Just for fun :> and for something else in the future
Drop Rate is 0.01 percent!
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Don't worry, I'm still inexperienced, so any criticism is something I like to receive, so don't think you are mean I actually like it.
And Alicia would be given to you when one of these conditions is not met, she would be enslaved under your name and be free to do whatever you do to her…Gosh, what are these and this guy signed this? "
Fantasy · Synergistic
Ah I guess that came out like that. For now, the yesman thing actually have something for that later on as to why it's like that, which is really nice for your to point out. But I have something planned for that later on though I don't know if it will satisfy, I just need to find a proper execution but so far nothing comes to mind, but yeah later on theres something for that :>, Please keep up with the comments it really helps me <33.
And Alicia would be given to you when one of these conditions is not met, she would be enslaved under your name and be free to do whatever you do to her…Gosh, what are these and this guy signed this? "
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Also regarding about the knowledge part, I was planning to give it through the upcoming chapters, still trying to find the right line between info dumping and lack of information, but this comment really helps a lot :DDD
And Alicia would be given to you when one of these conditions is not met, she would be enslaved under your name and be free to do whatever you do to her…Gosh, what are these and this guy signed this? "
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Actually, yeah, fair enough. Also, thank you for the comments. it really helps me know where I get wrong. I appreciate it :DDD
Alright will do keep it in mind for the future! Thank you!!
And Alicia would be given to you when one of these conditions is not met, she would be enslaved under your name and be free to do whatever you do to her…Gosh, what are these and this guy signed this? "
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I actually like this comment. When I first imagined it as well, it felt off to me so much that it seemed very unnatural and just weird. So I went with it.
A thought began to emerge in the space that floated in time. The skies were bright, and the ground was solid clouds that the boy was able to stand on.
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Thank you, and I'm sorry to hear about that. I'll gladly take that into consideration in the future! Thank you for your review, and I will continue to improve on it. Scion.
The author here, I don't know how, or why but this book has some attention. I want to tell you my readers, or anyone who is planning to read this. I will revive this book someday, not today, not tomorrow, but someday, after I finish the other book, which you should try, it's about dinosaurs *ahem*. I promised myself to finish this book after I had enough experience in writing, and outlining the story. I have made improvements on that part but far from what you would call amazing. So moving on, what can you expect from this book if you do try reading this? Enzo, a boy with such an interesting background (My writing is not up to par yet please I will redo it from chapter 1) is placed with a sudden burden to possibly be able to seal off the Oscillations that come out from the Forest that continues to eternally grow. This story has some mysterious, maybe a bit of horror elements to it but it is my first novel that I cherish and someday I would be back to revive my baby. P.S. While Writing this, it feels like I'm the dad who went out for milk!.
Things are a bit hectic right now with my life. Many things are happening. Updates are slow and inconsistent but I will try my best. Thank you.
Summoning Dinosaurs from my Shopping System
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