Marvelous Twist

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Ash_D_Born

I’ m here first 👊🏿 to support the fam. Lets also add mutants and inhumans to the mix cause Mcu doesn’t really have so much content

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ydoBoN

"I managed to read up to Chapter 10 but lost interest there. It wasn't because of the chapter itself, but rather because I couldn't develop enough interest in the main character. He's supposed to be an intriguing and mysterious guy, but in this story, he comes across as a completely random character with random goals, morality, powers, and backstory. We know nothing about him or his ambitions, and because every aspect of this character is a blank page, it was hard to find him intriguing; instead, I found him boring. The story itself isn't bad; this author usually maintains a high level of writing quality overall. I'm just not a fan of this particular story."

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IINeeRoII

A novel full of metaphors, which unnecessarily complicate reading. You use this technique so much that the reading becomes heavy and generally hinders what you want to achieve, which in my opinion is that this novel is "interesting / attractive and has support from other readers". - The writing quality is excellent, with some almost imperceptible and minimal errors in semicolons. - A main character who tends to give the impression of someone chivalrous, educated and with the bearing of a noble, and I find him great but he's boring... More than 20 chapters have passed and nothing interesting has happened regarding him ( Not counting the first five chapters) , and so far no explanation of his motivations and what he wishes to achieve has been given. I think you have forgotten something important, you are in a universe full of action/events and you are writing what in my opinion is more of a romantic novel, since more than 10 chapters have been dedicated to his relationship with Ororo (She is great as Female Lead) but it's uninteresting, the dialogues are huge and he tends to ramble so much in his conversations that it becomes tedious. -The interactions with Tony and Shield were extremely interesting, it would be great to see their future interactions again. -I think there is an excess of dialogues and descriptions, that you have not been able to moderate, you have a tendency in each chapter to use this technique that you have not been able to balance properly, making reading tiring for the reader. -The upload speed seems constant and it's great that you're able to keep it that way. PS: In general, the novel is very good, I would recommend it to pass the time. [img=recommend] PDD: Keep in mind that the first 5 chapters were extremely attractive, but the speech and / or dialogues went on too long without anything significant or important happening in several later chapters.

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Albanian_Gamer

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Darkiling

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Knight_Noctis

This ff is probably one of the best marvel ff out there probably and considering who the author is, this level of writing is expected. Though I have a few problems. You don't have to portray mc as mysterious, amused, nonchalant, casual all the chapters. It really takes the mysteriousness and allure of a character if you continue to say the same thing through 30 chapters , rather than showing the mysteriousness through his action . It makes the character emo . Second problem , I would say which isn't a major problem yet but could be, is that our mc hardly struggles . It always seems his plan is flawless which is rare in a world like marvel . Something or someone always interferes as in the technological advanced world where there are eyes everywhere . Now , would I recommend this ff out there to anyone ? Well , if you're interested in an op , mysterious and always perfect mc who doesn't seem to struggle , this ff is for you .

LV 4

The_Bored_Immortal

It is a good story, my only gripe with it is the author being verbose to an unnecessary degree which makes reading the story a drag to read through some times.

LV 4

Kaito_Uzumaki

I have reached the point where every story Wicked write is an automatic 5 stars for me

LV 4

8Mysterious8

A novel full of metaphors, which unnecessarily complicate reading. You use this technique so much that the reading becomes heavy and generally hinders what you want to achieve, which in my opinion is that this novel is "interesting / attractive and has support from other readers".

LV 2

FadeKnight

A great story so far I am giving you five stars so that you continue the story. the setting in characters are fantastic. The story so far is interesting and the action is pretty well written. Take my power stones for a while.

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pingvinchik

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Standuparc6

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Zoom_user_big

Only one chapter and I’m already invested in the story! This look very promising and is super interesting so far.

LV 4

Dao_of_Inasnity

I think this story is great and is a good read but i have personal problems with it and its about the writing. In the beginning the writing i felt was more normal and while i read through it it felt like a book. Later on in the book the author decides to change the writing and it becomes sort of poetry like writing with over the top description. This began early into the book and i still kept reading so its not entirely bad, it just makes me disconnect because while i often just question these word choices, anyway that is the only thing "bad" i consider in this book.

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NO_YURI_000

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Maybeshewill

Ohayo, Author-san! While reading this marvellous piece of art, I happened to stumble upon your words of unjustified ignorant comments about your work. So I would like to leave a well-measured and objective, in my opinion(does that make it subjective?), review. The writing quality of the fanfic is without a doubt of excellent quality, with simple mistakes from time to time: forgotten comas, mismatched names, etc. all bearable and mostly unnoticeable. Your character seems interesting enough, though he always gives me vibes of some kind of perfect gentlemen, with his manner of speech. It’s undoubtably better than any isekaid Japanese MC, Chinese young masters, OP self-centered MCs, or edgy emo types. But at the same time, it’s quite difficult, at least for me, to fully connect myself to Evan and understand him. The story, as of chapter 25, haven’t quite developed, but at least it shows promising progress. I gave it a four-star, because you spent unnecessary amount of chapters having MC uninvolved in anything really, but some long-ass dialogues, inner ramblings, and beautiful views. That leads to one thing that I don’t quite like about the novel. The astonishing amount of description. While it is an eye-opener how a person can describe almost anything excessively - views, emotions, situations, facial expressions, moods, characters, events, surrounding, activities, etc.; when it isn’t used in moderation, it becomes a reading tongue-twister. I like it how you can come up with rare words, metaphors, epitomes and other literary techniques, make no mistakes about it. It is enlightening, but sometimes it gets in a way of good and entertaining reading. That is, for the most part. Overall, this truly is an interesting novel with an intriguing idea, and masterful execution of it. I hope my review would be helpful to you in some way or another, thank you for your hard work!

LV 4

Healer_lover_55667

one of the best marvel fanfic i have read