highly recommend 👍
Alright, the cover in it self didn't attract me that much but what did was the introduction of the chapters were a girl was sobbing. I was surprised she turned out to be a succubus. Good work. Author don't give up on this book.
Uhmm the book is very nice. It's easy to read and full of action but sometimes I think you should tone it down a bit and spice it up. But in total I live it. I rate it a 5
The story has indeed done justice to its genre. The author has given it his best. The character and story development is above par given the standards. Overall, I enjoyed the story so far.
The author indeed gave it in dis book. The epilogue was d goner for me. I knew straight away I had to read it. Wanna see more of what Jon can do and whats d backstory between him and Akasha[img=update]
Admittedly, the story isn't immediately appealing. However, should the reader choose to continue on, it picks up extremely quickly and proves it's ultimate value. All in all, a worth-it read, good job author.
Enjoyed the story plan. The way the story is presented it is sure that those who prefer this genre will find it interesting and sure that they are gonna enjoy it. Interested to read more chapters. Loved it. [img=update]
This is an exciting read! Love the characters and the different religious inspirations used in the making of this wonderful story. I admit, the writing quality seemed a bit confusing, but I guess it was all in my head. Keep up the good work, author.
At first glance, the synopsis is very interesting as it is. Reading the first chapter brings out the realisation that, grammar in the story is, in fact, shapeshifting. Writing style is a bit wonky but it gets better as the book progresses. from what I can see, this work has a good potential to work on.As long as the grammar can be fixed, it is an enjoyable read.
At first when you read it, the structure of the writing is a bit off and grammar is not really present in the story. But then the book gets considerably by the time the action scene starts, which everything now upgrades and invites you in for an exciting read.
Is it me, or I just don't get this story. Maybe it is because the last chapter is 😬😬😬my coins