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The story seems to get interesting as we read it. Author way of writing the story and developing characters is good. Anyone how loves kingdom story should give it a try.
Let's go!! I really love kingdom building novels with a system! The author's way of describing the world with a delicate nuance really shows you his dedication to his writing. I wanted to point out one thing tho, the title seems to have a typo, hopefully the author will edit it out soon.
The premise of the novel seems interesting, it gives us much more to think about when you go inside the first chapter, there are many things that would give us the question as to who is that AI, and there's also the plot that seems to divulge more information about the world that makes it attracting, though I would suggest to cut down some paragraphs and make them a bit shorter. But overall, this is an interesting start, this would be a good story to follow.
The story seems to get interesting as we read it. Author way of writing the story and developing characters is good. Anyone how loves kingdom story should give it a try.
Let's go!! I really love kingdom building novels with a system! The author's way of describing the world with a delicate nuance really shows you his dedication to his writing. I wanted to point out one thing tho, the title seems to have a typo, hopefully the author will edit it out soon.
The premise of the novel seems interesting, it gives us much more to think about when you go inside the first chapter, there are many things that would give us the question as to who is that AI, and there's also the plot that seems to divulge more information about the world that makes it attracting, though I would suggest to cut down some paragraphs and make them a bit shorter. But overall, this is an interesting start, this would be a good story to follow.